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Here's a piece from Sean Galloway that he was very kind enough to allow me to practice on.Please give critiques where you think this style can be improved.
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Stunning work!
Happy New Year!!
Best wishes!
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nice!! That's so cool! I like how you created Obe Won! So AWESOME!
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Gosh, I'm liking the colour texture quality, very unusual.
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Don't know if my vote counts but I don't really like the brush strokes, I prefer your more smooth style (but that probably takes longer to finish a piece 
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Yeah that's cool. I do to. But you can't go from 0 to 100 in one step of practice. So just bear with me while I figure this out. I will still be posting my regular style from time to time of course.
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The rendering on Qui-Gon's face is weighing it down. That's the only thing I can see that could be improved.
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hmm.. I think I see what you mean.
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Maybe if it didn't go to shade and then green (lightsaber) highlight. Maybe if the green highlight was on the lit side of his face it would be less heavy? As in pushing the shade to the other side, or if the shadow didn't go down as dark in that area. The green highlight against pure fleshtone might be enough without weighing it down. Just 5 of my 2 cents.
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Whoa. Awsome art of Star Wars series, I think I like it.
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rad man. my only thought is, i wonder if the style could be pushed more by making some of your lost/soft edges where you're pushing things back more rough and breaking in to the characters' silhouettes a little more. could ruin the whole thing..haha. just a thought.
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and thats how you make something awesome even more awesome
obviously the rough textured look makes this look something that would easily fit with the Clone Wars animated series style, but i got nothin bad to say about it "technically"
looks gorgeous Dan!
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