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Published: 2012-03-25 15:36:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 944; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 13
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My RPG character in Ironclaw, Sharlene Tache. She is a sorcerer and may be later a necromancer <3.

Sharlene is 20 years old cheetah, who loves money. She is a daughter of famous and wealthy merchant, and therefore she can't reveal her true last name - Tache is just an alias.

I was too lazy to do a background. :'D

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Roolipelihahmoni Ironclawissa, Sharlene Tache. Hän on velho(tar) ja myöhemmin ehkäpä nekromantian taitaja.

Sharlene on 20-vuotias gepardi, joka rakastaa rahaa. Hän on kuuluisan ja varakkaan kauppiaan tytär, ja siksi hän ei voi paljastaa todellista nimeään - Tache on vain salanimi.

Olin liian laiska piirtämään taustaa. :'D
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Comments: 10

casetrippy [2012-03-25 17:08:39 +0000 UTC]

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Now, you have a well drawn concept, however I give you three stars for originality, because many anthro characters are quite common on deviantART.
But, with your character, I absolutely love your color scheme. It isn't a rainbow, but rather realistic colors of a cheetah. And the purple stands out pretty well, giving your character a look of power.
I recommend checking anatomy charts, anthro creatures are tricky due to the fact you have to combine human and animal anatomy. Her breasts are a bit too high, to be honest.
You have a great sense in detail, I like the patterns on her skirt. You must have put lots of time and thought into this idea. Very good, indeed!

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Cheetahbird In reply to casetrippy [2012-03-25 18:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the critique :3

I'm practicing hard on anatomy - I have still a lot to learn

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casetrippy In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-03-26 00:50:34 +0000 UTC]

It get's easier as you continue.

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Narncolie [2012-03-28 14:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Todella nätti hahmo! Se että kuvassa ei ole taustaa ei miusta haittaa yhtään, koska kuva näyttää hyvältä ilmankin :3 Hahmon asento on hieno ^^ Väritys on todella nättiä ja tuo häntä on aivan ihanan pörröinen! Kauniit vaatteetkin hänellä ja tuo tiara(?) on todella nätti :3

Hänellä on ehkä vähän liian lyhyet kädet verrattuna kroppaan

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Cheetahbird In reply to Narncolie [2012-04-02 19:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Kiiroksia :3

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ferretsketch [2012-03-25 16:00:51 +0000 UTC]

I love the eyes, they look so pretty and shiny!
The clothes looks awesome!
I like how you did the markings c:

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Cheetahbird In reply to ferretsketch [2012-03-25 16:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Gamal-the-rookie [2012-03-25 15:52:39 +0000 UTC]

This is a really nice piece of art!
She really looks persistent, like she have a zeal of some sort! i guess that zeal is money, eh?

I really like the facial expression! however the eyes might need another look over. It looked a bit "derpy" when i stared at them

Abdomen anatomy is questionable but still believable! (stomach).

Spell effect looks awesome, just like that, i too would have described necromancy magic.

Aaand the tail look good! Fluffy thing there!

good job, keep it up!

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Cheetahbird In reply to Gamal-the-rookie [2012-03-25 16:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the nice comment :3

Yeah... her zeal is always money. :'D

You're absolutely right - her eyes seem to be a bit 'derpy'. The other one, behind the hair, looks at the wrong direction. Strange

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Gamal-the-rookie In reply to Cheetahbird [2012-03-25 16:44:52 +0000 UTC]

so many awesome artists from finland! i should move there one day

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