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HalloThereItsMe β€” Suicide

Published: 2005-05-25 05:30:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 13123; Favourites: 470; Downloads: 53
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Description I wish you happiness
As I point the gun at my head
As I tighten my finger over the trigger

I wish you love
As I shed my last tears
As I think my last thoughts

I wish you peace
As I feel my heart beat quicken
As I feel the chaos still around me

I wish you hope
As I see my dreams shatter
As I feel the despair of my heart

I wish you life
As I give in to my pain
As I greet death
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Comments: 73

LazyLow429 [2019-07-08 02:28:02 +0000 UTC]

I’m in a rough spot, and I connect deeply to this poem.

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JoeEyeStepOnMonsters [2018-04-08 14:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Good poem. I've been there.. Attempted it once. Believe it... Things do get better. It takes time.

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TheTickler-85 [2017-12-26 09:45:58 +0000 UTC]

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TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-03 19:56:12 +0000 UTC]

;_;

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DaMummyFox123 [2016-04-23 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

time to take a drink.....listen to a final song...and start cutting...goodbye all.

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Nowaiiz [2016-01-24 21:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Suffering (or know someone who is) from depression, anxiety, personality disorder, bullying etc? We're here for you!

live-another-day.boards.net/

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Narutoismine16 In reply to Nowaiiz [2016-10-31 18:04:36 +0000 UTC]

yea right

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Narutoismine16 In reply to Narutoismine16 [2016-10-31 18:04:44 +0000 UTC]

I went there

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Narutoismine16 In reply to Narutoismine16 [2016-10-31 18:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Nobody helped me

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to Nowaiiz [2016-10-03 19:58:31 +0000 UTC]

I was once. But the person with the best personality on this planet helped me.

Thanks RobinSuperhero

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-04 15:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Don't thank meeeeee
Staphhh.

But me? The best personality? Sorry but I'm awfull X'D

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-05 05:37:40 +0000 UTC]

No.

Otherwise I wouldn't have wrote that

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-05 16:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeesh.



You are overreacting

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-06 16:28:32 +0000 UTC]

no. dont pretend you wouldnt know why cutey Β 

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-07 13:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Don't

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-07 15:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Don't pretend

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-07 15:33:57 +0000 UTC]

I fucken don't

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-08 16:08:51 +0000 UTC]

You are

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-08 18:50:11 +0000 UTC]

If u knew me irl u wouldn't like me so much XD

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-08 22:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

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RobinSuperhero In reply to TheDubstepAddict [2016-10-09 07:17:09 +0000 UTC]

JESUS CHRIST DELETE THIS COMMENT NOW

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-09 08:51:47 +0000 UTC]

lol

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TheDubstepAddict In reply to RobinSuperhero [2016-10-09 08:50:12 +0000 UTC]

ok

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XxiambeatrincexX In reply to Nowaiiz [2016-05-28 00:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Why are you putting this therapy on every note that talks about suicide. Therapy in mine and someone elses opinion is just tourcher.

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xZylerx [2015-02-09 23:45:35 +0000 UTC]

what I imagine: My crush crying over me.....
Reality: he wont even notice

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DragonessHeart [2014-09-29 23:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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MJMSTUDIOS2020 [2014-08-25 18:25:03 +0000 UTC]

I wish you would give us the Real note of what she Actually said.

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sharufan [2014-08-10 13:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes, I don't understand why the sperm swam so hardΒ in order to become a living human, and then the living human tries so hard, in agony, sadness, hopelessness and helplessness, to stop being a living human. The human is in fact the sperm + the egg.

I just find spiritual life or thinkingΒ troublesome. The source of humans' pain.Β If you only consider life's biological part (the heart, the lungs, the cells), it wants to live and will try their utmost to live, very very much. It's the spiritual or will part that says it doesn't want life. You end up enduring the pain, being tortured, every moment, or say you have had enough and kill yourself. Suicide is a pity.

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ComixThreeSevens In reply to sharufan [2015-02-04 21:14:24 +0000 UTC]

You don't understand anything at all.Β 

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sharufan In reply to ComixThreeSevens [2015-02-07 10:36:35 +0000 UTC]

You don't even know my experiences in life, and then you make such 'conclusion'. You are theΒ one who don't understand anything at all.Β 

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JTKLover13 [2014-06-07 03:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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2snails1shell [2014-04-27 08:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Please don't? Stay and work "it" out !YAY! Kirk & Kiki

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dazdn [2014-03-28 22:11:42 +0000 UTC]

No Hallo.Β  You`re showing the decency of letting the family have their privacy.Β  I know people who have lost a loved one to suicide and their pain is very real. Not to mention feeling some sort of shame (albeit unjustified) wondering if they were somehow to blame or able to prevent it.

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Annndroid [2013-12-20 04:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Damn, this is a really touching poem. So sad that people use suicidal as an escape route. I don't really blame them though

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lunamoonpool [2013-12-05 01:32:28 +0000 UTC]

No oh my god why do people have to be so mean to her?!!?

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MarpMarps17 [2013-08-12 01:17:03 +0000 UTC]

I'll say hi to her sister

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KhRoNicLe [2013-07-26 03:19:14 +0000 UTC]

No words can explain what a great poem this truly is

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brOKen-Mayhem17 [2013-07-03 00:44:35 +0000 UTC]

That was very emotional. I cut way 2 much and can't find a way out.

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ShadAlex1011 [2013-05-13 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I cried. I'm suicidal. This is very sad and one of my friends keeps cutting herself like me but more than me...

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impactnow [2011-01-02 21:08:40 +0000 UTC]

that was beautiful. made me cry. just summed up my life right now

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Whosoever-SP [2010-12-12 21:19:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm suicidal....I'm not sure if I'll beat it this time...this poem at least makes me stop and think of the people that love me. Thanks for posting. I know this has to be hard.

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NolegGeisha [2010-12-07 18:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Excellent concept, and excellent choice of rythm and words.

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kiwis-ghoul [2010-11-05 13:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Ohman. Very very awesome !
And very touching sorry I'm really impressed yet sad and sorry for your friend. ._.

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BlackPanda6 [2010-09-05 20:36:37 +0000 UTC]

i know exactly what she feels, i have as well had the exact same thoughts as her, that as soon as i die that the person who i love will find true happiness that i couldnt and i dont know if i can ever find.

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rioIu [2010-08-21 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]

This is just touching...
If I were to commit suicide, this would be something I'd say before I leave life behind. I'm sorry for your friend; although this is over five years old, still.

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darkchandelier95 [2010-06-16 06:13:25 +0000 UTC]

This is really sad..

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TheSweetestDownfall [2010-05-30 17:57:32 +0000 UTC]

This poem really hits home. It's beautiful in such a sad way.

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Brevek [2010-05-05 04:06:08 +0000 UTC]

very sad and touching, unfortunately I know have an idea of how she felt, I've been fighting that desire for a while now.

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lunalezzerbean [2010-04-12 14:30:36 +0000 UTC]

This made me cry, very powerful and touching

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Midnight12Wolf [2009-10-03 06:54:39 +0000 UTC]

This is really sad but I can relate pretty well. When I get in such a state I end up wishing good on those I may leave...

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