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B3nwa — Amber days
Published: 2010-12-03 02:36:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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The late nights,The back alleys,
Shaking hands,
Words unspoken,
Swirling thoughts,
World of memory,
Amber lights,
A long road home,
A product of reality,
Every step taken,
Is an effort made,
Back to square one,
My head falls back,
A smile slowly spreads,
I always knew, all along,
I wouldn't have it any other way,
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Comments: 4
Good job! You created some good imagery while using little words. The first stanza is my favorite. But, work on the punctuation. It's just a matter of not adding commas everywhere, of adding a period in a verse and so. Yes, something that simple. Good work!
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Lol I was never great at punctuation.
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ooo I like. Especially because I'm finally at that point in my life and it's also titled with my name ^_^
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Cool! I am glad you liked it :3
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