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Published: 2008-05-23 02:09:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 310; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description Rain like groping hands pushes into my sewer system,

A small taste of success spills into my sewer system,

Half-eaten words glop into my sewer system.


Everything worms into my sewer system.


Clashing chords tumble into my sewer system,

Piercing frequencies pour into my sewer system,

Sopping latex slips into my sewer system.


All the noises fall flat into my sewer system.


Wasted prescriptions tinkle into my sewer system,

Blazing intoxications consume into my sewer system,

Naked bottles smash into my sewer system.


I am just another sewer system.
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Comments: 15

renkyo [2008-09-25 04:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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Azayakachan In reply to renkyo [2008-09-26 01:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! XD

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renkyo In reply to Azayakachan [2008-09-29 03:51:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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noclasslass [2008-06-05 23:47:30 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful.

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Azayakachan In reply to noclasslass [2008-06-05 23:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Thankee kindly.

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noclasslass In reply to Azayakachan [2008-06-05 23:50:56 +0000 UTC]

noo problem *instant fave!!*

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witchygoddess10 [2008-05-24 03:40:35 +0000 UTC]

It's true and it's not just the sewer system of the body either. It's more.....

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Orunitia [2008-05-23 02:11:57 +0000 UTC]

i like it. very sad... yet to the point. poignant if you will

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Azayakachan In reply to Orunitia [2008-05-23 02:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :3

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Orunitia In reply to Azayakachan [2008-05-23 02:21:35 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome! i do a bit of writting myself.

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fahrae [2008-05-23 02:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow....

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Azayakachan In reply to fahrae [2008-05-23 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks?

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fahrae In reply to Azayakachan [2008-05-23 02:23:54 +0000 UTC]

yes. in other words, fantastic poem!

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Azayakachan In reply to fahrae [2008-05-23 02:24:59 +0000 UTC]

*bows* :3

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fahrae In reply to Azayakachan [2008-05-23 02:25:41 +0000 UTC]

XD

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