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Second part of that old mess A couple of pages that were impossible to trace directly from the originals, so they had to be completely restructured in the remake, with important pannels  being bigger and less important ones discarded, such as one in which Flippy gets a scratch and another in which he turns back, which although I still like them on their own, didn't really contribute with anything. I also changed a bit the order in which some things happen, as it seemed to me that it made more sense for him to lose the machinery because of the blow and not the other way around. A somewhat complicated part to repair, but with very good results in my opinion



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Comments: 7

RedAim [2020-04-17 14:06:52 +0000 UTC]

I can't seem to understand how he hit his head

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FennecSilvestre In reply to RedAim [2020-04-17 19:35:37 +0000 UTC]

The horse jumped through a way that was too narrow for Flippy, and being in the jungle, he just ended up getting hit against a tree branch.

It's not very clear indeed, (though trust me, it was much worse on the original ) but hopefully you can somewhat see it now.

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RedAim In reply to FennecSilvestre [2020-04-17 20:44:08 +0000 UTC]

ohh okay thanks! yeah I though it was a tree branch but I wasn't sure so I thought I'd ask

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somestrangeweeb27 [2020-04-04 04:37:15 +0000 UTC]

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InEventuality [2020-04-04 03:43:51 +0000 UTC]

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AnimeLoverFilms121 [2020-04-03 21:21:37 +0000 UTC]

OOF

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BladeMaster122 [2020-04-03 21:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Goodness 

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