Comments: 6
haphazardmelody [2015-02-23 23:01:39 +0000 UTC]
I really like this. The flow is a bit disjointed and awkward to me, but that makes sense since it's from the perspective of a child.
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Naamba [2014-10-22 04:36:13 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you're able to bring poems back around or gives a little giggle at the end of a dark, sad story.
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Personghost [2014-10-22 01:10:12 +0000 UTC]
this was well written but I won't say beautiful because fuck eating disorders fuck them straight to hell
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fernknits In reply to Personghost [2014-10-22 07:49:59 +0000 UTC]
but you're right. beautiful it ain't.
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