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Published: 2012-04-07 15:52:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 12996; Favourites: 309; Downloads: 53
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My friend *SultanaLime wrote this because she's awesome. ;w; So I command you to read:


Edward is enemies with the rain.

He’s by the chilled windows and who knows why because even though his right arm is back his left leg still needs automail; it is still metal hooked up to traumatized flesh. He’s having the joints of his hip throbbing and aching enough to show on his face. That’s routine whenever there is enough moisture in the air for clouds to be heavily dark and pregnant, never mind the eventual rain.

The rain falls by. The sound is actually pretty. Edward Elric’s mind is not. He already had a feeling that it’d rain today. Nightmares were usually signs of that. Nightmares and aches.

There are better memories of rain in him. The association however, is set by Edward’s mind. His worse memories are by all means defeated but they remain unpleasant.

An arousing smell softly invades his throat through the thoughts and the colours of the rain, coming through the smell of the rain permeating through the atoms’ worth of gaps between the windowpanes –he should invent a better way of ventilation. There is a sound of soft feet next to him. Edward glances to find his wife with two steaming cups of coffee, a beam set on her face. The robust smell of the coffee is delicious and he reaches forward for a cup. He likes coffee. Priscilla likes her coffee as well, and should be sitting down beside him any moment now.

She bunches her skirt and sits down on his lap instead. He should have anticipated. Not that he minds. She is smiling and curling into him. He can’t help but smile back slowly.

There’s a mischief in her eyes before they close to drink in the warm liquid cupped between her palms. She has this way with her expressions; this one tells him that things are different now. She knows better than to leave him alone during the rain, she’d told him before.

Neither of them says anything. But he gives that long-brewed dislike of his against rain and against his joints aching with the awful smell of tragedy a re-evaluation for this moment in time.

Instead he drinks in the smell of coffee, drinking in the taste too. The dull colours of the rain are replaced with the schemes of his wife’s skin, hair and eyes. Priscilla is here and lit up with her face washed over by the grey daylight and her bright red hair’s hue muted to antique-colours and she looks like a good dream, not a nightmare. Like this, he can remember that for many people rain is an episode that washes away the debris and skeletons of the troubled mind with heavy and pregnant clouds blanketing the world.



Okay so... Cherry felt like doing some toning the other day... BUT she had nothing to work with, so she drew arts she could tone and everyone lived happily ever after. The end.

Heh, uhum. I think it's been a while since I last drew Edpriss art, I've been drawing commissions....and Fiolee... hehehe. I finished it last night while I talked to who was apparently fapping to Hugh Jackman atm, but that's a different story.

Anyhow... Ed was feeling angsty... for some reason... well he's got plently of them so that's like not weird. She doesn't like it when Ed gets gloomy, she tries her best to keep him from randomly feeling angsty, so cuddling will probably do she thinks.

And there's random coffee there.... I love how this ended up having a coffee Ad feel to it. Those where coffee seems to make everything better lol.



Oh it has japanese SFXs... seriously, why do the japanese have SFXs for EVERYTHING, and when I say everything I mean EVERYTHING. They can hear shit we can't apparently, like when you smile and you make the sound "niko niko" I bet you didn't know that heh
Those were fun, but a pain in the ass to place.

Well that's about it.

Ahh! Btw, those of you wondering what the toning from my commission list looks like, it's like this.

Well yeah, feedback is appreciated! ;3

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Se I DO draw non-fanservicey fluff. Their relationship is not all about sex... I'm just truly perverted and I enjoy drawing those things. C8 But you guys already know that.

This is legit art you can take seriously.
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Comments: 30

Starman1999 [2019-09-26 19:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Super job

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RedwallChick1303 [2013-10-20 01:53:55 +0000 UTC]

One word isn't enough, but it's all I got - Adorable :3

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demonlovers [2013-08-15 18:33:07 +0000 UTC]

nice 

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Shoonah101Drawings [2013-01-05 07:30:14 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* i just love having those momments, it rains hard outside and all you can think about doing is snuggling up next to some one

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eximelove [2012-06-28 15:19:06 +0000 UTC]

wow i love this, very cute! some odd reason when i look at this im reminded about this manga i read years ago called vampire kisses.(which was originally a book series) i must be going insane. lol
anyway sweet job!

