Comments: 269
smellygurll [2017-01-03 07:16:08 +0000 UTC]
wonderful!
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livvywivvylove [2014-04-05 02:12:05 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful
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Pickseedust [2013-04-01 23:59:15 +0000 UTC]
sexy
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pankhurishubnam [2013-03-22 03:53:35 +0000 UTC]
This is such an amazing and beautiful poem!! Every line is so unique and expressive <3 :claps:
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travelgirlxx [2012-12-27 00:59:44 +0000 UTC]
YES. Great job.
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Elaine-Moon [2012-11-23 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool!
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akashi-kun [2012-08-01 08:24:08 +0000 UTC]
wow. simply amazing dude.
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pennywish [2012-07-30 06:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful sensual and erotic poetry
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CarmenVeloso [2012-07-27 17:55:26 +0000 UTC]
You've conquered me by the first line!
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shiftercat [2012-06-24 18:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Unf.
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minoana [2012-06-22 22:49:23 +0000 UTC]
This is AMAZING. Well and gorgeously done!
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Aichobitz [2012-06-14 16:16:56 +0000 UTC]
... Kinky.
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LadyofGaerdon [2012-06-14 05:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Ooh this is brilliant! So happy it got a DD!
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bear48 [2012-06-13 19:38:20 +0000 UTC]
nice job
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Zireael07 [2012-06-13 08:02:52 +0000 UTC]
Love the imagery. Awesome!
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solaric [2012-06-13 06:49:45 +0000 UTC]
What I love about this poem is how it could equally be applied to a woman and to a book of poems. Some of the best poems in my opinion are those that can be interpreted from several different view points. It really enhances the meaning, since all the possible interpretations complement each other.
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dreamsinstatic In reply to solaric [2012-06-13 16:34:54 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a big fan of there being only one right way to read something. I try, and enjoy, writing things in a way where it's open to multiple takes and interpretations. I like the idea of someone reading my work and getting a completely different impression than the person next to them.
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solaric In reply to dreamsinstatic [2012-06-13 17:54:28 +0000 UTC]
I admire your talent for it - it's not something I've really tried yet, but your poem is quite inspiring!
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kayceethe166 [2012-06-13 06:19:39 +0000 UTC]
this is quite possibly one of the most delicious things i have read in a long while. i'm very glad you got a daily dev for this, because otherwise, i would have missed out completely.
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Razor13 [2012-06-13 05:20:34 +0000 UTC]
NaPoWriMo? o.o Please share?
Lovely piece. Very touching, very open, and very true in a sense.
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