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dreamsinstaticUndressing Poetry
Published: 2012-04-19 01:52:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 11365; Favourites: 506; Downloads: 730
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Description She clothes herself in poetry,
seals her skin within the verse.

Each line becomes another garment
that conceals her fixed form's curvature,
but peels away when read.

Last night I dissected a stanza,
clamped it tight between my teeth
and tugged it down her legs.

Her body breathes warm and sweet,
speckled red like a summer strawberry field.

I sucked the juice from her lines and
spit the punctuation like seeds.

My lips mouthed the shape of her words
as my skin grew more sticky with
every splash of imagery dripping down my chin.

I peeled apart her soft pages
with sticky, pink fingertips that left them
clinging to my skin.

A single flawless line remained
between the cloak of poetry, her and me,
so we spoke the words in unison,
revealing everything and setting her verse free.
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Comments: 269

writingbubble [2020-04-08 21:24:08 +0000 UTC]

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smellygurll [2017-01-03 07:16:08 +0000 UTC]

wonderful!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to smellygurll [2017-01-18 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]

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AsteriaSinclair [2014-04-21 02:24:07 +0000 UTC]

This is grand!

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livvywivvylove [2014-04-05 02:12:05 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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betwixtthepages [2013-07-23 00:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Hi, hon!


I used the title of this beautiful poem in my own Title Poem for #TheTitlePage here:


Digging up Bones


Thank you so much!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to betwixtthepages [2013-07-27 19:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, that's awesome.

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betwixtthepages In reply to dreamsinstatic [2013-07-27 19:25:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Pickseedust [2013-04-01 23:59:15 +0000 UTC]

sexy

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Pickseedust [2013-04-02 00:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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pankhurishubnam [2013-03-22 03:53:35 +0000 UTC]

This is such an amazing and beautiful poem!! Every line is so unique and expressive <3 :claps:

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travelgirlxx [2012-12-27 00:59:44 +0000 UTC]

YES. Great job.

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dreamsinstatic In reply to travelgirlxx [2012-12-28 01:01:48 +0000 UTC]

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RedemptiaRebourne [2012-11-27 19:56:23 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to RedemptiaRebourne [2012-11-28 03:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Elaine-Moon [2012-11-23 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Elaine-Moon [2012-11-28 03:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Missdelayingit [2012-11-20 14:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is really great! Awesome idea and imagery. Two thumbs up for you

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Missdelayingit [2012-11-28 03:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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akashi-kun [2012-08-01 08:24:08 +0000 UTC]

wow. simply amazing dude.

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dreamsinstatic In reply to akashi-kun [2012-08-01 20:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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pennywish [2012-07-30 06:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful sensual and erotic poetry

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CarmenVeloso [2012-07-27 17:55:26 +0000 UTC]

You've conquered me by the first line!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to CarmenVeloso [2012-07-28 18:31:41 +0000 UTC]

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CarmenVeloso In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-07-28 19:23:44 +0000 UTC]

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Dani-the-Naiad [2012-06-26 17:29:35 +0000 UTC]

WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!! Congrats on the DD! Well deserved!!!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Dani-the-Naiad [2012-06-29 19:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dani-the-Naiad In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-06-29 19:57:02 +0000 UTC]

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shiftercat [2012-06-24 18:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Unf.

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minoana [2012-06-22 22:49:23 +0000 UTC]

This is AMAZING. Well and gorgeously done!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to minoana [2012-06-23 03:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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wispy-blue [2012-06-16 14:08:26 +0000 UTC]

congratulations. one of my favorite poems receiving a DD -

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dreamsinstatic In reply to wispy-blue [2012-06-16 17:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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wispy-blue In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-06-17 08:40:13 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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Aichobitz [2012-06-14 16:16:56 +0000 UTC]

... Kinky.

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Aichobitz [2012-06-14 19:26:02 +0000 UTC]

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LadyofGaerdon [2012-06-14 05:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Ooh this is brilliant! So happy it got a DD!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2012-06-14 19:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-06-16 02:02:19 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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bear48 [2012-06-13 19:38:20 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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dreamsinstatic In reply to bear48 [2012-06-13 20:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Zireael07 [2012-06-13 08:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Love the imagery. Awesome!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to Zireael07 [2012-06-13 16:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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solaric [2012-06-13 06:49:45 +0000 UTC]

What I love about this poem is how it could equally be applied to a woman and to a book of poems. Some of the best poems in my opinion are those that can be interpreted from several different view points. It really enhances the meaning, since all the possible interpretations complement each other.

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dreamsinstatic In reply to solaric [2012-06-13 16:34:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a big fan of there being only one right way to read something. I try, and enjoy, writing things in a way where it's open to multiple takes and interpretations. I like the idea of someone reading my work and getting a completely different impression than the person next to them.

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solaric In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-06-13 17:54:28 +0000 UTC]

I admire your talent for it - it's not something I've really tried yet, but your poem is quite inspiring!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to solaric [2012-06-13 21:30:34 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see you do some work with it

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kayceethe166 [2012-06-13 06:19:39 +0000 UTC]

this is quite possibly one of the most delicious things i have read in a long while. i'm very glad you got a daily dev for this, because otherwise, i would have missed out completely.

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dreamsinstatic In reply to kayceethe166 [2012-06-13 16:35:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm extremely glad you enjoyed reading it.

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Razor13 [2012-06-13 05:20:34 +0000 UTC]

NaPoWriMo? o.o Please share?

Lovely piece. Very touching, very open, and very true in a sense.

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