Comments: 4
Shaidz [2017-11-08 23:39:00 +0000 UTC]
I really like the theme you went for with this! The colors contrast very well, and the action of the characters is very dynamic.
Other than the framing thing I pointed out earlier, I do have a couple more little critiques now that I've looked a bit more closely and in depth. I think the poses are very good, but the way they interact doesn't seem to bring the focus anywhere in particular. My eyes are more drawn to the empty gap between them than anything else. The overall "mass" of the subjects also seems skewed heavily to the left, making the focus drawn to the left half of the canvas.
Additionally, and this may just be personal preference, but I think the shading and pretty much everything "non flat" about the coloring seems kind of... clumpy? I know you do soft shading rather than cell shading, but the texture you use doesn't seem to really imply anything about the different kinds of surfaces it's on. I'd suggest in particular keeping in mind that shiny surfaces like that on armor are pretty glossy and have sharp contrast in light intensity, whereas fur, leather, and other soft materials have a much subtler reaction to light.
Regardless of these two things, I think the piece as a whole is very enjoyable to look at!
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DJcroc2016 [2017-11-05 13:47:19 +0000 UTC]
I like that nice jumping sword pose.
And what's this, Drac wearing trousers? That's new. Jk.
Is that scars across his torso and on his muzzle?
Nvm read the description and saw it's Drac's ancestor. But still looks cool.
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