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"I can remember so vividly the gentle expression; the poetic playfulness hidden behind such big, gray eyes. Eyes that were so bold and bright, and so full of wonder despite their faded colors.

I can remember how they looked up at me, pleading for an answer I could not give. For how could I hold such painful truths before them, to tell him the reason the others would not play with him, to the scornful looks their mothers gave.

That such rejection came from his colors; the ashen scales and cloudy eyes; and that a sickness was superimposed upon such dull shades, where vibrant colors should have flourished. Yet if color were to return to such gentle eyes, it would settle like a madness into the mind, and I fear for what would happen then.

For when I look now, I see the calm, carefree spirit and playful glitter in such gray eyes.

Sometimes I wonder what color they could have been... or what they could still become. I hoped maybe they'd be an ashen blue like his father before him. But I dare not wish for it, as I fear the sickness could still hold strongly, and infest itself with such bloom.

That fear holds bitterly some days. Often it lingers like the clouds above the seas, threatening to pour down, and yet it never rains; just leaving the endless sky of gray.

I remember the little fight that day... The snaps and growls of angry guppies scrapping after a piece of fish left over from the hunts. It seemed a normal affair, for children were constantly competing with one another in their little pecking class. Except... that day, the whole world turned green...For what stared back at me in the afterward was no longer the gentle gray, but a fierce emerald, even with the look of guilt, they held only a powerful and unnerving aura.

The others had felt it too, for even the boldest among us was wary to approach.. even if the sight before them was just a guppy.

I prayed that it was a sign of health rather than the omen it perceived.... But the omen remained and with it came a sea of blood...

Red the waters had turned... a sign of a fight far more severe than the first. One of the guppies growing frustrated and once again going after the others over the scraps.

What I remember most vividly was the little fangs sinking deep into the gills of another, bodies struggling for breath; how he looked up at me with those now toxic, green eyes and chirped happily, surrounded by the dead and dying bodies of his 'playmates'.

It was then that I came to understand... That my little gray eyed boy was gone from me. Lost like the souls of the pour children littered around him.... Everything was swallowed up in that overwhelming swirl of green, even that gentle gray I had come to love.... And in its wake it left a sickness I was forced to cure, even if my hands were shaking.. and my heart pleading..."

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    Maddie
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Comments: 76

19koky93 [2020-05-07 23:15:48 +0000 UTC]

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chocobochickfantasy [2019-12-08 21:47:31 +0000 UTC]

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wallavan000 [2017-09-10 15:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Sooo  cute!

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KnightOwl247 [2017-05-22 01:03:29 +0000 UTC]

The drawing is adorable, and the description is so sad and depressing. My poor baby and his poor mother....TT^TT

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EspeonGirl101 [2017-03-12 19:54:32 +0000 UTC]

that's so cute

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Ehsol-namu [2017-03-02 23:20:29 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe this is a fanfic. You could easily just change the character's names and the title a bit, and it would be a whole new original story in its own right! 

And baby mer Danny is so cute!

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JozeeBird [2016-03-28 01:05:57 +0000 UTC]

This is soooooo cute!

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Monocheshaa [2015-09-07 14:34:22 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS BOTH ADORABLY CUTE AND SEVERELY DEPRESSING TTATT

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Nightstormshadow [2015-08-07 20:54:13 +0000 UTC]

seriusly ur mers are soooo cute i want one!!!

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JustAMyth250 [2015-05-25 02:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Ommmgggg
So cute

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xSovietHusky5468x [2015-05-14 22:35:36 +0000 UTC]

     

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Im-Stuck-In-A-Well [2015-05-03 23:21:56 +0000 UTC]

That is... Depressing. But... Wow. Really sheads light on Captivity!
And DANG this is cute!

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Atrieisan In reply to Im-Stuck-In-A-Well [2015-05-27 09:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Captivity is meant to be a rather heavy story. Right now  it's just in its light hearted fluffy phase before it finally evolves into what it shall become.

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Im-Stuck-In-A-Well In reply to Atrieisan [2015-05-28 02:12:31 +0000 UTC]

AHHH I can't wait!

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streamfur97 [2015-02-11 00:35:20 +0000 UTC]

That's a sad backstory 

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ZoneRobotnik [2014-11-27 01:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww....poor little guppy...

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Kiomori [2014-09-25 23:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Such a sad backstory. I wonder what that sickness is/was?

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Atrieisan In reply to Kiomori [2014-09-26 15:51:01 +0000 UTC]

I intend to elaborate on that further along in the story or possibly only in the sequel. But we'll see where it goes.

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SS-Pie [2014-09-17 05:42:51 +0000 UTC]

AWEEE! Cutie Babby Danny. I want to cuddle him! *nearly gets fingers bitten off*  Cute but dangerous.

