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A tale starts between a boy and a girl who's fates will see no bound. The young man named Kable Kishato takes the stage at hand and starts his mission to save his friend from the evil forces known as S.H.I.N.E.Next Page: [link]
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illustration by AJ MorgaΒ©2009. ElementalBoutΒ©2009. all rights reserved.
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Ohhhh Kable, you're still my favorite artist here.
I love your style, and you have such a great sense of camera angles...wish I had that. D:
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Well, I see your comic style has changed a lot compared to the old one I've seen and still have actually, somewhere.
Better as ever with your environments. Getting more in depth with details, and light sources. Also seems Kable looks to fit his age now which I see as a good thing.
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Such a great scene for our protagonist.
This is the start of a great story, I can tell that!
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Alright, the first of hopefully many pages!
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He has no shadow in the bottom picture!
And it's "you're".
Don't be mad at me, I'm helping you make your manga professional looking.
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thanks for the spell check 
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Is it just me or does his pants look like something from Kingdom Hearts 2? Anyway, cool opening.
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Nope. They are a pair of pants from hotopic called "trip" I used my own bought pants as reference to make up most of his clothing.
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They're called trips. The reason for that is because the legs a very long.
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Eyep. And because I moded mind to have a strap at the edge f the pants I can cuff them near the knee and let the rest just fold over, making baggy pants ^^ short dings.
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An excellent start! Great detail and looking forward to more.
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