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Gardi — Susan Sto Helit
Published: 2007-09-02 18:39:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 8338; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 703
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Well, this piece might be better (considering the two days I spent drawing it), but what the hell, I'm now too tired to change anything about it. So there you have it.It's Susan Sto Helit, the daughter of Ysabell and Mort from the previous Discworld picture. As I imagine her. Well.
You know, I am trying hard to get better at drawing humans, so if it's not anything like "OMG go dig yourself somewhere it's some extremely sick shitz", critique is very welcome.
Apocalyptica fanart comes next. I don't have the smallest clue which song... But they simply deserve it. I hope I'll get to the concert.
character(c)Terry Pratchett
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Susan became my favorite Discworld character as soon as she was introduced. I love this picture!
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HELL YESSSSSSSS!!!
Man I miss more Terry Pratchett Characters as well and wonderfully done as this one ;w;
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S'great, but lookz like shez wearin a wig n n
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SHE DOESNT WEAR A WIG!!!!
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I know... I just said "yes she does look like she's wearing a wing"...
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OK i forgive you
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Wow! This look so professional and realistic! I adore the wrinkles and gothic color spectrum you used here. The skin looks so smoothe and pale like porcelain and I like how she actually looks like she has a realistic body figure and not an anorexic anime one. 
The individual strands of hair is a nice detail and I can get over the awsome wrinkles! The ruffles are perfect and I like the curly hair strands too. ^^ The background is simple but fitting, making sure you pay attention where it matters most. Although the shadow completely mists over the left arm, it's realistic as her body angle is blocking it from light....very nice. You did an awsome job on this. I don't have a single critique for you! Your human anatomy is perfect and everything..It deserves so much attention! Keep it up!
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Well, there are many, many mistakes (others have pointed them out to me - you can read the critique and comapre 
Thank you for your comment anyway
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I read all of the english ones and they didn't find anything. XD But you're welcome anyways, I still think it's at least CLOSE to flawless
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Tak todle už je fakt paráda, nemám slov. Zvlášť ty hadříky jsou dokonalý.
Jen nesrovnalost v osvětlení mi dává myslet si, že ona postavička utíká "z rámu" temného prostředí do prostoru mého prosvětleného monitoru ^^ (hergot to je zase komplikovaná myšlenka)...
...ale nemůžu říct, že je to š
BTW Byla si na Apocalyptice? Já tam stál ve frontě mezi prvními (jako doprovod) a když začali pouštět dovnitř tak jsem se zas musel procpat ven
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Noo, ja byla s ECKem na Apo v Plzni, nevim jak ty.... Zazitek jak prase, byla jsem u vytrzeni
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No tak to já byl v Praze, v Kongresovém centru.
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Ty jo..to se ti fakt povedlo!
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Try to imagine something what doesn't exist.
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I think it looks great, personally. The wrinkles in the clothing, the expression, her eyes, all good. I think you're crazy to think it's not good. It's in my favourites now, at least.
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WoW! it's beautiful! so detailed!
i'm not putting my pic of Susan up now.
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I like this a lot, very nice ^_^
You don't draw humans too badly as it happens
You like Apocalyptica? Nice one
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Wow! That's a beautiful picture! The fabric looks very real and so shiny.
I hope you can go to the concert! Apocalyptica has some great songs. I didn't know people did fanart for them!
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I love how you got the taffata look on her clothes. Wow.
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Wow. I think it's amazing. Your shading is really great, and I love the expression on her face. And I like the folds in her clothing.
She looks ready to bring out the poker.
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XD Thanks! But no one will convince me now that it looks well, I already think it's not at all good and hope the next piccy to turn out better ;_;
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Ta ruka nesedí, nevím proč, ale na první pohled mi přijde taková pavoukovitá, možná je v nepřirozeném úhlu nad tou knihou. Obličej mi přijde trošku š
Ale to je asi tak vše ke konstruktivní kritice, protože jinak myslim, že je to úžas - podle mého veliký skok dopředu! Jen tak dál!
