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Behold, the most trimmed down page of the entire remake...which I'm very glad it is, because what a mess the original was

I was always aware of the excessive number of pannels on the original version, 23 to be exact, which of course turns out to be more of a problem than a virtue for this format. It was almost impossible to follow the action with so many drawings and unnecessary dialogues in one place, and even though I still like each drawing from the old version, I had to re-divide the scenes in order to make reading easier, discarding pannels and changing some aspects in the way in which certain things are developed, although that is something that will be more noticable in the following pages.

For this page, the biggest change in terms of content is the way Flippy gets his uniform. In the original, it was only implied that it belonged to the horse's old rider, but due to lack of space and my eagerness to finish the chapter at that time, I didn't have a chance to develop it better. It still feels a bit rushed despite the changes, although not as rushed

Please let me know if you think there's something wrong with the dialogues, I've gotten a lot better with my english since then, but there are still some aspects that can be polished.

Special thanks to RikoSakari for helping me color the pages from this one onwards

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Description

★ Please do not edit, reproduce or redistribute★

*For those who already know the story, try not to comment spoilers please.

Behold, the most trimmed down page of the entire remake...which I'm very glad it is, because what a mess the original was

I was always aware of the excessive number of pannels on the original version, 23 to be exact, which of course turns out to be more of a problem than a virtue for this format. It was almost impossible to follow the action with so many drawings and unnecessary dialogues in one place, and even though I still like each drawing from the old version, I had to re-divide the scenes in order to make reading easier, discarding pannels and changing some aspects in the way in which certain things are developed, although that is something that will be more noticable in the following pages.

For this page, the biggest change in terms of content is the way Flippy gets his uniform. In the original, it was only implied that it belonged to the horse's old rider, but due to lack of space and my eagerness to finish the chapter at that time, I didn't have a chance to develop it better. It still feels a bit rushed despite the changes, although not as rushed

Please let me know if you think there's something wrong with the dialogues, I've gotten a lot better with my english since then, but there are still some aspects that can be polished.

Special thanks to RikoSakari for helping me color the pages from this one onwards

Previous page | Next page

For early access to new pages, art requests and exclusive Sweet Lullaby content, we invite you to visit our Patreon:

LullabyofaDeepForest

Artwork © / 2011 (2020 edition) Colors by

HTF © Mondo Media

Sweet Lullaby is created by and