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Description EDIT: MARCH 2015:

There is a NEW SECOND BETA VERSION TO PLAY: Check out the new one on my profile or just click right here:

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Finally After a few destroyed laptop chaos stuff xD yay. I finished it off. I kind don't put a mature filter on it since I will warn you

IT CONTAINS JUMPSCARES!This has to be stated for the more light hearted people among us. Its a copyright issue. Don't blame me for posting this here.

For the rest: I hope it works and stuff! I hope everything just turns out to be fine in the end. Its just a short version.

THE FINISHED VERSION IS NOT ON YET!! ITS UNFINISHED!!
Hope you like it guys *-*

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It doesn't work for phones or apple software! Sorry! (Only for computers, like MAC, with Flash on them, it'll work though.) The full version will, though.

It ends at 3am! Its only the beta so this is the normal end! Don't freak out, its normal to freeze there Ā 

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newcrather [2020-11-09 13:51:36 +0000 UTC]

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Eloylie In reply to newcrather [2020-11-27 20:01:35 +0000 UTC]

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Night-snacker [2015-03-05 11:58:37 +0000 UTC]

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i think that it is wonderful that your making a game to start, and i played your beta, which i thought was really well done, its quick, it looks nice, and it performs to what its supposed to, i haven't seen really anything else like this either, giving it a a sense of originality. for you to be making it alone and be making this much progress quickly shows you are dedicated, i am very convinced that this will be good. i am personally very excited for this game and cant wait to see its full release! good luck, happy blessing.

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 12:02:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much <3
I usually get dumb critique with only one sentence in it... and the rest is stupid lettering. Thanks for not doing that :3

I will create the last 3 screens today if I can^^

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 12:06:32 +0000 UTC]

no way! if you do i'll... i'll... ill give you a llama! and hugs! hugs anyway!Ā Ā  im sorry.... hate that fan girl side of me... lol, dont kill yourself over it i can wait a week or two if i have to, and no problem i take critiques VERY DEATHLY serious. i think it helps the author get better for better projects and art, or games or whatever they do, and we all want you to improve. or at least i do!

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 12:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha Awesome :3 Then keep this up^^
And I am used to fangirls, so do whatever you want xD



Just maybe no sex rps in my comment section. Will be deleted...

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 12:09:10 +0000 UTC]

lol i wouldn't anyway, i keep that part tightly under wraps, also you clearly stated not to do so on your page, so i will NOT do that. i gotta run, ttyl!

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 12:10:54 +0000 UTC]

oh you really read that... I actually don't believe there are any ppl left who read descriptions xD

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 18:34:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah... i try though!

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 18:58:24 +0000 UTC]

:3 ok then^^

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 19:01:28 +0000 UTC]

^,^ ill be back in about 45 minutes gotta walk from 'work'

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 19:04:36 +0000 UTC]

ok :3

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 19:53:40 +0000 UTC]

im back! 46 minutes... good time! so what are you doing?

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Eloylie In reply to Night-snacker [2015-03-05 19:55:59 +0000 UTC]

I am working? xD

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Night-snacker In reply to Eloylie [2015-03-05 20:22:25 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry XD

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ThEdErPyBrOnY1 [2015-03-02 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

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the only gripe (problem) i have with this is the quote on quote "jump scares" now random letter time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/bā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="367" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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Eloylie In reply to ThEdErPyBrOnY1 [2015-03-03 06:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you should check the description my journals and the comment section for explanations for that.

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SkylarClaw [2015-02-15 21:44:11 +0000 UTC]

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Awesome, Im surprised with this....'game'



I cannot possibly wait for the final! This is just plain epic right here.
The vision is perfect,impact is cool,etc.

JUST A NOTE TO SELF, NEVER CLICK WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY,HIT HIM WITH A BASEBALL BAT OR WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE BITE OF '87!
You'll regret it...

-The only problem is that some questions cannot be clicked on even though it looks like you can click on them..-

But anyways, I do hope you release this! DO IT FOR DA FANZ TEH FOXY FANSSSS!!