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No, musim uznat, ze ve vsem s tebou souhlasim ^^ Ruka je fakt lamacka, protoze pro me bylo tezky si ji predstavit a jeste k tomu nakreslit. Oblicej to same a s temi vlasy mi to doslo zahy, ze mnohem jednodussi bych mela, kdybych si vybrala postavu s tmavsimi.
Jinak ja mam ted hrozne dilema, proste nevim, jak kreslit lidi, kteri jsou v malo osvetlenem, nebo nedej boze skoro temnem prostredi, bojim se tech barev. Zkousim koukat na fotky a tak, ale nejak porad nemuzu prijit na kloub tomu, jak to vyvest... Takze, jak sis spravne simla, kreslim, jako by byli na normalnim dennim svetle a pak to dopada takhle katastroficky. Zkratka na tom musim jeste hooooooo...dne zapacovat. Ale snad to nejak zvladnu.
Pristi obrazek by se uz mohl povest lepe, no, tedy alespon doufam. Hlavne si predtim budu muset udelat par studii, ocividne.
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Jasně, už na tomhle obrázku je vidět, že ses tomu věnovala a snažila se. Stínování je jedna z nejhorších a nejtěžších věcí na světě (rozuměj v oblasti malování ^^), tak ti přeji ať to brzy zmákneš. Já sama mám v mysli jeden obrázek už asi půl roku, ale ztroskotala jsem právě na stínování...
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This is sweet! And, Apocalyptica!
This is brilliant - very conservative, very fitting.
Maybe you could experiment with the framing? Also this simplistic design fits well as it is!
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O_O ou š..... *falls off teh chair*.... just one word: Masterpiece!
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Now I do think you guys really exaggerate 
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Wow, the shading on this is absolutely gorgeous! It's like a real oil painted portrait. I could see this hanging in a fancy lounge room or study (because of the book).
n.n Great job!
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Well, it would have to be ever so small so that the flaws couldn't be seen
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I can only repeat what others said and say that itďs brilliant. Just out of curiosity... did you use any reference or is it all just from your imagination?
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Of course I did 
By the way, thank you (all) for your comments, but there are still sooo many people fa-ar better than I am! And that's what makes me try hard to make at least a little progress with every picture I draw. Yea.
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I still adore the coloring of the dress. It makes me almost feel the fabric. o,o
Now that you mentioned it, I can see that the hand is a bit odd.
There are always people better than you, even if you're a professional.
Oh and one more thing; which program did you use to color it?
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Well, If I had a photo of thew the hand in the desired position, it might have been better
Photoshop
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Photoshop? Wow. I admire you even more now. o,o
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Urm..
The shading rocks,
It's smooth, but sketchy all the same, (I like that)
-and is very cleverly layered out.
-I love dark pictures, and background as well.
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Every picture has a focus-point.
I love the face and the eyes,
but I find myself staring at the hand a lot more than the rest of the picture.
The hand grabs my attention!--
(Metaphoric?) =Þ
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This is like.. ...critique-proof~
~I tried really hard, but couldn't pick at anything.
~It's flawless.
There's so much good detail in there it's not even funny~
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~Good work! >D
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Wow. I mean, thanks. But it's definitely not FLAWLESS
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The Artist never sees a picture as flawless,
Likely because it's near-impossible to draw exactly what you visualize.
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we don't see what you visulazie,
only what you draw,
Hence, to me it's flawless ^^
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I don't know why...but I am digging those buttons.
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My gosh, Gardi. You always amaze me with every new picture you do. Youre style is progressing so very well, and you always seem to make the best of your works. The amount of detail, whether it be lines or with colour, is simply fantastic. You're a brilliant artist, and I can really tell you have a massive artistic future ahead of you. Especially if you continue to draw this greatly.
I dont think there's anything I could critique on. Seriously. It's perfect.
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I think you did a superb job. The coloring is especially fabulous, if you ask me. Splendid work! +1 to Favorites
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Thats an excellent piece you did there. Most impressive n.n *Faves*
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Tak jsem na to koukla o pár hodin později a stále mě chytá chuť na sebevraždu, odhození tužky a odejití do ústraní
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Yop, presne to me taky napadlo...
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Jdem se zabít Meichan ...
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