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Third page of my comic.

God how hard it was to paint it....so many details, so much to work on. But Iam done with castle walls and in next part I wont have SOOOO big problems. So next part should be faster this time.

This part is actually page 3 and 4 in one. I combined them to create this longer version.

FOR INTERESTED

There are 2 easter eggs on this. One is simple you just need to look closer
Second is actually a MAJOR SPOILER for whole story of Rising Darkness. Your not gonna know what it is unless I tell you If you want to know, send me a note.... DO NOT ASK IN COMMENTS!!! And also SPOILER ALERT for those that want to know this secret.

Page painted in SAI only.

Hope you like it and as always BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT

MLP: FIM belongs to Hasbro
Comic and story is mine
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Comments: 100

Bonaxor In reply to ??? [2012-01-12 09:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Then go to next parts and say something about them ok? That would prove most helpful

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fyre-byrd [2019-04-26 19:34:19 +0000 UTC]

And that's how Luna REALLY ended up on the moon...

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T8B2001 [2015-10-14 02:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Guys that face is the face celestia makes in the morning in panel 16 left side

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HRP4Life [2013-09-17 01:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Warning guys! Luna gets abused even more in later pages. 10-16

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BlackRose11A [2013-08-24 06:04:25 +0000 UTC]

*to panel6* comic author: Yay im in the kitchen,  you want a sandwich?!



*back to coment* i'm sorry but thats why i like the line most horror movise and shows use," Is anyone there?" as if the expect the camera man to saw [above] love your art btw it must be hard to draw tia

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kacript [2013-07-12 06:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Looks like it's Celestia's turn to go evil.

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DarkestSunset [2013-06-06 17:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Dear God, Celestia. Lookit u.
(I'm sorry I'll go now xD)

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Derpygal [2012-11-18 03:44:42 +0000 UTC]

seriously? I kinda feel sad that Luna keeps getting vanished and banished

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Nyancat20 [2012-08-07 01:41:50 +0000 UTC]

For some reason, this made me laugh.

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FrostTheArticFox [2012-07-26 07:07:32 +0000 UTC]

'strucked' ??????

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silvermoon442 [2012-06-13 23:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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KikiWolfHeart [2012-05-24 13:18:37 +0000 UTC]

OmiGAH! Why Tia!! Reading them all!

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Mayleebell24 [2012-04-16 20:36:06 +0000 UTC]

You mean Understand not uderstand... but who care's O wells?

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Kisa94 In reply to Mayleebell24 [2012-04-17 17:32:54 +0000 UTC]

its another typo in there
instead of "what is some attacked us?"
it should be
"What,has someone attacked us?"
had a hard time moving passed that one panel but over all its good

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Mayleebell24 In reply to Kisa94 [2012-04-17 21:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Yep ur totally right!

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Kisa94 In reply to Mayleebell24 [2012-04-18 13:52:33 +0000 UTC]

oh wow rlly? it was a guess....

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Mayleebell24 In reply to Kisa94 [2012-04-18 20:38:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL AHA Yep.... ...?

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tbaransk [2012-02-06 10:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Luna returned from Ponyfille without her chariot.

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Caustizer [2012-01-24 05:02:23 +0000 UTC]

There is a bit of a desolate feeling to this strip (a good desolate feeling). One can only imagine the damage that a possessed Celestia could inflict upon all of her subjects, especially when caught by complete surprise.

It was probably a good thing that you didn't show any bloodstains >_<.

Perhaps it is your passion for drawing and Luna as a character that keeps these comics flowing, but your taste for violent upheaval has caught my attention. Few authors have really done that sort of thing right for MLP, so I will be following you.

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Bonaxor In reply to Caustizer [2012-01-24 08:23:08 +0000 UTC]

I dont want to show BIG amounts of blood in comic ( only thing that I'm gonna show will be blood leaking from the nose or mounth, or little amount of blood coming out from deep wound.)

Yes Luna is my FAV Pony ever as she is just like me.

When creating first pages of comic I was thinking of making it without violence or with it. The second option won.

And thanks for watching me

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xmoo22 [2012-01-19 09:40:46 +0000 UTC]

wait wait what... what just happened my mind is in knots

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Bonaxor In reply to xmoo22 [2012-01-19 10:37:41 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean by that cuz I dont get it? You dont understand something or maybe there is something wrong with that?

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xmoo22 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-19 10:42:12 +0000 UTC]

i don't understand why nightmare moon knocked out luna
she refereed to both of them as a good couple

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Bonaxor In reply to xmoo22 [2012-01-19 11:36:17 +0000 UTC]

First read next pages.
Second. This monster that possessed Tia, need Luna to do something and he had to move her to right place. If she wasn't knocked out Luna wouldn't go with him.
Third. For me Nightmare Moon is Luna and this ghost combined together. So when ghost is alone he is no longer Nightmare Moon, as he needs Luna to become her.

