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Published: 2014-10-19 09:56:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 406; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description my mother told me
a yogurt is plenty lunch
for a girl like you
and water to drink
but i'm so hungry by 5
so before she comes home i eat
so
so
so much more than yogurt
and it comes back up
and when my belly is empty my head hurts 
and i get so tired
and i take 1two3four567 some kind of pain pills
that turn 
greenish inside me
and i hope they will help me sleep and they do
make me sleepy
and vomit
and vomit greenish
and get sleepy
and she comes home and sees me
smelling bad and looking green and says
you're shaking like a leaf and i say
maybe it was the yogurt
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Comments: 6

haphazardmelody [2015-02-23 23:01:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. The flow is a bit disjointed and awkward to me, but that makes sense since it's from the perspective of a child.

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Naamba [2014-10-22 04:36:13 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you're able to bring poems back around or gives a little giggle at the end of a dark, sad story.

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fernknits In reply to Naamba [2014-10-22 07:50:34 +0000 UTC]

 *giggles*

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Personghost [2014-10-22 01:10:12 +0000 UTC]

this was well written but I won't say beautiful because fuck eating disorders fuck them straight to hell

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fernknits In reply to Personghost [2014-10-22 07:49:59 +0000 UTC]

but you're right.  beautiful it ain't.

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fernknits In reply to Personghost [2014-10-22 07:49:41 +0000 UTC]

fuck them indeed.  but thank you for the compliment.  

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