GetYourGrip [2011-07-18 04:29:17 +0000 UTC]
"If I turn into salt
And I rejoin the sea
Even then,"
broke me
and the final stanza was a surprising turn.
this poem is impacting and tough, which
is hard to accomplish in written word.
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DaniBones In reply to GetYourGrip [2011-07-18 13:29:35 +0000 UTC]
Vinnie, you flatter me so. : )
This week I'm going to be catching up on all your wonderful poetry! I have a hankering to read some, and I know that yours will be mind-blowingly awesome.
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