Comments: 11
electra-gretchen In reply to Marineneko [2010-05-31 06:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Siento que ya le estoy agarrando la onda, pero también que me falta muuucho para dibujar una composición auto-diseñada. Quiero practicar lo suficiente y así cuando trabaje tus historias plasmarlas lo mejor posible :]
Lo bueno es que me dejan comentarios que me han servido bastante, sobre todo en el acomodamientos de los diálogos.
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foodfight247 [2010-05-31 02:10:03 +0000 UTC]
these are so amazing! you're able to stay true to tessa's style and still make it your own! <3
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eERIechan [2010-05-30 17:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Uhh me likes el último panel. Still, como dijo el de abajo, se batalla mucho para leer por el orden de los paneles... y typo: there's = there is. *hugs*
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electra-gretchen In reply to eERIechan [2010-05-30 21:09:11 +0000 UTC]
Sólo,emm, estaba probando tu nivel de atención a los errores >_> *edits*
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were-ukulele [2010-05-30 16:25:24 +0000 UTC]
I like your stuff, but I think it would be easier to read if it stuck to either, manga or western style panel sequences; right to left, or left to right. When you mix it up it's kinda distracting.
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were-ukulele In reply to were-ukulele [2010-05-30 16:36:42 +0000 UTC]
P.S. I really like how you did Lee. Oh Lee...;_;
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SharpAce [2010-05-30 15:44:00 +0000 UTC]
I really love how you drew the 3 panels of lee. Very nice shading!
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abnerdwight [2010-05-30 14:24:30 +0000 UTC]
This is an interesting adaptation.
However, given the plot and aesthetic opportunities to present this wonderful plot point, I'm guessing 2 portrait pages or one landscape page is the equivalent.. just a thought.
With that said.... this is some awesome pencil-work, I'm totally envious.
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