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Published: 2012-10-26 15:39:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 77310; Favourites: 1950; Downloads: 1119
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My friend made my dream come true and gave me a Fluttershy plushie. To thank him I made a comic featuring his favourite pony; Applejack.Just a couple of things:
- This comic takes place after Applejack has come back from Manehattan, that's why she already has her cutie mark.
- And for those that argue that Winona couldn't breath in the box; Big Mac did poke holes in the wrapping paper, he's a clever stallion.
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Serious critique, no more of that 5 star all around BS
While the story was cute there was little to no buildup which made the actual "D'awwwwww" moment feel lacking
The perspective, mainly in the second panel threw me for a loop as it just felt "Off". I couldn't tell whether the farm was 3 feet or 300 feet away. The final bit is that as a whole there felt to be too much "Dark space". the areas between the panels were FAR to large and that irked me to no end.
All in all this comic was a fun read but if you seriously want to get better, this is every flaw i could find.
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Ok, so pointing out every flaw is very helpful in a person's journey to perfection in what they do, but without the positive stuff the whole thing just hurts to read.
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Have you considered the fact that critiques are supposed to be on not just negative, but POSITIVE as well? You're wording is absolutely rude, if you can't think of a better way to present your thoughts, then keep them to yourself. You're young and have a lot to learn, such as tact, thank you, but try again next time. Good day.
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Wow. I mean wow.
A COMIC? FOR ME? a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/a/h⦠" alt=" " title="happytwilightplz" />
Let's start with the vision. I absolutely love this comic with every piece of my body. The unique vision you were able to describe with both age gap between siblings and the thrill of your first pet both again are very heartwarming.
Let's move on to the next category: Originality. I dont think Winona's ever been given an origin story, so +A for that. I also think that AJ and Big Mac's relationship is covered very much in the show. Showing them in adolescence was a really brilliant idea.
Next, technique. Very fitting of your style. Thick outlines and detailed coloring. Nice work.
Finally, Impact. I have yet to see it on the frontpage of Reddit or on EqD (Sending and posting now XP).
Again, great piece. Even when you're famous, you still find a way to push your art and your style and make great art.
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~Turbo
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When Applejack hugged Winona, it looked like Winona was licking Aj.
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sooooooooosoooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That`s so sweet from Big Mac,he need`s to work on farm, then......has no one to play with her, then has Mac gave her a dog * name forgot >
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aaw
i have a puppy that i got for my birthday last year
(it was a deal i made with mom a long time ago
comment if you want details from itΒ Β )
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that is so cute and tuching i lov keep making more!!!!!
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woah. where did he get enough bits?!
allowance maybe?
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Aw, cute. Small Winona is more cute than big Winona :3
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Oh Celestia, the look on Mac's face on the last panel.Β Β
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Awww...*Er....insert that noise Discord makes when saying 'It's mostly for Fluttershy'*
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And that's how Equestria was made. Maybe later you'll hear about how Applejack got Winona.
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