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Fangirl-Invader — BROKEN EVERYTHING
Published: 2008-03-02 10:25:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Broken ankles,
Broken wrists,
Broken everything,
That and this.
Broken girl
on the
Broken floor.
Broken child,
in a
Broken war.
Mocking smile,
a lying snare,
"You--
Broken one,
Who lie there,"
No reply,
No voice, no lie.
"You, broken one,
Who lay and die,
Broken one,
I can fix you.
Save you
from the fate
God's given you."
She sneers.
Bathing in her blood,
clutching the organ
that's meant to feel
LOVE
"Fucking liar."
she snarls
and dies.
Rots away
Eaten by
a thousand
white
doves.
and a
MILLION
more
flies.
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Comments: 2

athena1999 [2008-03-23 18:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow... and I mean wow! Your poetry is just to die for, it's so symbolic and just... incredible!

Wow... there is so much that could be interpreted from this. Is it a war victim? Is it a symbol for someone with a broken heart whose soul died inside? Something else? I love poems like these that really make you think.

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CarrotCakey-Sama [2008-03-02 10:28:59 +0000 UTC]

16 lines for school... 4 ms watermelon... god i h8 her... HI KATIEEEE!!!~~ OMG... school fotos tomoz... ARGH!!!!

Courtz...xx

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