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Published: 2008-06-18 06:32:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1669; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 13
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Description Well, here is my OC Race for my Biker Mice from Mars fanfics I plan to get around writing. She first appears with my other OC's Vikki 'Wildfire' ((Vinnie's long lost twin-thought dead, whose even crazier than he is)) and their mysterious female human captain, Pandora, in my fanfic, 'Breakfast in Chicago,' and returns again in its sequel, 'Metal Obession'.


***Those that cannot tolerate violence/torture, don't read on. Race's background is more than a little discomforting**


Its obvious from first glances that Race has had a very tough life. She was the first Martian cave-mouse to develop cybernetic enhancments for the mice that had lost limbs and other organ bits during the war, saving many, but ulitmatley putting her at the top of the Plutarkian's most wanted list. Race was eventaully captured, resulting in the destruction of a Freedom Fighter base and many deaths. Her capture also revealed that the Rats were in league with the Plutarkians, as it was a rat female that had betrayed the FF mice location to the Plutarkians, as well as Race's location.

During her years held as a P.O.W. on Plutark, Race was tortued, and forced into servitude to the Plutarkians to construct better cybertnetic warriors to defeat her martian people. Race had fought at first, until they had begun to brutally multilate her, forcing her to reveil her secrets if she wanted to survive. And just to make sure that she hadn't tricked them, the Plutarkians used her as their geniea pig to ascertian the funcitonality of her mechanics.

Race's arm, tail, leg, part of her other, and even her lungs are a result of her imprisonment on Plutark. She is far from being who she was when she was upducted, and upon freeing from their stinky clutches at last, she is but a former shadow of her former self. She's quiet, keeps to the shadows, and is more than a little paranoid. The petitie female cave-mouse trusts only her human captain Pandora and Vikkie 'Wildfire', without second thoughts, due to the fact that they had aided her to escape and have proven themselves to be loyal friends to a fault.

Though her true loyalty would lie with the grand master mind behind their eventually escape from Plutark, my OC Cartrige, if only the elder cave-mouse had managed to live long enough to see Mars again.

Cartrige died during their flight back to Mars bya Plutarkain sniper while they were docked at a station to refuel - a shot original meant for Pandora, who was later annouced as leader of the crew after Cartrige's death.


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Bio aside, I'm trying to decide if Race should have a tattoo or not on her left shoulder. I was wondering if anybody had any ideas of what I should do, have one or not? Use the one in the picture or not? Or if anyboyd had any special designs of their own, I'd be happy to give it a shot.
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Comments: 7

kuro-kai08 [2011-08-27 02:28:22 +0000 UTC]

she's an awesome character she's a lot like my character luna

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Guardinthena In reply to kuro-kai08 [2011-09-06 00:53:52 +0000 UTC]

A cyborg Martian I take it?

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kuro-kai08 In reply to Guardinthena [2011-09-06 21:26:26 +0000 UTC]

no just the pain she goes through and how she doesn't let it weigh her down

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LunarBlossom [2008-06-18 22:50:46 +0000 UTC]

nice, i really love the neatness!

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Guardinthena In reply to LunarBlossom [2008-06-19 06:18:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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robogirls [2008-06-18 06:53:15 +0000 UTC]

i can relate to the metal obsession

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Guardinthena In reply to robogirls [2008-06-18 10:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol. I'm anxious to get to writing in all truth, the foundation for it is that Race gets sick, and she becomes...well, MORE obessed with metal than is healty for her.

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