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Published: 2013-01-12 18:44:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 7047; Favourites: 647; Downloads: 33
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Description 16$ Commission by *banifi

John Egbert overcoming his terror of baking to feel closer to his dad. Concept an idea fully by *banifi . Like, seriously, the whole placement of this picture is by her. I just drew it out.

Commission info: DA | Tumblr

found on tumblr here

Dad Egbert and John Egbert from Homestuck (c) Andrew Hussie
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Comments: 152

Kien-Lyons [2013-04-28 11:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I would like to say that first of all, I am not easily upset. It takes a true master of either words or art to upset me. But this drawing brought me close to tears. Seeing John baking (miracles!) to get closer to his Dad... I haven't even reached the point where Dad Egbert dies and I already feel a little crack forming in my heart because of this fanart.

Your technique is near-flawless, and truly captures the moment that you set out to portray. The colors and shading are perfection, and all the small details such as the batter stains on John's shirt and the ingredients across the table just go to show that this is an exceptional piece.

I give your originality a four because a have seen a few similar pieces across the internet, although yours stands out quite nicely. All in all, this gets approximately a 4.6 star average. Congratulations.

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dreamrays [2020-05-20 23:22:34 +0000 UTC]

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Dadbert-pipefan413 [2016-01-28 22:07:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm so proud of you, John, and in everything you do, live on for me.
~Dad

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Artfan765 [2014-11-20 04:25:36 +0000 UTC]

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LionX45 [2014-11-14 02:24:05 +0000 UTC]

right in the feels...................well done :'D

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to LionX45 [2016-01-28 02:19:08 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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darksubject [2014-04-10 05:26:07 +0000 UTC]

not gonna cry

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to darksubject [2016-01-28 02:19:22 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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darksubject In reply to Dadbert-pipefan413 [2016-03-09 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to darksubject [2016-03-09 08:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.
"In everything you do, live on for me."-Dad Egbert

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darksubject In reply to Dadbert-pipefan413 [2016-03-10 00:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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Pandacorn6 [2013-12-24 00:51:17 +0000 UTC]

oh my god, that hurts. 

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to Pandacorn6 [2016-01-28 02:19:44 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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Not-Princess-Luna101 [2013-11-15 12:46:07 +0000 UTC]

I was skipping along happiness fields when I unexpectedly fell down the fEELS HOLE AAFGH THIS HURTS


brb just going to stay in that hole for hours

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MsAmiClassified [2013-11-04 15:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, I didn't even need my heart anyway...;_;

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to MsAmiClassified [2016-01-28 02:20:04 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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MsAmiClassified In reply to Dadbert-pipefan413 [2016-01-30 19:09:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks dad

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to MsAmiClassified [2016-01-30 22:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome. Would you like some cake?

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MsAmiClassified In reply to Dadbert-pipefan413 [2016-03-17 04:14:45 +0000 UTC]

sure ok
thanks

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to MsAmiClassified [2016-03-17 05:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Anything for you, champ.

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ninjakitty1986 [2013-10-18 01:05:54 +0000 UTC]

This is a little thing
Called feels
Caused by a sadstuck
By gosh
Brilliant

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to ninjakitty1986 [2016-01-28 02:20:25 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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TheLegendofSimstuck [2013-10-11 22:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Teh feels...

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to TheLegendofSimstuck [2016-01-28 02:20:58 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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KARKATEFFINGVANTAS [2013-09-29 23:47:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying, Dadbert has always been one of my favorite guardians and this just hurts me to the point of no return. I think you are an amazing artist and this piece is beautiful but...it just hurts.

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to KARKATEFFINGVANTAS [2016-01-28 02:20:41 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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BadgerQWERT [2013-08-28 02:57:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw...

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to BadgerQWERT [2016-01-28 02:21:34 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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Queenspaz [2013-08-15 04:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thats so sad! I'm not one to cry but this brought tears to my eyes!

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Dadbert-pipefan413 In reply to Queenspaz [2016-01-28 02:21:16 +0000 UTC]

*Fatherly Pat*

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Kerenasand [2013-07-31 02:11:00 +0000 UTC]

STOP! MESSING! WITH! MY! FEELS!

