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Published: 2018-04-04 19:22:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 6356; Favourites: 1182; Downloads: 0
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Commission for minihakkero of Rin from Touhou! I enjoyed working on a darker colur scheme still managing to make it look shiny. This year I'm practicing more dynamic poses on my drawings.Commissions OPEN
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Your artwork is amazing!! Specially love your colors ♥
You have a nice concept on the clothes and frills, but i think you can improve on your folding, like in this picture in particular, if she was standing up, the back would be suuuper long compared to the front, since the is almost no folding on her hips where the legs go up.
As an overall, your composition is also great but you are working with a digital drawing, so you could make adjustments to get to fit the full character in the frame, having just the tip of her feet and the little end of her hair getting out, gets a sense of it being that little bit incomplete.
You are doing great and i hope you can keep improving ♥
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It's good but also something that's been done a million times. It also doesn't catch my eye very well. Though it is still a very good work of art and looks very beautiful. I suggest different color schemes. Possibly give the hair and eyes brighter colors than the rest of the work so that it pops better. And normally the ears and tail are the same color as the hair. It doesn't exactly look right with it different colors. Other than those flaws it is a really good piece and you should keep up and keep practicing. Nice and good job. ^-^
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There's an issue with the anatomy -mostly in her waist- it's just a bit longer than it should be, or maybe because the folds in the dress aren't showing the transition correctly. Also, her feet are "a bit too tiny" again they don't look right. The hair could use some more details, though it looks OK as it is.
And now for the compliments, the background and the -light streaks- are nicely done, they do create the appropriate atmosphere for this artwork. The skin looks great when the lighting is done properly, and you've nailed in this one, good job.
The overall shape and quality are very amusing to look at, in other words She looks really cute !
Finally, these are just my personal opinions and I hope they'll be Helpful !
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It's fabulous. I love the colour choice, even though it DOES lack a bit of pop. The warm colour choices do give a very homely feeling.
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Lighting and sparkly effects look pretty cool.
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She looks so cute!!! I love her pose and facial expression! 
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Those colors are so good! Love the pose too!
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I could say some things about proportion and positioning of a leg or shoulder, question your perspective and wonder if I'm actually right on that, but to tell the truth, I don't pay much attention to that on this one, what I see is the colors Rin Kaenbyou looking happier and cuter than I've ever seen her, so much light in a character that is very well known for stealing corpses (that's what a Kasha is)...
Anyway, only thing I'm not sure about this one after looking for a while and that actually makes me feel like it could be me or it could be wrong, is her hair, for some reason it looks like there's a hole in the midle of the head, normally you'd see that in the back, like the hair is growing from there, but in this kind of hairstyle and with this length, it doesn't show, actually you only see the hair split in the middle of the head.
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ORIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fluffy ears and tails <3 very shiny kitty >,,>
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