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Published: 2008-01-23 01:50:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 48; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description V1
Scattered through the night
we find the fate...of many voices
screaming to be heard
to end the hate...for their bad choices
Scattered through the fields
we come to find...blackened roses
they are for the dead
we left behind...in stiffened poses

Locked into a state of fear
nothing ever seems this clear
but this time I need you near
to end the pain...

V2
Scattered and alone
amongst the trees...cold and bitter
another voice
that whispers on the breeze...the terror flitters
Scattered and forgotten
in this place...of haunting memory
see it in the look
upon your face...a nightmare screen....

Locked into a state of fear
nothing ever seems this clear
but this time I need you near
to end the pain...end the pain!

Lock it and load it
Pull the trigger here and now
I'll take my bow
Scant few can take it
Pull the trigger, end it now
before I go too far!

Locked into a state of fear
nothing ever seems this clear
but this time I need you near
to end the pain...
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Comments: 6

ryu-son [2008-01-23 01:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Love the second to last stanza.

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BurstChyld In reply to ryu-son [2008-01-23 02:45:29 +0000 UTC]

...the wha...?

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ryu-son In reply to BurstChyld [2008-01-23 02:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Thelast... verse, I guess one would call it. XD

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BurstChyld In reply to ryu-son [2008-01-23 03:20:33 +0000 UTC]

...oh,...heheh...Im not keen on terminology. I may know a few things...but in most cases I need it dumbed up.

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ryu-son In reply to BurstChyld [2008-01-23 03:22:02 +0000 UTC]

LOL! It's okay. I'm a poetry geek, myself. XD

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BurstChyld In reply to ryu-son [2008-01-23 05:15:54 +0000 UTC]

yay...

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