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Published: 2012-07-15 18:06:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 872; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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About 5 hours - those stripes killed me.
This was supposed to have background, but then I got really very lazy.

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My RPG character Veena (on Ironclaw). She is an excellent soldier, who masters two-handed weapons.
Veena is my new character because my dear necromancer Sharlene died. ;___;

Suomeksi
Roolipelihahmoni Veena (Ironclawissa). Hän on erinomainen sotilas, joka hallitsee kahden käden aseet.
Veena on uusi hahmoni, sillä rakas necromancerini Sharlene kuoli. ;____;

This image and Veena (C)*Cheetahbird
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Comments: 26

skyworthy [2012-07-15 22:55:43 +0000 UTC]

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A lovely tigress. Nice choice of outfit. It really looks as if she could be royalty or maybe high up on the palace staff, either way it doesn't look like shes facing much hardship. The emerald really brings her character out. however while gold is a more valuable metal her jewelry blends in with her fur and it if it had not been for the turquoise It would be hard to spot. I would suggest silver for this tigress. Also I might suggest adding some green to her eyes because her outfit would complement them and with the right green it might give her eyes that glow that cats have. Your background is great because its simple. if you wanted to step it up. give her a couch in a palace or a fountain to lounge by in the shade give her a background that tells a story. She definitely is pretty enough to have one.

Rise up Soar on my Friend!

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Cheetahbird In reply to skyworthy [2012-07-16 05:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much :3

You're right - I should have used silver in her jewellery rather than gold. :3
And next time I draw Veena, I shall make her a beautiful background

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bubbles46853 [2012-12-12 01:15:52 +0000 UTC]

She's beautiful! May I hug her?

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Cheetahbird In reply to bubbles46853 [2012-12-12 09:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Sure.

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bubbles46853 In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-12-12 13:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Yay! *hugs softly*

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PyroFishies [2012-07-19 14:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, those stripes are fantastic! Although, bringing her cleavage line down a bit would make her chest look better. Other than that, awesome job!

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Cheetahbird In reply to PyroFishies [2012-07-19 17:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

I always draw the breast way too high. :'D I don't know why.

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BlackDragonRV [2012-07-17 23:27:44 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to see her without clothes... If you know what I mean.

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Cheetahbird In reply to BlackDragonRV [2012-07-18 06:56:49 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. On the sketch she didn't have any clothes, but then I decided to add some.
I didn't want to put this behind mature content tag D:

But maybe soon I'll draw her without clothes... yes. I must.

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BlackDragonRV In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-07-20 23:00:35 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE DO IT

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MancunianRain [2012-07-16 13:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is lovely :}

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Cheetahbird In reply to MancunianRain [2012-07-17 05:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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ferretsketch [2012-07-15 22:16:36 +0000 UTC]

I love the slight asian clothes and colourscheme
Anyways, for critique: I think you should study human anatomy and use pose references, that's an advice that helped me a lot
And just a quick critique for the anatomy: the breasts seems a bit too high up (they almost look like they're attached to her collarbones)
The knees and elbows seems like they're on different… levels if you understand what I mean?
Hope I wasn't too mean
Other than that, lovely work ♥

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Cheetahbird In reply to ferretsketch [2012-07-16 05:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the tip :3
Yes, I understand what you mean. I used no reference on this, and now I realize I should have used. :'D Next time I'll use a reference.

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justcallmesly [2012-07-15 20:44:08 +0000 UTC]

She's good...but you need to redo the breats...they seem a bit...off

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Cheetahbird In reply to justcallmesly [2012-07-16 05:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

You're right - drawing breasts is extremely hard for me for some strange reason :'D
I think they are a bit too high.

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AnuOjat [2012-07-15 20:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Ou ou...

Jälleen kerran näkyy askel korkeammalle...

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Cheetahbird In reply to AnuOjat [2012-07-16 05:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Voi kiitos :3 Yritän kehittyä.

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Narncolie [2012-07-15 18:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Hän on todella kaunis :3 Asento ja ilme ovat todella nätit ^^ vaatteetkin on tosi kauniisti tehty

Mitä Sharlenelle tapahtui? ;o

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Cheetahbird In reply to Narncolie [2012-07-15 18:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Kiitoksia :3

Sharlenea ammuttiin kiväärillä kylkeen ja sen jälkeen otsaan. ;__;

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Narncolie In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-07-15 18:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Ole hyvä ^^

Oww julmaa.. D;

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Cheetahbird In reply to Narncolie [2012-07-16 05:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Niin on D:
Ja kaikki vain siksi, että hetin huonosti väistönoppani... ;___;

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Narncolie In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-07-16 09:45:19 +0000 UTC]

D:

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sinako777 [2012-07-15 18:09:15 +0000 UTC]

wonderful job

she looks very lovely

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Cheetahbird In reply to sinako777 [2012-07-15 18:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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sinako777 In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-07-15 18:15:03 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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