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motifandcode [2019-08-21 18:01:53 +0000 UTC]

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The shadowy light conditions on her back, because, she is light-spotted by the mirror-lamps, look all in all very well! She looks tough, in her mirror image! The board under the mirror look very cool and shaded smoothly, maybe a bit too smooth in term of the paper distributor, that appears to "hover", maybe the perfume too, but the black paste pot is fine, for me, and the rest stuff aswell!

The Neo-noir-atmosphere is there, really!

Just these few details...

The left side hair brightened by the lamps seem okay, but the left arm of the real physical person does not seem to reach into the distance, the left hand reaching up closer to the mirror. And when it comes to the height of her breast, there I see no reason for the white line under her left shoulder, seen from the back.

The foldings, starting from her left back, do not seem to hand over to her front side...her left side does not appear to have foldings, but the back and the front of her dress have foldings....so that you need to connect these perspevtives...

These are tiny improvements, it is nearly perfect, already!

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HayateHayashi94 [2019-08-12 12:18:31 +0000 UTC]

OHAYO! I am here in behalf of and time for another review to start with!

Ooooooh, lookin' good. Nice lookin' pin-up lady!

To start of, that is a nice looking dress. The red is very vivid and vibrant, matching to the women's personality and style. Yep, giving Jessica Rabbit a run for her money lol! But beautiful red that is the spirit of a true feminine persona!

That pose is a fanservice-type. Looking in the mirror and making some compelling poses. Nice mate. The mirror is a nice looking touch. Has the classic feel, beffiting the classic looking pin-up. Lovely.

My problem is that... The posture from both the actual and the one in the mirror are uneven. Mostly her left arm looks uneven by the angle. When doing mirror poses, try matching the angle of the actual pose, like try tracing it. Also, the mirror is kinda too low. It either to me that the shelf is high by only the knee or she must be a very tall lady (Like 6'5" or something lol)

Nonetheless, it's a nice looking pin-up. Very great! Ur making use of ur great talents!

Keep it up, don't give up! I hope my advice and help better ur skills in the future!

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beardedgrandma [2019-08-10 20:03:32 +0000 UTC]

ooooooo i love the backview a lot !! did u make it?? i just think the front view can be improved !! (the one that is in the mirror). the way u can improve it is by fixing her face, like eyes should be placed more down, nose a little up and mouth a bit biggera and fuller too. it looks rly awesome tho, makes me nostalgic and reminds me of the artwork on those little books i used to have as a kid: it were like dress designing guides and i loved them !!

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UniverseOfEd [2019-08-09 14:13:48 +0000 UTC]

I dig this, i have a few observations if you don't mind.
The hands need a bit work,the left looks weird, maybe its the position, but looks like its broken and the right its on a different position compared to the reflection.
i like a lot the color you used and the details, if you follow this path you ill make beautiful artworks. I noticed that you made a good effort on the manipulation of colors and their saturation. Congrats.

Another thing that i have noticed is that there is something off with the real woman and the reflection, it looks like they are on slightly different positions, not only on  the arms but on her waist, and it looks like they have different heights, for this to happen the mirror should be on a slight angle.

I can't wait to see more at from you! I hope that my feedback isn't too harsh because i really really liked it and i'm an amateur i may be wrong with my opinions!

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