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xmoo22 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-20 01:16:15 +0000 UTC]

First: i have done so already
Second: thank you for clearing that up
Third:i think i understand what you mean in my opinion luna/ nightmare moon from episode 4 season 2 is the best looking

thank you for your time with my conversation

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Bonaxor In reply to xmoo22 [2012-01-20 07:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Np m8.

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xmoo22 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-20 12:49:45 +0000 UTC]

smiley face

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Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 17:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm. One thing, Luna seems to be too big. In the episodes she's been in, she's just a little bigger than Twilight.

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Bonaxor In reply to Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 18:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Your right m8 but I wanted her to be bigger

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Wolfking164 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-18 18:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Why? THIS ATROCITY SHALL NOT STAND!
FIX IT!

( Just saying. You shoulda gone with the correct size.)

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Bonaxor In reply to Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 18:32:20 +0000 UTC]

I know that but little Luna fighting with monster isn't what I wanted. A little bigger Luna fits the role of hero that can defeat a monster like Masarras.

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Wolfking164 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-18 18:36:09 +0000 UTC]

-_- Don't doubt the little ones. The unlikeliest people are sometimes the real heroes.

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Bonaxor In reply to Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 18:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe...your right. Like Frodo and Sam from Lord of the Rings. But what can little one do against a god which knows no pain or fear?
Can you imagine Frodo against Sauron? The real one in flesh?

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Wolfking164 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-18 20:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, yes I can. Frodo is brave at heart. ^__^ Plus, makes for a story thats more interesting. (no offense meant)

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Bonaxor In reply to Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 20:13:40 +0000 UTC]

None taken He can be brave at heart but for me the real hero of Lord Of the Rings was Samwise Gamgee He saved Frodo countless times, from Nazguls, Spider, Gollum.

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Wolfking164 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-18 20:19:41 +0000 UTC]

From Frodo himself.

Yeah. Thats true. But, gotta love the elves.

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Bonaxor In reply to Wolfking164 [2012-01-18 20:23:49 +0000 UTC]

True true.

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Vashthepsicho [2012-01-13 10:15:17 +0000 UTC]

there is a book with a smile drawn?

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Bonaxor In reply to Vashthepsicho [2012-01-13 10:20:22 +0000 UTC]

YES your right m8

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Rocktavia555 [2012-01-13 03:06:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm not reading the rest until you correct your description, and admit you spelled some things wrong.

Strucked= STRUCK
Your= YOU'RE
Happend= HAPPENED (Actually, it works either way.)
Uderstand= UNDERSTAND

....
DERN IT I'M KEEPING ON READING

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Bonaxor In reply to Rocktavia555 [2012-01-13 08:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Iam SOOOORRRRYYY for EVERY MISTAKE I know that i SUCK at writing in english THAT is why iam looking for a person that could help me correct things before i add them to comic pages. Sorry once again

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Rocktavia555 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-14 04:24:37 +0000 UTC]

*Giant smile* Pokedy Poke, Shovedy Shove!

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fotland42 [2012-01-13 00:32:15 +0000 UTC]

I would recommend taking the narration out of the last panel. You've shown Luna's scream, and that it cuts off suddenly, and you've shown the blinding light coming out of the door; I think you should just let those speak for themselves.

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Bonaxor In reply to fotland42 [2012-01-13 08:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...maybe your right m8. Normally I'm writer ( I'm not writing in English) and I like to describe what is going on there. Looks like that comic is different and ill have to trow away such narration and just add MORE pics.

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Caustizer [2012-01-12 16:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Evil Celestia really creeps me out. Good job on that particular part!

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Bonaxor In reply to Caustizer [2012-01-12 17:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Believe me you gonna be scared even more when next parts arrive

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Cirdec [2012-01-12 04:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Easter egg is the smile face on the book on the floor when Luna first entered Celestia's room. Silly Celestia, you're not suppose to draw on your books.
Your english is not very good, but your painting IS very good! Looking forward to the next page.

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Bonaxor In reply to Cirdec [2012-01-12 09:06:26 +0000 UTC]

That is exactly why iam doing it as a comic not FAN-FIC ( but there are next pages havent you seen them?)

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Cirdec In reply to Cirdec [2012-01-12 04:35:06 +0000 UTC]

And then I found that the next page already exists, lol.

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Dogman15 [2012-01-12 04:27:46 +0000 UTC]

In panel 9, it says "What is someone", but it should be "What if someone".

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