-and some tags, yeah that would be cool

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Eloylie In reply to SkylarClaw [2015-02-16 12:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Okay thanks so much for the critique :3

I do release this, which you would know if you'd looked to my page xD
What do you mean by "some tags would be cool"?
If you'd read the description, you would know why some are unclickable and others are hard to click.

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SkylarClaw In reply to Eloylie [2015-02-16 16:21:55 +0000 UTC]

No I mean like comment tags.



And yw

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Eloylie In reply to SkylarClaw [2015-02-16 16:22:42 +0000 UTC]

What are comment tags?

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SkylarClaw In reply to Eloylie [2015-02-16 17:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Like extra tags


Like YouTube

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Eloylie In reply to SkylarClaw [2015-02-16 17:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Uhmmm.... still, what is this.

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SkylarClaw In reply to Eloylie [2015-02-16 17:41:39 +0000 UTC]

Extra comments. That aren't needed

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Eloylie In reply to SkylarClaw [2015-02-16 17:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Okay... like what? For example. Just give me an example.

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SkylarClaw In reply to Eloylie [2015-02-16 17:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Fnaf, extra, random, paint tool SAI...
That stuff

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Eloylie In reply to SkylarClaw [2015-02-16 18:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Uhm... I don't wanted an example for a tag, I wanted an example for when or where it is used .__. Because my deviantions are already tagged.

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SkylarClaw In reply to Eloylie [2015-02-16 18:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Ohh ok

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1337wolfb0i [2015-02-05 17:49:35 +0000 UTC]

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This game is just plain A D O R A B L E! Though it contains jumpscares, I think you spent a lot of time on this game and it is awesome! You have really done an impeccable job with this! Thumbs up and I think that you deserve a ton after all the time you've spent
Just an extra message, watch out for the Foxy Fan girls.
I'm pretty sure you will get a lot of publicity for this!
I bet E V E R YONE will love this game even more when it comes out!
Stay cool!
- Wolfb0i

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Eloylie In reply to 1337wolfb0i [2015-02-05 17:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your critique <3
Thanks for telling me Currently it was on Hiatus and now I start off again. But I think I will start the next game with some notices and disclaimers. Because of those fangirls.

I already got them around me xD I just gotta roll with their crazyness. Also, they always get killed when the get to clingy xD Thats somewhat the sense of the game Thanks so much :3

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neukirci [2015-01-26 05:23:57 +0000 UTC]

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this is umm interesting, i got owned by foxy tho XD but thats ok e.deviantart.net/emoticons/letā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="394" title=" (Lick)"/> but i was amazed at this, it seems interesting, cant wait for the fullversion e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> it makes me post this stuff :C so pwease let this be true, spam ddddddddddd d d dd dd ddd dd d d d dd dd d d dd dd d d d dd d dd d d d d d d d d d d d d d d d dd dd d dd d d d d d dd d d d d dd d dd d d dd d

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CrazyGui [2015-01-05 04:04:44 +0000 UTC]

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Really well made and it isn't even finished.
The art is nice, but I think instead of the door in the beginnen it could be the front curtain.
The jumpscare isn't scary because it take too long for it to happen, it's predictable, it could jumpscare from where he is standing, but I can't really blame it for not being scary, it's really hard to make a jumpscare without a loud sound (scream).

P.S. Great Work, waiting for the full version.

[It remains more 16 words trying to take those numbers away, by now they should be gone] Nice Work! (Ignore the brackets [] )

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lillyfroo [2014-12-29 04:20:41 +0000 UTC]

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Wow.
From a beta you'd expect something COMPLETELY different. If it weren't for the sudden, confusing end, I'd mistake this for a full game!
Foxy jump-scaring me when I asked him about the bite made me giggle so hard that anyone would think I was drunk - which I'm not, because that would be illegal. The graphics are beautiful, the dialogue is perfect, and the options made me laugh so hard.
"Your face reminds me of pizza" is one of the best things I've ever read. When it's completed, I'll happily spend hours on end trying to get Foxy to jump-scare me in every way possible! It's gorgeous!
Sure, there's a bit of room for improvement, but this is amazing for a beta. I played this over three times. Beautiful.

