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ioanabart [2018-09-11 13:16:53 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome ^^
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ioanabart In reply to Cypcus [2018-09-11 14:49:50 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^
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theJfluffy [2018-08-21 05:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully done
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kogekisaru [2018-08-20 19:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Hello I'm here from PROJECT COMMENT! to give some hopefully meaningful critique on your piece.
Alright lets get started.Β
First I love the concept and stoy you have going in this piece great work.
You need to work on your shadows, I see a couple of problems. One is that you only shade using black, while black is fine here or there, you really want to be shading using a very dark color, something in the 2-3% range. while this may not seem like a big difference, using that color will add a vibrancy, a feeling of life, that you just can't get with only black shadows. When chosing what color to use, I recommend either the color used for ambient light, or in cases like skin the color of the subsurface scattering of the object. Your other issue with shadows seems to be a complete lack of cast shadows. These are an important tool one should be using to help control the values in the piece.
And that leads into the next thing, your values seem out of control. From a value mentality, you don't really seperate the foreground from the mid ground, or the mid ground from the background. Rather it just feels like a smooth fall off of light starting at the rock her hand is on to the pond behind her. Rather what you should be doing is using clear siluettes to seperate each part and give the piece depth. For example the staff she is holding has a very good siluette on the back side. it is noticably darker then the pon and has a clear edge, however the front of the staff almost completely loses its edge so it merges with the background and you lose depth you could have had. You have a very similar issue on her pauldrons, in both cases the pauldron is almost the exact same in value as the background so it is hard to tell how far sepearted they are from their background. On her right side I would darken the pauldron and lighten the rock some in overall value and you will quickly see the two seperate from each other and the piece start to have more depth. Getting to the hand holding the staff darken it a bit, once againt he value is too close to the value of the back ground.
SOmething I notice a lot with your shadows is you have no shadow edge, it just kinda falls off slowly. You need to more clearly define what is and isn't in light, there should be a bit of an edge between what is in shadow and what isn't, umm IDK if I can make what I'm saying here super clear without a picture, so i'll link a video that will hopefully help.Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=xcCJ2Cβ¦
So yeah overall looking really good, but a bit of a better understanding of value control and careful use of shadows could push your painting to the next level.
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Cypcus In reply to kogekisaru [2018-08-20 20:43:51 +0000 UTC]
Very thoughtfulΒ and complex critique. You're right I messed up the values pretty badly and I definitely need to work on them. And yeah, I've been watching Marco Bucci for some time now but I guess I need to rewatch some of his videos at least few times ^^
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kogekisaru In reply to Cypcus [2018-08-21 00:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Glad you found it useful.
Marco Bucci has a ton of great advice.
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dmiller32 [2018-08-19 23:35:14 +0000 UTC]
This has great atmosphere and mood to it.Β
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manson6942 [2018-08-17 17:52:51 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful work. I love all the details and colors.Β
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Daekai [2018-08-12 09:27:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, really nice piece this one! This brings me lots of reminds from my warcraft times, having a druid that reminds me a Lot to this one. I would say that the most i love from the image is that peacefull aura that you puf on it, giving the drawing an special final result. Magical!
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AutinBrony [2018-08-10 07:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me a little of that one guy from Overlord.
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Cypcus In reply to AutinBrony [2018-08-10 14:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, which one? xd
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AutinBrony In reply to Cypcus [2018-08-10 14:16:30 +0000 UTC]
The elf guy. i think his name was Oberon.
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AutinBrony In reply to Cypcus [2018-08-10 17:07:23 +0000 UTC]
Easy mistake.
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Tilpion [2018-08-08 16:42:34 +0000 UTC]
Typical druid after a rest in a Barrow den.
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Cypcus In reply to Tilpion [2018-08-09 10:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Druids be druids
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MateuszWisniewski [2018-08-08 15:49:26 +0000 UTC]
Unconventional pose and i like that!
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Tranquil-R [2018-08-07 01:18:20 +0000 UTC]
she looks sad sleeping among the trees
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Cypcus In reply to Tranquil-R [2018-08-07 15:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Who knows what is she dreaming about...
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DaniCopic [2018-08-06 07:17:34 +0000 UTC]
nice
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