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A Sudden Flight
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Published: 2016-04-21 07:13:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 4088; Favourites: 200; Downloads: 0
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Ink-black birds scatter,Writing lines of free verse
Across a paper sky.
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Beautiful.Β 
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You're welcome.Β
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Stark. Incisive. And flashes with keen movement of thought. The ideas evoked flush into flight.
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Thank you, I think this is my best haiku!Β
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Thanks! Glad you like it.
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That's awesome!
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That's a great compliment.
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Hillary confirmed to be litterly a satanist look up "spirit cooking" the emails don't lie ladies and gentlemen and be blown tf away she also wants to shoot down Russian airplanes unnecessarily starting a war open your eyes.
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Ah, congratulations on the feature! Very happy it was chosen.
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You're awesome.
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Three lines that say a lot, this is beautiful
Congrats on the DD!
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Thanks. I really appreciate it!
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You are very welcome.
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Glad you like it.
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Yeah! 
Congratulations on your much deserved DD, Frank!Β Enjoy the limelight.
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That's it?...
Well apparently I'm dense, I don't think I understand this.
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Haikus are approximately seventeen syllables.Β
They often consist of a single image connecting nature with human beings, but rarely in a manner that is literal.Β
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It's a haiku. The syllables in each lines are 5,6,6 respectively. While keeping an underlying idea of inking on a paper.
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I know it's a haiku, but I don't understand what the message is that makes it DD worthy.
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Memes are for messages.Β
Poems are for embodying the inexpressible.Β
Two completely different ways of thinking.Β
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If that's the way you want to look at it. Me, I'm a fan of short stories. Tell an intriguing and entertaining story with no sub plots for quick, returnable read.
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You must be a big fan of Saturday morning cartoons then.Β
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Oof you got me there. It's nice seeing the big bad's evil scheme of the week and laughing my butt off from all the terrible quips and one-liners the hero(es) dish out to the audience's dismay. Heck I'm watching The Real Ghostbusters, Gi-Joe, Transformers, Jem, X-Men, and Spider-Man simultaneously on YouTube. Call it a guilty pleasure.
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