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Published: 2008-05-14 13:24:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 4498; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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A new style I have been working on, C4D and Photoshop.Guess what...MIRANDA from again
Thanks for clicking all the way here.
EDIT: After some cleaver suggestions from [link] I decided to edit this piece somewhat.
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nicely done, it remaind me a movie with Al Pacino,
Simone i think...
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The abstract combined with the subject is very nice. I like how it appears that the person is coming apart.
However, the strands of the abstract on the far left side are a little pixelated. If you gaussian blurred it a little bit, it might move a little smoother with the image. Otherwise it looks great man! But it must've taken some time to take the woman apart.
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I really like the effect to combine the abstract part with the model!
And the colour combination is great as well.
What I don't like, however, are the greenish tans.
One of them is right next to her nose on her right side - The other green touch is near her right arm.
Furthermore, the blue shape in the back is a nice addition and helps a lot, but the edges aren't antialiased enough and the opacity of it is too strong as well, in my opinion.
The motion blur effect is too strong as well, I think, and the effect of disintegrating ends too abrupt.
Maybe disintegrating bits of her arm and fingers as well?
Or more of her hair, too, since there are lots of them, but only one side is effected by that effect.
Cool compisition and pretty clever title, too!
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Now that is Constructive Critique!, .....Very interesting ,I will work on those aspects that you mention those are well worth it suggestions
Next time I will contact you through msn if you dont mind professional focused critique its hard to come by.
I can see why "Mr. Bubbles" recommended your input LOL
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Cool, I can see this advertising the "coolest" new computer on the market
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shame you didnt try to improve it.. ah well nice work
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It is nice to see you using a different genre, I like it, and it takes alot of hard work to do so. Nice work ed.
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Thanks m8 nice of you to break your absence and comment on this one
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i was hoping for it to be in lum
still i love it.
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Yeah well they didnt like it over there
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Know you did pal thx for that although they overpowered you LOL
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Nice... (I said that out loud as I saw the picture, written it just seems not equal to spoken).
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