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KH-Clark-Designs [2017-07-09 00:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh I can't believe you made this in MS Paint! 
I'm honestly a little scared to critique you because I know how much work it will take to make changes. MS Paint can be rude and unforgiving, especially when used with a laptop track-pad (you're a saint, really).

First off, I love how clean your lines are and I love the tiny details in the eyes and the tiny bell. Little details can make or break a piece and you're nailing it!

A couple things to think about:
First, since the hair is white, I think even a slightly darker background might help define make your character pop. I see that in your other pieces, you always put in a well thought out background, so I know you'll come up with something pretty!

Second, I like how you drew the ears, they are very clear and well defined! I do think that making them a little bigger might look nice. Right now the size of the ears vs the eyes is a little odd. Just my opinion though.
Also, I'm not sure if I like how they stick out of the hair. I think that adding a clear part in the hair around the ears or making the edge of the ear closest to the face a little feathered or slightly obscured by little loose hairs would help the look.

Third, since this is such a closeup, you have to be careful with blank spaces. Sometimes blank spaces can distract and draw the eye from all of the beautiful details. With that in mind I think it would also add to the piece if you added a little definition to the cheeks. Maybe just a little blush or a shadow from the nose. That will help fill in some of that blank space and make the piece flow a little better.

Lastly, a slight shadow on the outside edges of the choker can help to add definition to the neck. 

These are all just suggestions! You have a very nice style that translates through all the artwork in your gallery, so make sure that whatever you do, do it in a way that feels good to you. Keep up the amazing work!

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Natochimaru [2017-07-08 16:21:38 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors and expression! I also like the shading you did. The eyes are really well done also!  I love the shading and tints and highlights in the eyes. They are really amazing. Good job! Keep it up!

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bayobayo [2017-07-07 22:19:28 +0000 UTC]

First of all, I love that you did this all on MS Paint and that you uploaded it in its full resolution glory. I love the little details you put on the eyes (specifically those little hearts, those were just adorable). Really like the choice of pastel colors in your OC. Pink and cream always go together nicely, and it makes for a very cute character all together. On things that can be improved, anatomy is probably the one thing I can point out at the moment.

Overall, I think your OC is adorable, and your style is very cute, so much so that I would be honored to do an art trade with you someday. Keep up the great work. <3

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AtelierAstraea [2017-07-06 07:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Helloooo ~ I'm from   

This is a wonderful artwork! I like how simple the coloring is and yet it had such a wonderful outcome. Not to mention, it was done using MS Paint, which is quite difficult nowadays!

Now Here's what I think...
- The size of the ears are a little bit too small on the head, and the placement is a bit too high.
- The choker, or necklace looked a bit too flat, but it looks great nonetheless. 
- Well the hair is alright, but it would look a lot better with a few more shadows! I like your choice of colors for the hair though. 
- I like how you colored the eyes, and it would look more amazing if you added a few more details to the retina, like a few more shadows to give it a more embossing effect.

Overall, I think you did great on this piece! I believe that you really did well on your part and you have improved quite a lot from your other drawings! You did a really great job! Keep up the good work! I like it a lot!

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GirlyNoir [2017-07-06 01:17:42 +0000 UTC]

FORETHOUGHT:
Wow, this is really pretty.. haha! This is the prettiest thing I have ever seen! What a pretty idea!

CRITIQUE:
I think that you have anatomy quite interesting which is true but let me tell you that it's worth it--okay? This drawing is honestly worth it. I love this idea, it's very cute. Let me tell you something: I'd like it if you just did something a bit more awesome and you made sense of why you drew this awesome picture! Haha.

AFTERTHOUGHT:
I think overall this was working out so yeah. Good job!

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SpunkyCreations [2017-07-02 15:16:46 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome, love the facial expression X3

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D-o-m-m-y [2017-07-02 09:44:30 +0000 UTC]

I think this is just adorable! and you did this in ms paint?? It takes a lot of pure talent to do that- 
I love the glow and effects the eyes just really pop. Though the hair looks a bit unatural, the shading and colours really make it pleasing and soft to the eye. The cat bell around his neck is also just soo adorable. Its amazing! so keep p the good work.

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atomicsnarl [2017-07-02 05:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Applause, applause!  And again for making MS Paint/Touchpad work for you!  I'd have thought you use vectors or paths in a tool like GIMP or Inkscape.  Well Done!

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Anna821 [2017-07-02 05:06:04 +0000 UTC]

It isn't that bad.

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xxSactaviaxx [2017-07-02 04:32:06 +0000 UTC]

LOOKS AWESOME! <3 LOVE THE DETAILS

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Not-Logical [2017-07-01 19:53:55 +0000 UTC]

If I may critique.
 This is a wonderful art piece! The fact that you can do this good on a mouse is incredible!I must say tho the ears and bell are too small for the head. Everything else is just    

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gumeimi [2017-07-01 01:07:21 +0000 UTC]

i just realized how tiny that cat bell is ghgkhglh freakin

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NickiMaster616 [2017-07-01 00:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Wait. wait. wait wait wait wait...

YOU DID THIS ON MS PAINT?!?!?!? IF YOU USED A MOUSE IM DISCONNECTING FROM THIS WOR-dies-

(Also, good job! I suck on Sai and you did this on MS Paint xD)

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