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VideoGameStarD [2018-03-23 14:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow, nice vore there. Though, seriously, how big is Leocyn atm? A dragon as big as a German Shepherd can't swallow a human whole, even less Pete.
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dragonpurveyor [2017-08-07 19:35:08 +0000 UTC]
I thought the future! Seriously. Also that was kinda harsh. But I totally understand. I know I prefer my mom to kick some bully butt. That is about the most revenge I think I like in the real world. But you are doing great. Ceep up the good work DeVoutNumelran. Oh two more things. This is my first time reading one of your story's. I like this so far. Second I fear for Derrek as there is a saying. NEVER get in between a mother and her baby. As I said before good job and good luck.
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9CWAI [2016-07-13 00:29:04 +0000 UTC]
he just admitted to murder of 2 degree
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Everything1020 [2015-10-13 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]
Its like "Hey can i eat you"
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SnowySpartan [2014-12-28 05:52:39 +0000 UTC]
Though Pete was an asshole, I don't think it was justified to EAT HIM ALIVE! A short quick death?Β Understandable, if a bitΒ overΒ the edge. Eating them alive? Here come a bunch of armedΒ humansΒ comingΒ for yo ass. Screw getting on his bad side, I'llΒ beΒ carryingΒ a magnumΒ around him from that moment forward.Β
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emotional33 [2013-06-02 07:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Serves Pete right!
Just the thought of a bully going to such lengths just....oooh!
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InfiniteDragoon [2012-01-07 23:17:00 +0000 UTC]
good thing leocyn ate him. if i was him i would do the same
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Bthakilla4rilla [2010-03-29 04:55:04 +0000 UTC]
i could imagine him meeting frieza, cell, kid buu, and broly in hell and asking them to help him take vengeance upon derrek and leocyn. buu would probably just turn him into candy and eat him, killing him again. broly would hear the word "vengeance" and flip out and start blowing shit up, eradicating cell and frieza in the process. that was way too long
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DeVoutNumelran In reply to nanda7121 [2009-08-26 21:31:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the start was my only trouble in the story, besides writers block now. XD
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FullmoonLycanthrope In reply to DeVoutNumelran [2009-06-28 04:13:34 +0000 UTC]
Maybe have Leocyn decide to track down the larger dragon and confront him about what he meant by "he was close by." Just a suggestion though
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FullmoonLycanthrope In reply to DeVoutNumelran [2009-06-30 00:55:08 +0000 UTC]
sorry, it's ur story so I don't want to ruin any plans u already had for it.
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holodrom [2009-05-31 00:40:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice description of the vore, and from the dragon himself! Very interesting perspective.
*off to read more*
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pookypoo112 [2009-05-23 02:59:41 +0000 UTC]
very nice work and glad to see the mean got his
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redbaron1234 [2009-05-21 05:33:08 +0000 UTC]
Vore?
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redbaron1234 In reply to DeVoutNumelran [2009-05-21 23:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Just throwing around some fancy words there.
Also, thank you for the watch.
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e2s86 [2009-05-20 22:55:45 +0000 UTC]
ok
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e2s86 [2009-05-20 22:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Did he eat Pete before or after he rescued Derrek?
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DeVoutNumelran In reply to e2s86 [2009-05-20 22:53:02 +0000 UTC]
after *read closely to what he tells derrek*
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DeVoutNumelran In reply to chaoticwings3 [2009-05-20 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Right now, he's about the size of a race horse. Imagine once he grows full size. XD
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e2s86 [2009-05-20 13:51:41 +0000 UTC]
chapter 6
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DVirensis [2009-05-20 05:22:54 +0000 UTC]
Heh, interesting addition of vore. Great entry into the stories.
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Drega-no-okaryuu [2009-05-20 02:22:46 +0000 UTC]
Told from the dragons mouth, this is new.
Ok youve now got me interested, this one could turn out to be a real seller, no joke.
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Commander476 [2009-05-20 00:46:51 +0000 UTC]
I rarely, rarely read vore stories, but other than that I wonder if Leocyn will stop.
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DeVoutNumelran In reply to Commander476 [2009-05-20 20:11:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm still working on that much. But I have an Idea about bringing in the dragon from the news on the first chapter into this.
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DeVoutNumelran In reply to Commander476 [2009-05-20 20:20:05 +0000 UTC]
eather that, or maybe the older dragon would be the one that caused the egg to be left defenceless and alone (if you get my meaning)
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