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DaniBones — You Can't Take It Away From Me
Published: 2011-07-18 02:43:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description You Can't Take It Away From Me

Wedged within my heart
Is a light that I can sometimes see.
It lives off sappy poetry
And you'll never take it away from me.

You see, I'll grip it in my hands
Until it cannot breathe
Just so you'll never, hear me? NEVER
Take it away from me.

It's smaller than a pin prick,
Though still, it sometimes bleeds
I'd swallow it before you could even try
To take it away from me.

It smells like a sigh
And it sounds like a plea
And it sometimes cries,
But you still can't take it from me.

If I turn into salt
And I rejoin the sea
Even then, you could never
Take it away from me.

I know it's not mine to keep
I know it's yours rightfully
But please
Just please
Don't take it away from me.

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Comments: 4

spongeXD [2011-07-19 00:11:55 +0000 UTC]

you are the master of classy beautiful rhymes my dear

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DaniBones In reply to spongeXD [2011-08-06 01:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww you're the master of just bein' classy and beautiful <3

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GetYourGrip [2011-07-18 04:29:17 +0000 UTC]

"If I turn into salt
And I rejoin the sea
Even then,"

broke me

and the final stanza was a surprising turn.
this poem is impacting and tough, which
is hard to accomplish in written word.

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DaniBones In reply to GetYourGrip [2011-07-18 13:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Vinnie, you flatter me so. : )

This week I'm going to be catching up on all your wonderful poetry! I have a hankering to read some, and I know that yours will be mind-blowingly awesome.

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