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axelfirekirby [2016-12-13 00:39:38 +0000 UTC]
he looks like hes wearing a rocs cape...
does this mean he is better at flying?
what if we gave him a rocs feather and a deku leaf as well?
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Dashyburd In reply to axelfirekirby [2016-12-13 01:19:14 +0000 UTC]
If he had a Roc's cape, I'm pretty sure he would fly even better. I think the deku leaf might be unnecessary tho.
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Fenz-art [2016-07-16 21:53:06 +0000 UTC]
You're right! He and Kota do have a similar design! :-D
Cool!
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Fenz-art In reply to Dashyburd [2016-07-17 20:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... weird.... O_o but cool.
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Gatt-chan In reply to Dashyburd [2015-12-03 20:43:46 +0000 UTC]
lol, ando medio dormida y creΓ que lo puse en el journal, mi error .3.
seh, normalmente soy yo la que decide este tipo de cosas y armo toda una estructura narrativa que me toma semanasΒ para pensar en todos los detalles, pero necesito un descanso y me pareciΓ³ un buen ejercicio para ti; eso y es la excusa perfecta para ver como te queda Creuz xD
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axelfirekirby [2015-01-22 12:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Im considering being a blacksmithΒ
And that sword looks cool but in reality.......
But on the bright side I really like locar and his bio
Also what powers does the sword have?
If I offended you im sorry
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axelfirekirby In reply to Dashyburd [2015-01-22 21:06:59 +0000 UTC]
I want to try blacksmithing as a hobby
in reality the sword would be dangores for the user
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axelfirekirby In reply to Dashyburd [2015-01-22 21:32:57 +0000 UTC]
I guess I dont really know
Its hard to explain but those pointy bits on the hilt are dangerous
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Dashyburd In reply to axelfirekirby [2015-01-22 21:49:43 +0000 UTC]
Hm... I guess you're right. But you can put your hands in a position where they don't bother. And maybe I can separate/lift them a bit more. They're supposed to look like wings in a way.
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StarryTiger [2014-03-05 21:46:01 +0000 UTC]
I think you have done a good job with this character! His story is nice and understandable, and he has a good interaction with canon character. I must say his wing pattern is very pretty as well and helps him stand out from other Ritos! The only thing I would like to tweak is his age combined with being a knight. He's only 14 years old, so I would either make him a tad older or maybe make him a knight in training? Now Link is 12 in WW when he sets out on his quest so maybe being 14 isn't too much of a problem in that universe, but it worth to think a little about it however! He could still wield his grandfather's weapon (which also helps him stand out with his own special weapon!). Again, you had done a good job with this character and I bet there's more great things to see of him, just think about his age and knighthood for a moment, it will be up to you to decide!
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StarryTiger In reply to Dashyburd [2014-03-06 10:08:42 +0000 UTC]
You are more than welcome! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Again about the knighthood, it doesn't HAVE to be changed, at the end Link was very young when he became a hero, and we don't really know when you are old enough to become a knight. So you don't have to change it unless you want to! <: If you want any more reviews some day feel free to ask and I'll try to write you something when I have the time!
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Trish-Cookie In reply to Dashyburd [2014-02-05 14:42:38 +0000 UTC]
You're cute! owo
XD okay.
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Dashyburd In reply to Trish-Cookie [2014-02-06 05:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Locar: For the last time, I am not cute! >.< *flails arms aimlessly*
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Trish-Cookie In reply to Dashyburd [2014-02-09 07:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Gosh, you're just like Keisha! *laughs and facepalms*
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Dashyburd In reply to Trish-Cookie [2014-02-09 07:34:14 +0000 UTC]
Locar: No, seriously! I want to know what makes me cute!
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Trish-Cookie In reply to Dashyburd [2014-02-09 07:42:53 +0000 UTC]
Call it my girlish intuition u.u okay kidding XD
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Dashyburd In reply to Trish-Cookie [2014-02-09 07:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Locar: I don't think girl intuition has something to do with that...
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