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Eloylie In reply to lillyfroo [2014-12-29 09:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks so much! This is very important to me <3.
I really wanted people to feel like this when they played this game. I will be working very hard to complete this.

I am so happy that my hours of work finally pay off! <3

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Grim-Virus [2014-12-28 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]

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I love this! It has an amazing feel and the art style is fantastic! The things you could ask were very funny and also cute sometimes. My ONE kinda thing about this (and it could just be me) is in your description you warned of jump scares. To me, they weren't really scary. I kinda knew it was coming. It could just be the fact that I'm used to jump scares. If you are adding sound or something like that, then I will defiantly be scared, but overall amazing game!!! I can't wait for the final product!! I bet it will be awesome!

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Eloylie In reply to Grim-Virus [2014-12-29 09:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Sound is so DEFINATLEY being in there *-*
it's just that I wanted to do the sound myself. And I kinda suck very hard everytime I try creating a song digitally. Even if its just chiptune.

But! There will be music.

I warned because of jumpscare because ppl might be offended by this. I heard ppl complaining about it having jumpscares. But as they are a MATURE part of this game there is no way I am gonna remove them.
And for those ppl I added it. No one can blame me then xD Haha^^

Thanks for your critique <3

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Anthaid [2014-12-26 12:59:52 +0000 UTC]

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This is very great beta! You have a great imagination to do this! First of all, the character itself has very great visuals. When it expresses each one, it shows us his feelings perfectly! So, it's realistic to the eye. and when it came to the blushing part. I Know it was accedent, But it's just so great. I Can't! It's Just To great! Here's some tag words to describe this! x3

Good, No Better! No! Awesome!, No that can't be right! umm.. EPIC! NO THATS NOT EVEN CLOSE XDDD UMM

SUPER UPPER AWESOME WITH WHIPPED CREME ON TOP!!

Yea.. that's right

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Eloylie In reply to Anthaid [2014-12-27 20:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks so much <3 *hugs*

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Zerocyrious [2014-12-23 05:54:47 +0000 UTC]

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Wonderful. I simply cannot wait for the final of this. I enjoy the way this visual novel/game was presented, and I just love Foxy's personality. I was very confused when the buttons didn't work, but then I read the description, so now I know better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
I was excited when I saw this, as Foxy's my favorite animatronic. I hope it goes well with everyone when the final is released! I know you can do this!
I can't wait for the final, I still have much more to say, but I can sum it up with this: It was mesmerizing. 5 stars. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Eloylie In reply to Zerocyrious [2014-12-23 07:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your kind and detailed critique <3 I really appreciate it^^

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togepi1234 [2014-12-21 11:49:25 +0000 UTC]

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This is very well made. Theres alot of detail and is very well made. I can't wait for the final version. This has alot of things missing but so far, I have to admit that its awesome. And, since I still have alot of words to use, heres random letters:
af a s g q s g f a sd a df f agh qer ge rba rg er gfw erfg wr fgwrfg wer gfw rg sag aw rf w rfgwer g awe a g a sdg a dfg adsf g adsfg ag dfa sg gfg re w fsda df g

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fmfmfmc [2020-04-25 05:17:50 +0000 UTC]

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CandySwet [2015-10-07 18:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Eu hughed Foxy and saied What the fox say? And they gived me a jumpscare ;-;

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Eloylie In reply to CandySwet [2015-10-08 16:25:12 +0000 UTC]

xD Thats normal, thats why I warned people.

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Flippyisadorable [2015-08-22 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Foxy y u kill meh?

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Eloylie In reply to Flippyisadorable [2015-08-22 09:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Because thats what animatronics do xD

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jcowl25 [2015-07-26 23:06:04 +0000 UTC]

not bad i love it

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Eloylie In reply to jcowl25 [2015-07-27 08:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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jcowl25 In reply to Eloylie [2015-07-28 00:08:04 +0000 UTC]

your welcome Ā 

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gdpr-34948319 [2015-07-26 22:18:49 +0000 UTC]

this is horribly made I can only hit him with a baseball bat

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