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Published: 2012-04-02 14:27:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2064; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 36
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Description Nelleke
Ballpoint Pen
April 2012

Playing around with that nifty little Nepalese sketchbook I've got tucked away
I've got a couple big huge projects on the table, highly refined and whatnot, plus challenges, and other random stuff that's taking forever. So, I decided to take a quick break and do some fast sketches for the sake of doing it!
This is the beautiful *Nelleke from one of her ID shots go check out her gallery, it's gorgeous!!
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AliciaMarieCreations [2012-04-02 14:53:20 +0000 UTC]

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I think you did a fantastic job on this - the hair is my favorite part. I love how you used ballpoint pen for this as it is something I have been wanting to try and to see it used so well is incredible.
I love how the bottom of the portrait fades off and the shadows you used on the left side. I am confused about what's in her hair though but assume its a flower since it's right above where one would put one and the shape. I also think that her eye might be better if it weren't so dark because it stands out so much compared to the rest of that side of her that it seems like maybe the lighting could be confused, though it does seem like makeup really - one thing that i find tough to make a portrait.
Overall, fantastic job! She is so pretty and again, I love the hair which you really got the movement of very nicely.

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Avogel57 In reply to AliciaMarieCreations [2012-04-02 16:26:59 +0000 UTC]

In retrospect, I couldve done more with the flowers; they wouldve stood out more had I used some sort of highlight. I'm not entirely satisfied with the eye, but I think it came out okay; yes, there is a fair bit of makeup involved, and that can sometimes be a challenge.
Thanks!

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AliciaMarieCreations In reply to Avogel57 [2012-04-04 01:50:41 +0000 UTC]

I think it came out okay too - you did a lot better than I could have! You're welcome, I was surprised I could send a critique since my premium membership had ended a while ago.

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Karinta [2012-09-20 03:05:59 +0000 UTC]

I like the paper you drew it on!

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Lellean [2012-04-30 22:12:28 +0000 UTC]

LOVE this one!

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stargate4ever23 [2012-04-30 21:24:35 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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Nelleke [2012-04-30 16:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Featured as well: [link]

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Avogel57 In reply to Nelleke [2012-05-01 20:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I like these little "quick" ones; they're fun, they look cool, and it doesn't take a month at the desk!

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Nelleke [2012-04-03 08:01:33 +0000 UTC]

That is absolutely amazing.

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Avogel57 In reply to Nelleke [2012-04-03 10:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, dear! I'm sorry, I totally spaced on sending you the link (shows what ya get for tryin to upload before work! )
I've got somethin' else in the works, though Ive always liked that viking looking shot (braids, black shirt); we'll see what comes up!

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Nelleke In reply to Avogel57 [2012-04-10 15:18:09 +0000 UTC]

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PippaKing [2012-04-02 14:30:58 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! seriosuly you have an amazing talent I especially like the detail on the hair it looks so realistic!

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