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Mario-McFly [2020-07-27 06:52:55 +0000 UTC]
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FiMvisible [2012-11-03 10:14:47 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
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What can I say? It's amazing; it really is. I gave you a full 5 on "vision", since anyone reading this can tell you put a *really* great effort on the strip: the details, the hints, the incredibly various backgrounds and the overall structure. And everything came out perfectly, marking what is IMO your best comic strip till now; the character design and the BG feels much show-like, which I can appreciate; also, I found the shading very well done, making the entire comic more dynamic. So, that's a 5 on "technique" as well.
"Originality", I gave you 4.5; I'd never read a Luna comic involving the baby Cakes, so that came as a pleasant surprise (I just didn't give you a round 5 due to the overused gamer Luna thing - but this is not bad in any way, since I love gamer Luna).
"Impact" is going to be 4.5: despite the panel structure being quite linear and simple (which is why I didn't give you 5), you manage to keep the reader engaged with time/location/scene changes and the lil' details you add here and there (I'm not even sure this is what "impact" is supposed to mean, but I interpret it this way).
In summary, congrats on this one; every hour you spent on this, was worth it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
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Dogman15 In reply to angel-oscuro-20 [2012-11-02 02:32:56 +0000 UTC]
Your translation might have worked a little bit better if you had used proper punctuation.
Su traducciΓ³n podrΓa funcionado un poco mejor si se hubiera usado puntuacio adecuada.
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superiorspider-pup45 [2019-11-19 06:39:18 +0000 UTC]
Sees the SNES: Β
Β : The Good Taste has I. Β
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BrutalityInc [2019-11-08 12:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Princess Luna is a bad influence on fillies and colts...Β
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BrutalityInc [2019-11-08 12:30:22 +0000 UTC]
Princess Luna is a bad influence on fillies and colts...Β
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fyre-byrd [2019-07-19 20:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Out of curiosity, does Luna have her own palace here?
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to fyre-byrd [2019-07-20 02:39:02 +0000 UTC]
It's supposed to be her room/suite in the castle.
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fyre-byrd In reply to Evil-DeC0Y [2019-07-22 23:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... out of curiosity, if Luna, hypothetically speaking, wanted her own palace, how easy do you think that would be? If people had to be relocated, would there be anti-gentrification protests? If it were outside of Canterlot, would the city have to annex the land and pay the local governments in the area?
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to fyre-byrd [2019-07-23 17:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Looks like there's plenty of open, unused land in Equestria, and as Princess I'm pretty sure Luna wouldn't need to pay any local governments to use it.
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fyre-byrd In reply to Evil-DeC0Y [2019-07-26 15:54:08 +0000 UTC]
So do you think that she'd ever want one, assuming she can get the proper zoning permits, etc.?
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to fyre-byrd [2019-07-28 22:49:35 +0000 UTC]
Maybe, I don't know.
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Victorfazbear [2019-06-07 02:25:54 +0000 UTC]
luna what have you done?!
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HeartStorm4ever [2019-01-18 02:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Luna is the best!
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Blockyblob [2018-08-14 18:08:54 +0000 UTC]
I love how cute the babies are, I wish they had a game/activity where you had to take care of a foal of your choice
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Storms-Light [2018-01-15 09:21:21 +0000 UTC]
Luna as a foalsitter? Made of awesome! Great stuff!
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TheDrawingKARIANNE [2017-07-30 20:09:01 +0000 UTC]
This is how Luna trains her future army of soldiers
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Tiger-Hawk [2017-07-05 09:29:14 +0000 UTC]
LOL
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eta-gamma-14 [2017-04-08 14:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Soarin's all like "You MANIACS!!!! You SQUISHED HER!!!! DAMN YOU!!! DAMN YOU ALL TO TARTARUS!!!!
Three guesses where that line came from.
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MaoBermudez [2017-01-15 02:54:02 +0000 UTC]
Β Β Β Β Β
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zsocreed [2016-11-06 17:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Can I just say that I love your profile picture
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Skll-Grl [2016-08-27 01:40:08 +0000 UTC]
WOW! That was hilarious!Β Β Β Β
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Skll-Grl In reply to Evil-DeC0Y [2016-09-06 18:30:47 +0000 UTC]
Totally! It was HILARIOUS!
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urzapw2000 [2016-06-22 03:58:41 +0000 UTC]
very funny but not who I'd pick!
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StargazeHeartaccount [2016-04-11 23:53:03 +0000 UTC]
You forgot Pumpkin eyelashes in panel 16
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TheAnonymousBronyGuy [2016-03-01 04:58:14 +0000 UTC]
that clock in the 10th panel had a 7 in roman numerals at the bottom
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BadassBlaziken [2015-10-23 12:04:51 +0000 UTC]
dad just asked me why i was LOLing i said i found this
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biancaroseg [2015-10-23 00:41:23 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahahahaah
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speedox12 [2015-07-01 22:24:08 +0000 UTC]
Princess Trollestia strikes again.
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arthunter3 [2015-05-25 13:09:33 +0000 UTC]
It was this moment that the cakes knew, they fucked up... As parents.
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zorrodefender6 [2015-05-25 09:34:07 +0000 UTC]
luna is so cute in this hell id love to have her to hangout with
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