Gargarron [2015-08-21 10:34:55 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this piece. As I read it there was a flow similar I find to my own work.
It was difficult to read using dA, purely because of the layout design, so I copy-and-pasted it to go through it in Word. I found precious few errors, and one or two sentences which could do with clarification or alteration.
Overall I do hope it's an endeavour that you'll keep up!
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