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NASA ANNOUNCE 4 BLOOD MOONS TO APPEAR FROM 2014 [link]We ascended a huge volcano
to escape the morbid lair
and soon our spirits had revived
to welcome breeze and sweeter air.
But the dragon flew in hot pursuit
breathing the spirits of delusion
from his mouth flew UFO'S
and other aliens of confusion.
These parabolic ships like sulphur
pierced the inky mega void
shoals of phantom starships
haunt the astral celluloid.
In hypnotic silent motion swam
this vast luminous train
pulsating intermitantly
like phospherescent rain.
Forged in the furnace of hells resource
the saucers flew an aerial show,
not from the plutonic realms above
but from infernal pits below!
Exiled fallen angels,
victims of the serpents kiss,
routed from Gods paradise
and doomed to haunt the great abyss.
These demons and marauders
from para psychological space
homed- in toward the planet Earth
to decieve the human race.
another excerpt from my epic poem......... the Angel.
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This is a great painting. It looks like it belongs on the cover of a post apocalyptic sci-fi/fantasy novel from the 1970s.
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yes thanx.... It is one of about 24 illustrations to my epic poem, now out and available on Kindle called THE ANGEL WITH ONE WING...……..PRICED ABOUT $5
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I was right, your paintings look excellent as book covers. I thought you were joking about the epic poem for some reason, but I just looked it up on Amazon. I'm on Kindle Unlimited. I'll put it in my "to read" list. At some point in the near future, you'll probably get your first Australian ranking on Kindle.
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Thanx man ! Hi Zilch, thought you had looooooooong gone ha ha ! Real good to hear from ya, and yer still wasting yer time here
There's a particular section I know you'll love, it goes something like this:
He opened a hidden chamber
accessed by a secret door,
where danced imperious people
on a shiny chequered floor.
Chris Mass and Hal Oween
danced with Sue Perstishun,
whilst Lee Galeeze and Tobias Courts
twirled Steely Banx and Polly Titian.
Ollie Gark and Sybil Serpent
saw Barry Stirr's potential,
when Ernest Laws taxed Haven Shores
who used to be Pru Dential.
Vic Carr met Rocky Starr
Denny Grating and Del Ishuss
whilst Sue Preem was Frank Lee Keen
but thought to be Sid Dicious!
Ty Rantz and Lee Derr
had drinks with Percy Q Shun,
Milly Terry Annie Kissed
and caused a revolution.
Sian Tist loved Eddie Kashon
so too did Phil O Sophie.
Manny Facture with Robin Mason
court Traffy King and Polly See.
Ha ha, you'll have to buy it to read the rest!
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I only really got onto dA to talk to some of the people I knew. It sort of went quiet all round though. EchoplexSermon deactivated his account, you went sort of AWOL, rockthemandolin (now octopusmandolin or something like that) rarely responded any more, and I had a bit of a disagreement with a guy called Tristan on here, and he deactivated his account as well. I was logging in from time to time, but it didn't seem to have the same community feel for me that it once had. But yeah, I've been around, but not like I used to be.
I do really like that excerpt. I love the play on words with the names, it's very clever. I'm sure the whole poem would be well worth reading. From memory, you are a fan of William Blake? It's very much in the same vein, but obviously with more humour. I'm not sure that Blake was much of a humorist, but his work had the same mystical epic poetry feel that your stuff has.
It's great to see that you've finished the work, and got it published and out there. That's a big step in itself, and congratulations on finishing it. It must have taken a lot of work to get it to that stage, and I'm looking forward to reading it.
From what I know about the Kindle market, it's unfortunate but I believe that poetry has never done all that well. I think that if you turned some of the material into a novel, a novella, or a bunch of short stories in an anthology, and fit it into one of the popular genres, like sci-fi, or epic fantasy, it might sell a whole lot better. I think to sell books on Kindle there's sort of a happy medium between what you really want to write, and what sells. I know it's not about the money, but I'd like to see the information and knowledge that you have meet the biggest audience possible, and that would be usually what sells the most and pushes your book up through the rankings. Otherwise it may never reach the audience that it deserves. Just my two cents worth. I might be totally wrong though, and it might end up selling very well with a bit of a marketing push. I really hope it does.
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may i use this image as my cover photo on facebook? i will obviously give you all credentials. my facebook is 'Tama Ami'
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Sure, and a link to my gallery would be appreciated too!
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Ha yes, maybe..........but it will be a lot safer when the dragon is gone
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No, no... I want to take care of the Dragon.
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Oh no..................he is NEVER to be trusted, nor his child. He is indeed, a master of deception and will bring you into a state of hypnosis then............eat you!
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Aaaah I am sad to say that you have already been mesmerised .Love for the dragon you may have, but the Drgon knows not, the ways of love.....only greed! He looks at you and only sees LUNCH!
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Hey.........never say quit.............your life is too precious, and we are talking spiritual life here.
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But even Dragon eats me, I still love the Dragon. And I cannot die when he/she eats me... I will live inside the Dragon!
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But then you will become as cruel and heartless and loveless like him. He will digest your soul..............and you do not want that!
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It was like psychotherapy and you're right what you said... Thanx
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Again...............I thank you!
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The 'new' is just the 'old' regurgitated........spewn from the mouth of archaic wizards and priests of Baal. And we know where their power eminates from, do we not?
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Thanx as always Alex.........for you to be amazed is praise indeed!
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