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Published: 2005-03-05 15:01:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 2418; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 66
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Description Do you remember?
A smile so sweet
It would make each day better
And make you smile in return

Do you remember?
A hug so tight
You would want to hold on forever
And feel safe

Do you remember?
A feeling so special
You would never be cold
And let the warmth surround you

Do you remember?
A tear so painful
It would hurt you inside
And make you cry as well

Do you remember?
A night so perfect
You would sleep in each other's arms
And be content

Do you remember?
A whisper so soft
You would lay even closer
And listen to only that voice

Do you remember?
All those precious moments
They remind you of something even more important
The strong bond shared between the two of you

Now you can only dream
Of that time you were together
Those memories are worth it all
But still...

Just one smile
To see that face light up
Just one hug
To keep the other here a little longer

Just one feeling
To take that person in a dear embrace one last time
Just one tear
To even see a sad emotion again

Just one night
To know you are still at the right place
Just one whisper
To feel the other near once more

Be silent for a moment
You will realize
Every single memory
Will always stay with you
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Comments: 76

Miranda-Panda In reply to ??? [2005-04-22 18:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Your poem is so beautiful. I don't really know what else to say about it, because it is so amazing. I can't believe that you wrote it! Good job!

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Eyes-S In reply to Miranda-Panda [2005-04-23 15:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!! I am very proud of my 6 favs... Means people really liked it... And I thought it wasn't that good of a poem... I am glad many do like it though! Thanks again!

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MoombaDuo In reply to ??? [2005-03-18 12:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats such a beautiful poem, very emotional, I'm sure alot of people could relate to this poem.
A very nice piece1

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Eyes-S In reply to MoombaDuo [2005-03-18 12:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it seems that many people can... I am glad they can... Thank you!! I really appreciate it!!

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MoombaDuo In reply to Eyes-S [2005-03-18 12:54:08 +0000 UTC]

no probs keep up the good work!

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fapri In reply to ??? [2005-03-13 13:29:12 +0000 UTC]

i remember.. sniff! such emotions.. sigh.. really good..

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Eyes-S In reply to fapri [2005-03-13 14:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

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EddieTheYeti In reply to ??? [2005-03-08 20:27:12 +0000 UTC]

I have a very good friend Laurie who's 20 year old sister died last year in a freak incident. This poem is almost exactly what she said it feels like now. Thank you so much for writing this! I am going to send it to her if that is ok?


Thank you!




Eddie The Yeti




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Eyes-S In reply to EddieTheYeti [2005-03-08 20:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Omg... You made me cry... Of course you can send it to her!! Tell her I send her my condolences!
You're welcome!
I am very happy I wrote it...

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EddieTheYeti In reply to Eyes-S [2005-03-09 03:50:47 +0000 UTC]

She loved it and wanted to know the backgrnd if you ever feel like talking about it. Thanks again!!!


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Eyes-S In reply to EddieTheYeti [2005-03-09 16:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Well... I wouldn't mind talking about it... Not at all... How can I get in touch with her?

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EddieTheYeti In reply to Eyes-S [2005-03-09 20:05:20 +0000 UTC]

I just emailed her and asked if I could give her email to you. I will let you know as soon as I hear back. Thanks again!!!









ETY




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Eyes-S In reply to EddieTheYeti [2005-03-09 20:06:53 +0000 UTC]

So very welcome! And if she doesn't mind, then I will put her in my msn list... She and I can talk then...

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SoltisViolin [2005-03-08 01:42:03 +0000 UTC]

wow....made my eyes tear up.. I love it!

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Eyes-S In reply to SoltisViolin [2005-03-08 16:57:25 +0000 UTC]

It really did?? Ohhh... Thank you!!
For the fav... For the comment!!

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SoltisViolin In reply to Eyes-S [2005-03-08 21:57:20 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome~!

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ASZSephiroth In reply to ??? [2005-03-06 17:04:44 +0000 UTC]

A poem so beautifully written it brings tears to my eyes. *wipes tears away* This poem deserves a

~sayonara~

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Eyes-S In reply to ASZSephiroth [2005-03-06 17:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Omg... Tears?? Really??
You're so sweet!! Thank you!!! So much!!
For the fav too!

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ASZSephiroth In reply to Eyes-S [2005-03-07 00:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!!!!

~sayonara~

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zkeleton [2005-03-05 16:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Subject is something we all can probably identify outselves with..

I like it especially because it feels emotional and sincere. In my opinion, a poem which is neither is worthless.

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Eyes-S In reply to zkeleton [2005-03-05 17:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Very true!

And thank you so much!

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MeetYourDemise1467 In reply to ??? [2005-03-05 16:09:44 +0000 UTC]

i like it alot! its very good.

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Eyes-S In reply to MeetYourDemise1467 [2005-03-05 17:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! For the too!!
Glad you like it!

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NightyNight In reply to ??? [2005-03-05 15:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Finally I can comment on it! Hehe.
Anyway..

Sis.. This truly is a beautiful poem.. I love it..
It's.. perfect. Not another word for it. Absolutely perfect. I thought about pointing out which part I like best.. But I can't point the entire poem out, now can I? Heh..

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Eyes-S In reply to NightyNight [2005-03-05 15:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Sheesh... ><
But I know... hehe

I see... But I am glad... I was hoping you would like it... heh
Thank you, sis...

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