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dragonpurveyor [2017-08-01 06:12:16 +0000 UTC]
I think that this has been my favorite chapter so far. I think my favorite parts where when Adam and Naileena where in school learning things and how Adam both impressed the Dragonets and discredited that Dragon bully in school. My other favorite part was when that Dragon bully both chased and battled Naileena and Adem. Naileena knows how to kick butt. I like it when there is a young Dragon with plans against humans and another young Dragon has to save and Ceep watch over the human. Although I did not know that it takes so long for dragon's to be punished. Hopefully it is a good punishment to. I hate it when my teachers get into my personal business. What I mean by that is I am smart and know how to take care of physical bullies. My parents know it and even allow it in school but when my teachers/principle get involved then that is where they start saying stuff like "let us have a nice talk about it" and for me it is like "I tried that a billion times already and that is not working". And it means something when I start landing hits on other people because I am that guy that is against violence and try to talk people out of it. I forgot to mention that at my school the best punishment they give is a call home to mom and dad or the kids legal guardian which to me sucks because they could have such beder punishment. But anyway ya I like the story and cannot wait to read the next part. Also I am getting pumuld by my own question. Like the story so far. Good job GoldenLotusGirl. Very good job.
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zoomb350 [2016-04-28 13:34:50 +0000 UTC]
I would love a picture of Adam laying on Naileena's tummy.
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