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uomie [2012-05-01 15:18:55 +0000 UTC]

ps. is that SFX: sha~ ?

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to uomie [2012-05-01 20:05:36 +0000 UTC]

No, it's ZAA for heavy rain.

Sha is シャ

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uomie In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-05-02 03:16:17 +0000 UTC]

aaah see

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uomie [2012-05-01 15:18:01 +0000 UTC]

hmmm nice story about this art...
I see.

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Toxic-Mai [2012-04-17 23:42:00 +0000 UTC]

D'aaww.....

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fire-inu-princess [2012-04-08 02:31:58 +0000 UTC]

awww

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Princesswiseandsmall [2012-04-08 02:15:14 +0000 UTC]

I think I mentioned how much I like Ed's face in the last panel -it's so Ed, All I love you, you know that? while saying nothing.

And the sharp lineart is great, you did well with the atmosphere too.

(I'm re-reading my wriitng as we speak and am glad someone lines it =A= I always hate my own writing. )

Also... Hugh Jackman. [link] juuuge...ackman (I regret nothing).

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Princesswiseandsmall [2012-04-08 02:30:09 +0000 UTC]

You did, and I agree <3 Ed can be adorbs in his own particular way.

Haha XD isn't it lovely how every single artist in the world is like that?

BULGE C8

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Princesswiseandsmall In reply to Princesswiseandsmall [2012-04-08 02:28:35 +0000 UTC]

likes* djfhdsgfhfdgfhdf

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Princesswiseandsmall In reply to Princesswiseandsmall [2012-04-08 02:16:07 +0000 UTC]

huuuge*

... Although you speak Spanish so maybe you can pretend that's the same. /is bricked.

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FullMetalWing [2012-04-08 01:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice work again I really need to learn how to ton lol

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SHAKII-SHII [2012-04-07 23:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Im not good at toning things xD

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landra15 [2012-04-07 22:45:53 +0000 UTC]

awww, so seet.

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infectitious [2012-04-07 22:19:54 +0000 UTC]

"They can hear shit we can't apparently" I'm so dumb I read it and thought you meant the japanese can hear shit (I wonder if there's a sound effect for that....

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D-Thessy [2012-04-07 21:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Pues a mi me gusta mucho cuando haces fanservice XDDDD

El dibujo es precioso y bien elaborado, yo creo que te han quedado muy bien los efectos de los comics japoneses.
¿Cómo has hecho tan bien las tramas? XD

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katkitoshi [2012-04-07 17:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Awww I love the feel of this. It's so cuddly and warm despite the bad weather

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Silenceheard [2012-04-07 16:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Coffee makes everything better!

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Chii-Bii [2012-04-07 16:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

(My dad makes coffee every morning and I'll wake up early sometimes while he's making it. Sometimes my sister will make turkey bacon. Honestly, bacon and coffee are the two best smells you can wake up to. >_<)

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PantheraShadow [2012-04-07 16:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw, cute. Even though I can't read the sfx. D: But I'm learning japanese. SO SOMEDAY I WILL!!!

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Silver-Song-Shifter [2012-04-07 16:11:44 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Rhuben5 [2012-04-07 16:05:00 +0000 UTC]

I cant read it. But its adorable so I'll shut up.

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Bitter-Cherry In reply to Rhuben5 [2012-04-07 16:05:46 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't have dialogues, they're just sound effects. :3

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Rhuben5 In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-04-07 16:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thats nice to know.

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LuckiiNana [2012-04-07 15:56:40 +0000 UTC]


This is totally adorable <3

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Awoken-Artist [2012-04-07 15:53:29 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww!

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