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NigeriaGirl807 [2013-06-26 05:13:51 +0000 UTC]

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Izumi-Kaede [2013-05-30 18:17:58 +0000 UTC]

OH DAMN THE FEELS ; - ;

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dsplayer765 [2013-05-02 04:40:55 +0000 UTC]

DA FEELS

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wolfgirl377 [2013-05-01 17:07:01 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! ^^
its kinda really sad even if it is a commission I saw some people in the comments say it was just a commission its a really good tho quite sad but very good lol ^^

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M00seM0use [2013-04-26 02:47:12 +0000 UTC]

MY FEELS AS;DFJKNASD;KJF

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Elong451 [2013-04-09 03:18:55 +0000 UTC]

alll the feels.

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hyperhurricane [2013-03-29 02:48:46 +0000 UTC]

oh look, my feels are all over the place.

*bawls*

this piece is wonderfully hearbreaking ; A ;

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NinjaGirlKikio [2013-03-28 00:59:36 +0000 UTC]

aww this is soo sad ):

it brought tears in my eyes )':>


but really this picture is just beautiful!~

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furryPhilanthropist [2013-03-28 00:40:10 +0000 UTC]

THANKS NOW WE'RE ALL REDUCED TO PILES OF FEELINGS ON THE GROUND

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KartittyVangina [2013-03-26 06:30:52 +0000 UTC]

HOLY FUCK
THE OVERWHELMING FEELS
I DON'T NEED THIS RIGHT NOW TTATT
THIS IS
JEEZ
GOG DAMN YOU
;_____;

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NinjaGirlKikio In reply to KartittyVangina [2013-03-28 01:01:14 +0000 UTC]

ummm, dont you think thats a bit harsh to say to someone

i mean, come on, its just a commission, there's no need to make someone feel bad

especially the one who worked hard to make this beautiful drawing

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KartittyVangina In reply to NinjaGirlKikio [2013-03-28 01:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Uhhm... Actually what I said is a compliment o.o
I'm saying it's giving me over whelming feels lol XDD

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NinjaGirlKikio In reply to KartittyVangina [2013-03-28 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]

oh well the way you put it sounds kind of bad <:/

like i know the drawing is really sad since it involves john doing something he wont normally do, but he did it as a memory of his father

but saying stuff like

"I dont need this" or "this made me sad" actually really hurts the artist since they felt like they did something really bad to hurt you when they never intended to <:/

trust me, this has happened to my friend yesterday when she posted a sadstuck story and most of her readers were saying stuff similar to what i said and it effected her in a way cos she felt like she really hurt people's feelings when it was just a request

i just only want to say, be careful with your words ok (:>

*i dont want to start a fight or anything, i just thought that i should let you know 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

KartittyVangina In reply to NinjaGirlKikio [2013-03-28 02:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol xDD Well, I never really get this kind of reply, seeing as how most stuff I post like this the artist always says something like "XD Thank you" or "I'm glad you liked it" and I've commented stuff similar to this on her other works and she kinda said like the thanks thingy, so I didn't think it made her sad XP

But I guess I do understand what you mean.
But I guess you also have to look at it from another person's view.
Like me, it could be a way of expressing how deep the feelings were that the story/picture gave you, and that you simply loved it so much.
XP

Don't worry, I know your not trying to start a fight, I'm trying my best not too either ||D Considering I have temper issues... ?? XDD
Especially since I've fought with some people over the internet, and it got ridiculous <:/
Plus, I don't see any reason too fight on comments on a piece like this XP
And it's alright XP

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NinjaGirlKikio In reply to KartittyVangina [2013-03-28 02:09:37 +0000 UTC]

well am glad we could settle this in a kind manor (:

its cos since it affected my friend, i told it was going to effect this artist as well
but anyways, thanks for hearing me out (:

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KartittyVangina In reply to NinjaGirlKikio [2013-03-28 02:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad too xD

Ahh XP I understand your reasonings for that XP

Ahh, no problem (:

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KiaCollect In reply to KartittyVangina [2013-03-30 05:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Hum, sweetheart? This is purposely Sad and Nostalgic Stuck *sweatdrops* That's what I described for Fesh to draw ya know, plus Fesh is more then used to "THE FEEEEELS" *giggles* No need to be so harsh on the poor sap. I did inteed for this to make people Sad but give them small lil smiles at it too ^^

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KartittyVangina In reply to KiaCollect [2013-03-30 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]

|D lol ok xD

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NinjaGirlKikio In reply to KartittyVangina [2013-03-28 02:51:03 +0000 UTC]

again thank (:

and hope you have a nice day~

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