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Published: 2016-05-29 16:13:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 998; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description The hearth in your denim pocket,
quietus and earthen floor
windows settle nostalgic dust
and hold outcroppings through their pores:
maps, manuals, flightless single wings
awaiting consequence, a bloodless chore
in the future you have willed the world
for those of us who still remain
workless as the dead.
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Comments: 19

YouInventedMe [2016-08-01 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]

It's good to read you.

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spoems In reply to YouInventedMe [2016-08-06 17:56:18 +0000 UTC]

It's good to see you reading. Β Thanks for the visit.

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LunaNitor [2016-06-13 17:47:09 +0000 UTC]

I loved the music of this piece; the poem flowed very well and including the simple rhyming of "ore", which was neither too much nor too little, was a great stylistic choice. Β I also enjoyed that this piece is essentially one, long line. Β The continuation of each thought cascading seamlessly into the next added on to the fluidity that nostalgia is associated with. Β I really enjoyed reading this piece

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spoems In reply to LunaNitor [2016-06-15 02:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for coming by and reading. Β I'm glad you enjoyed it. Β 

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smwacks98 [2016-05-31 15:51:35 +0000 UTC]

this is lovely, and i'm always happy when you post something <3

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spoems In reply to smwacks98 [2016-06-01 22:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for visiting and reading. Β 

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sherbetblooms [2016-05-30 11:50:02 +0000 UTC]


yes, your workshop is my now empty hospital.

I love
"windows settle nostalgic dust"
it reminds me of walking around in dad's garage.

The bit about the future somehow reminds me of parallel universes

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spoems In reply to sherbetblooms [2016-05-30 23:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for visiting, Natty. Β 

An empty hospital is probably ripe for many intriguing, sorrowful, and shocking strands of verse. Β 

An uncle had just recently died, and I was thinking about how his dirt floor workshop was all that's really left of him; others' memories of us being perversions within perversions of reality, anyway. Β I thought, he leaves the future universe to us, like a thoughtless will, and whatever little or vast portion we decide to take part in is doled out in an unavoidable inheritance. And like a will and memory, there is no solid reality to it, except what other people choose to do because of it. Β But the workshop is really there.

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sherbetblooms In reply to spoems [2016-06-06 11:41:31 +0000 UTC]

that makes more sense to me know.

your abstractions always make me wonder.

I feel I often take them in and turn them into this strange pseudo reality.

I think empty hospitals are perfect. Let all the poor souls go home. Let me go home and be a human and not a nurse.
I'm very happy being out of that world.

I'm sorry to hear about your uncle.

I like that analogy. I like that you found something solid

Thank you for explaining. I love both sides...the abstractions and the though processes.

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Jennosaurr [2016-05-30 01:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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spoems In reply to Jennosaurr [2016-05-30 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading.

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alapip [2016-05-29 17:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, Shane!Β 

I'm beginning to understand what you've written!

It reads like music and makes sense too.

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spoems In reply to alapip [2016-05-29 19:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Whoa. Β That means one of us is either improving or regressing (or both, perhaps). Β 

Thanks for stopping in, Pip.

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alapip In reply to spoems [2016-05-29 20:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Or maybe I'm in a more exploratory
frame of mind?

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spoems In reply to alapip [2016-05-30 00:52:27 +0000 UTC]

That's a fortunate frame of mind to be in.

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alapip In reply to spoems [2016-05-30 16:06:51 +0000 UTC]

It's the frame of mind I tend to remain in, but
in reading of and formulating my own opinions
on Social Evolution, Religion and other related
topics, such as -Β www.huffingtonpost.com/bobby-a…

Which leads to the thought: If even the basic
particle processes bits of information - 'If this -
do that', and as systems grow in complexity,
ala atom, molecule, element, to cells and up
to basic 'living' creatures - eventually the vast
amount of information continuously experienced
through expanding senses has to overwhelm
even increasingly sophisticated processing
abilities of expanded 'if this - do that' complexes.
Is this the point where proto-consciousness
arises, simply because it is desperately needed
for efficient survival and evolution?

And, considering IIT, what does the possibly
conscious universe begin to explicitly do to
continue the advancement of evolution, if that
indeed is it's guiding principle, and if it has
evolved in its dispersed 'self' any active abilities?

Is 'evolutionary need' the guiding principle
of the cosmos?Β 

Which leads to further considerations, such as
this -Β meaningoflife.tv/videos/35025
Note: Bob Wright's two sites and his books
are full of fascination, all built upon scientific
research and the input of hundreds of the
best minds in the world. Caution - you may
become hooked.

pip

In life, there are few 'certainties', but endless
'theoretical possibilities'... llp

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KalineReine [2016-05-29 17:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. β™₯Β 

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spoems In reply to KalineReine [2016-05-29 17:38:00 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate the read, thanks.

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KalineReine In reply to spoems [2016-05-29 18:05:34 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. c:

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