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HeardDdragon [2017-08-10 16:01:10 +0000 UTC]
My this stands out
the color pops
and it's interesting to look at specially
since it's line less.
Umbrella and
the background look a bit flat but
still quite nice
the colors look well with the rest of the peace
just interesting look at
thanks for sharing
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so-ah [2017-05-17 09:53:33 +0000 UTC]
Hihi! I'm from ProjectComment !
Firstly, I will flood you with compliments. Gotta say, neat line-less art. Honestly, I want your lineless skills >: O. Anyways, I love how simple it looks. It doesn't involve much detail, so it comforting to the eyes (in my opinion). The red and black is intense, so it easily catches the eyes of the viewers. I absolutely love the fact that you incorporated a substantial amount of detail in the eye. The proportions are quite loyal to reality, so props to you. The baby blue as the background makes the character pop a lot, especially since it is a cold colour. The blush is also very soft... It looks hug-able.
Now, to what you should fix on. You should change her pose. Her pose is kind of stiff, but it can be fixed. You should use references. I recommend @/Senshistock (she provides great references). You should also change the colours you use for shading. Now, this is not compulsory, but I highly recommend it. Watch this video . She gives great points that will definitely make your drawing pop even more! Continuing on, I recommend toggling with the colours, so that the piece is one instead of there being many artworks within one image. From what I have experienced, toggling with the shades of the colours create a severe impact on the result. To toggle with the colours, go to Image>Adjustments>Colour Balance. I'm pretty sure you should find it. If you use PTS and you can't find it, try clicking on Edit and finding it.
Overall, I see great potential! Hope to see some great pieces in the future <3
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gumeimi In reply to so-ah [2017-05-18 01:17:16 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!! all that is really helpful to me! i'm glad you like my lineless so much because i'm very new at it!
i agree the pose should be better. i generally suck at poses lol. i'll definitely take that into consideration!
i actually use MS paint to draw but i think i could find it in SumoPaint, which i use to shade (and used for the background)!
thank you so much!
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Roguskii [2017-05-17 02:29:25 +0000 UTC]
this is so cute!
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CharaLuvaChocolate [2017-05-17 02:19:23 +0000 UTC]
HOI! Im from Project Comment!
This is an awesome piece! The umbrella is a little... strange, for some reason, since it seems too "simple", and Meiko's face looks so detailed, which makes the umbrella seem off. I suggest adding some laces or different colours on the umbrella = )
For the raindrops, I suggest making them a light shade of blue instead of pure white, since it makes them stand out way too much if you just use pure white for them. It's better if you shade in everything, instead of just the person, since it confuses me a bit. You could make the raindrops different shades of blue, and that would look cool. To be honest, you could just leave the background white or a nice shade of gray or something, since the main focus is the rain, the umbrella, and the person.
Btw, I love those laces you put on Meiko's skirt/dress thingy ; )
The background seems a bit... squashed? The big top half is just too bland, then there's a jumble of colours, then more seem blue. You could do like a fading blue, or something similar to it
= ).
This is just a suggestion, but it would look clearer if you outline everything in black, or a darker shade.
just some suggestions
= )
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gumeimi In reply to CharaLuvaChocolate [2017-05-17 03:22:01 +0000 UTC]
thank you! lineless art has been my art style lately just to try something new, but i'll definitely take what you said into consideration!
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bonniecute173 [2017-05-17 00:47:00 +0000 UTC]
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gumeimi In reply to bonniecute173 [2017-05-17 01:36:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!! i love making pixel art!
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