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faceless-monster — The Keep-Looking Glass

Published: 2012-11-26 12:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 9255; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 287
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Description Exploring the old house, she entered a room empty except for a large mirror propped up against the stone wall. Looking closer, she noticed that although the frame was caked with dust, the glass seemed freshly polished without so much as an age spot or a streak. She admired her reflection for a moment, before her attention was drawn to a yellowed piece of paper that had fallen to the floor. The writing was faded, but legible:

"The looking-glass is like the thief;
Beware those who would peer into it -
While it is watched it feigns innocence,
But once it has made you its mark
It will steal from you when your back is turned."

She went to call out for her friend to come see, but when her voice should have echoed through the halls there was only silence. She put her hand to her throat, then her face, and looked back into the mirror; her mouth had vanished, and she was completely mute. Unable to call for help, and terrified of taking her eyes off the mirror again in case they disappeared too, all she could do was wait in silence for her friend to come looking for her.

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stock : Mirror of youth by ~janina | candelabra png by ~camelfobia | lit candle sheet... by ~chop-stock
textures : Stone wall texture by *enframed | Green Floral Texture by ~stock-pics-textures

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Comments: 20

EmilyNyght [2014-02-18 06:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I didn't think much but putting the story to it.... WOW!

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faceless-monster In reply to EmilyNyght [2014-02-18 14:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks very much!

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MielEtVenin [2013-05-08 07:19:07 +0000 UTC]

nicely done

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faceless-monster In reply to MielEtVenin [2013-05-08 14:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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suki42deathlake [2013-05-05 15:26:38 +0000 UTC]

lovly work ^^

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faceless-monster In reply to suki42deathlake [2013-05-05 16:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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suki42deathlake In reply to faceless-monster [2013-05-11 22:51:37 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome ^^

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DreamsUnderStarlight [2013-04-06 18:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Well thats creepy.

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faceless-monster In reply to DreamsUnderStarlight [2013-05-05 03:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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KlutzyBrunette [2012-12-08 20:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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faceless-monster In reply to KlutzyBrunette [2012-12-09 06:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Vera-Irvin [2012-12-04 19:54:38 +0000 UTC]

I like it!

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faceless-monster In reply to Vera-Irvin [2012-12-07 06:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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jmkaye1981 [2012-12-04 15:43:32 +0000 UTC]

This is a great idea for a piece of short fiction.

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faceless-monster In reply to jmkaye1981 [2012-12-04 16:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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xyzzy2112 [2012-12-03 16:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Great little caption. I like the idea of losing the features one by one, and the terror that might go along with it...not sure if you caught this story in my gallery, it deals with that type of theme: [link]

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Emberzini [2012-12-03 04:16:54 +0000 UTC]

This....is amazing. Not only is the concept itself fascinating, as is the story, but the art is truly incredible. The story itself is perfectly creepy, and you portrayed it so amazingly both in the art and in the brief piece of literature. This is one of those pieces that I can't completely explain how amazing it is. I've favorited this for the sake of loving the art (as opposed to 'I'm using this stock' or a picture I'm using as a drawing reference), which frankly...is rare for me to do. xD Just letting you know how awesome I think this is.

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faceless-monster In reply to Emberzini [2012-12-03 15:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much for the lovely comment, I'm glad you like it!

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Giggityman69 [2012-11-27 06:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Creepy idea... I like it

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faceless-monster In reply to Giggityman69 [2012-11-27 10:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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