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Published: 2008-02-16 19:51:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 689; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 33
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Description teehee...its the emo balloon.


[promo shot for an upcoming record label]

advanced critique is greatly appreciated.
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Comments: 3

andintodecember [2008-02-16 19:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I think this is very well done. The only criticism I can give is that I think it would be more impactful if the model's whole arm was showing, although I certainly can't object to the way it is now! Very nicely done, though.

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igaboo In reply to andintodecember [2008-02-16 20:41:26 +0000 UTC]

hmmm, yea i debate my cropping. but generally i like there to be lines going off the page, because (A) one doesn't need to see the arm to know that there is an arm there, and (B) It creates some movement.

But i see that it could have had more impact with the arm fully showing... I will try to keep the body in the frame in the future!!!

thanks for the comments btw

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andintodecember In reply to igaboo [2008-02-16 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean there. Perhaps cropping preferences are too much of a personal thing to judge properly

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