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Published: 2011-09-07 21:46:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 5
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Didn't want to submit to my watchers yet, but I'm not getting any responses from the redline group I put it in.
I would loooove a redline, especially of the back legs. But comments with critique are welcome as well!
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;__; I have the inability to critique this. So beautiful.. xD
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;w; Thank you! Not an expected comment for just a redline. <3
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I can't redline right now because my tablet is broken but I'll try to give a few tips.
First of all, I think the back far leg is too "straight" (not sure how else to word it
Other than that, it looks great! I love the face and ears.
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Ooh, thanks for the paw bit. :3 Using that as a visual helped me fix it and it looks better. <3 Though I haven't uploaded the new version yet. I fixed the tail a bit, too.
Thanks for the critique! :> Super helpful!
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No problem. Glad I could help!
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the thing I see is just the ankles on the hindlimbs needs to be lowered and the right back leg (its right) after the ankle, more of slope to where it meet sthe ground
if that makes sense
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That makes sense! <3 Thank you, I gotta fix that... hrmm..
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I have a simple tip that I use. now I no where as good as you are but i draw a skeleton (circles and lines) below and with my fingers i measure to make sure everything's even (between objects of the same part of the body like the paws.) Also stock images always help : )
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D: I've tried getting into skeletons for my drawings but it never became a habit. I do frequently use references though and use proportions to make it look right~
Thank you for the tip! <3
I really do need to use skeletons more often.
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c: yes skeleton's are helpful! x3 and no problem
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