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500AngryGeeseInASuit [2017-07-06 12:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Ayy! Nice to see this piece did really well! Other than the lack of comments... I'LL FIX THAT THO MA DUDE

First, lets start off on the good stuff. You have improved massively fast, stunning really, and I love this style! The anatomy is perfect, and I count really find any faults with that. Though the button placement seems a little static, but isn't really noticeable unless you focus on these things.

The colouring is done really well (along with the shading). I specifically like the highlights, as they're light enough to show the well, light, but not overly distracting. The only problem I have is that it seems a little, muted? That might've been the style you were going for, but the hints of colour could of been amplified just a touch more.

I would suggest you start to work on backgrounds (AHHHHHH). So try learning about perspective, vanishing point, all the good stuff. I'm not sure what program you use, but medibang paint pro comes with some really helpful tools for working with perspective, so try it out if you haven't.
(plus it's free)

(no I wasn't paid)

(wish i was tho)

Also, one last bit, the face is really good, the nose blends in really well, and the eyes are also done well (considering this is the first time that I know off know of you not doing a forward facing actor)

Also, going through your old art, I saw a bit off a lack of poses, so lemme give you a few of my tips (despite me not being that great myself)

Ok, start off by drawing the basic body torso... Bean? And use curvy triangles for the limbs, like so.
   
Kinda sucky right now.
Next, take two... cut off cones? And make the torso out of it, and neaten things up a lil, to you get something like this
 
A lot better right?
An important thing to note is the way the shoulders (top of the top cone) and hips (bottom of the bottom cone) interact. See how they are opposite of each other?
This style of doing things also really helps in making diverse body types, so enjoy.

k bye.

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