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Atrieisan In reply to SS-Pie [2014-09-17 16:38:45 +0000 UTC]

He can be quite cute can't he? Its just sad that his sickness leaves him so very aggressive.

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starrygirl123 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-01-31 18:16:01 +0000 UTC]

what sickness is it??

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Atrieisan In reply to starrygirl123 [2015-01-31 18:28:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm yet to find anything close with a scientific name yet. But it's something similar to rabies? Its an illness that affects the mind, resulting in increased aggression, unable to differentiate between friend or foe.

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starrygirl123 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-01-31 21:45:39 +0000 UTC]

ahhh i see

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SS-Pie In reply to Atrieisan [2014-09-22 00:31:12 +0000 UTC]

This is true. I read all the bits of info I can find on his back story. I don't care if this kid....fishie... Babby... whatever is a fish - he has a tragic back story and is a tortured soul. Still, he is a cutie and you art is fantastic!

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DemApples2598 [2014-08-01 07:13:41 +0000 UTC]

So adorable *-*

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TacTheScribbler [2014-07-28 14:02:15 +0000 UTC]

O_O Faved not only for the beautiful art, but for the gorgeous narrative below it! ^^

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Atrieisan In reply to TacTheScribbler [2014-08-02 10:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the narrative. It's kind of a snippet into Danny's backstory in captivity

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TacTheScribbler In reply to Atrieisan [2014-08-02 14:34:05 +0000 UTC]

And it's very well-written! I've been reading the fan fiction whenever I see the chapter covers pop up in my inbox. I love the idea behind the story, and the twist on the DP universe. *_*

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bleachcrater [2014-07-27 17:28:51 +0000 UTC]

why are danny's story always so dark

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bleachcrater [2014-07-27 17:25:16 +0000 UTC]

is there a fandome about this?

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Atrieisan In reply to bleachcrater [2014-07-27 20:30:34 +0000 UTC]

._. So far only the one I've been making. This AU is my own.  There is another story out there, but it's more of a romance/comedy than scifi.

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bleachcrater In reply to Atrieisan [2014-07-29 12:37:13 +0000 UTC]

sweet romance not for me

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elfvale [2014-07-25 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]

So cute

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Oblitus-Angeli [2014-07-25 22:46:12 +0000 UTC]

It's hard to believe someone so small and benevolent could turn into a killer...

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paperflowers1212 [2014-07-25 16:22:32 +0000 UTC]

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Ryusoku [2014-07-25 13:32:05 +0000 UTC]

And once again I squee at pitches that only dogs can hear. Thanks for that 

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Ui-Azuma [2014-07-25 12:03:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute  

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RandsValstar [2014-07-25 11:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Good lord this is so cute!! 0.0

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Sukeiisu [2014-07-25 10:36:46 +0000 UTC]

at first i was like '' awww cute '' and after the story i was like '' wait what... '' it is very unsettling for the fact that such a cute picture has such a dark backstory.



i like it

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Atrieisan In reply to Sukeiisu [2014-07-25 16:48:54 +0000 UTC]

It is a sad backstory, but it makes up who he is and why his family treats him like they do.

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Sukeiisu In reply to Atrieisan [2014-07-25 16:56:14 +0000 UTC]

well sad backstories can bring up some interesting things in the story i will be waiting in that one corner that light won't reach for the next chapter ouo

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Red-Raven-X [2014-07-25 06:19:16 +0000 UTC]

baby ;;

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CSIalchemist [2014-07-25 04:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Cute but deadly!
I wonder what made his eyes turn green like that.

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Atrieisan In reply to CSIalchemist [2014-07-25 16:47:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm debating on some sort of mutation currently, since I don't want to get into the magic portion of the mythology (I'm going for more scifi than fantasy. ) I'm still thinking it has something to do with a mix of aggression triggering some sort of chemical affect or if its triggered by age.

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DeathBright [2014-07-25 01:21:53 +0000 UTC]

What the hell did they do to him to make little Danny so mad!?
That was fantastic though, and the drawing is very cute.

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Atrieisan In reply to DeathBright [2014-07-25 16:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Aggression is like a sickness in the mind. The whole concept of the sickness is that when it takes hold, it causes him to snap and take that aggression out on anyone.

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DeathBright In reply to Atrieisan [2014-07-25 16:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Poor Danny

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Windstorm-5 [2014-07-25 00:51:26 +0000 UTC]

So adorable!!!

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Gracyn [2014-07-24 23:02:01 +0000 UTC]

So cute!

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Kirito109 [2014-07-24 23:00:36 +0000 UTC]

SO KAWAII!!!!!!!!!

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