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Description Dearest Samantha,

Once again I wish to say it has been a pleasure. My partner and I are quite grateful that you and your uncle have allowed us to view, and treat your magnificent friend. Danny wasn't it? Quite a fitting name, seeing how protective he is. It's not every day your such a bond between man and beast.~

From our last visit I can successfully say that your mermian friend is growing stronger by the day and should continue to improve as long as you continue on the scheduled diet. His liking for shellfish does honestly surprise me though, seeing as the mers we've studied over the years find them too much of a hassle for the amount of intake they require. They can be quite the big eaters, can't they?

On another note, I'm aware that since you've had to play peace keeper between us and Danny you've not really been able to view the medical aspect. Considering your letters, and questions, it's only fair that I answer some of them, seeing as you are the closest one to him, and therefore should know what to look for. 
These are what his stats should be as follows:

Approx: 327 -350 lbs (148 - 158kg)
Length: 8'6" (253 cm)
Scales should feel sleek, retaining a deep rich color. (In this case I would say look for ebony over gray)

 As it was mentioned, your friend was very underweight, seeing as not eating and a high metabolism don't exactly mix. I recommend any treats your can find with a high caloric intake. The added attention is also a good stress reliever seeing as mers are social creatures, preferring the company of their shoal. Your uncle mentioned the use of puzzle toys earlier on (which I must say is a fascinating experiment), which I think would be a wonderful comeback as an added source of entertainment. Anything to keep Danny's mind occupied and stress free is the wisest option I can give while he is in your family's care. I'm sure you are aware as to why I insist on it so.

When we first arrived, we were honestly surprised to find that young aquatic resident is in fact a phantom mer. Phantoms, also known as Dark Mers, are a classificaton given to sickly, faded mers. While there are a number of illnesses that can result in faded or dull shades, only one known illness results in shades of or near pitch black. While not specifically classified, its closest relation is Rage Syndrome, or SOA (Sudden Onset Aggression), which is an epileptic/neurological illness that affects the emotion, recognition, and memory parts of the brain.  While SOA itself is a disease that generally targets certain breeds of dogs, it is the closest comparison to what we have. 

Mers with SOA can suddenly act aggressively to anyone nearby, but minutes later will be calm and normal. They will not seem to remember or realise what has taken place and may act immediately friendly to the person(s) whom are attacked. Attacks such as these cannot be prevented as is not consciously controlled, and can seem to happen without any particular cause. Though it isn't uncommon for certain actions or events to trigger an attack, thus it is wise to try and avoid any known triggers or encourage new ones.

Symptoms to look out for prior to an attack; the eyes glazing over or going hard, followed by snapping into alert mode. An alert or agitated mer can be identified easily, as their sail fin acts as a big warning sign. The more raised and tense the fins become, the more alert he will be, and likely more aggressive afterwards.

Therefore I ask that you do take care, and keep yourself safe. While protective Danny may be, hope that it doesn't end up turning on you. If it does, I hope this helped you recognize the signs before someone gets hurt. You're uncle is a brave and lucky man.

~ Sincerely
Oliver

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The image is just a series of full body profiles of the characters. Sometimes in stylized images and covers you can't really see the whole character, and thus you are often left to make up the bits and pieces that are often left out, only to find they don't match up when the author ends up throwing it out there later on. I've had that a couple of times and it always makes me hit my head on the desk when it does. So its really just to clarify a few points with Danny overall, as each character has their special traits.
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Comments: 50

Wakerrife [2018-02-10 17:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice 

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TsukikoKanzaki [2017-03-13 19:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Danny's scales aren't faded or dull. They're more like a deep, rich greenish black with darker stripes and white fins.

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Kapera13 [2017-02-07 15:43:38 +0000 UTC]

I love your art and I seriously love Danny's colourings! Is Danny actually really dark green with black stripes, instead of just being black? And, if he hadn't been born a phantom mer, what would his colourings have been instead? You know, hypothetically. 

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Atrieisan In reply to Kapera13 [2017-02-13 02:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, Danny actually possesses a falso positive phenotype. He's supposed to ne a Drake, but his illness created a trigger during development which caused him to essentially become a Bull despite his lineage. If healthy, he would of been a deep blue with possibly pale gold fins similar to his fathers.

For the most part he is black. But theres no such thing as truely pure black, even a black sharpie is really a dark variation of brown or blue. Danny's just happens to been a green shade of black. The stripes are similar to that of a black panther's spots, only visible in the sun.

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Kapera13 In reply to Atrieisan [2017-03-13 03:16:10 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome! Thanks for your reply!
I seriously love you art and your story so much! ^_^

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Dream-Angel-Artista [2016-05-31 04:29:56 +0000 UTC]

This merman verry amazing!🐠

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Ryusoku [2015-06-12 17:20:01 +0000 UTC]

So is this going to be a series where we can see the rest of Danny's shoal? I'm curious to see how Jazz looks compared to her brother.

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Atrieisan In reply to Ryusoku [2015-06-14 09:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. I have been working on Jazz as of late. :3

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Ryusoku In reply to Atrieisan [2015-06-14 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]

I've been meaning to ask how many members are in Maddies group?

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Atrieisan In reply to Ryusoku [2015-07-07 07:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I'm gandering anywhere between 20 to 30 members. Shoals usually consist of six or seven family groups.

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DisplacedSoutherner [2015-05-31 05:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww he's so flippin' cute.

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itachixsakura7777 [2015-05-21 19:10:07 +0000 UTC]

cool 

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Jazzi-Crystol [2015-04-11 23:46:57 +0000 UTC]

you have such a beautiful character
i know.. i just randomly pop up yesh xD i couldnt help it- i viewed through such an interesting and beautiful gallery~ really nice work!

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Atrieisan In reply to Jazzi-Crystol [2015-05-27 09:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Daaawww, thank you

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Jazzi-Crystol In reply to Atrieisan [2015-05-27 17:19:17 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome ^_^

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Im-Stuck-In-A-Well [2015-04-09 03:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Sounds interesting! I wonder how Sam will react..

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seantriana [2015-03-25 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]

I always did that different-information thing in most of my essays(and in my horrible unpublished fanfictions). And since you are describing a character, there are sure are a lot of details to remember.  Sketches of the character always are good to keep beside. Yep, and hug them to sleep, then you start to dream about them.

Gosh ~~ 

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Atrieisan In reply to seantriana [2015-05-27 09:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Most of my stories start off as dreams and then take a little reworking to make into a sensible storyline. There usually is a lot of information, which is why I'm trying to work on anatomy sheets and everything else. It just turns into me needing a giant box for all the sketches. <<

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GirlFish01 [2015-02-28 03:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Drag0n24 [2015-02-27 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]

nice texture

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Kiomori [2015-02-23 05:27:16 +0000 UTC]

As much as I'm leery of the agents after going along with Vlad's plans last chapter, this letter was very interesting to read. How much of his length is his torso vs his tail?

It's sad to hear about the SOA. Maybe once they know about things like that they can hopefully avoid incidents. 
How often does it, or the other illnesses that darken the scales, appear in mers? If mer parents recognize the dark scales it can't be insanely rare, right?

Love the full body image too!

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Atrieisan In reply to Kiomori [2015-03-02 23:27:41 +0000 UTC]

His torso is longer than ours by a few extra ribs. As for his length, is tail and body sort of blend into one, though the muscle mass of his tail makes up about 2/3 of his length, and approx 3/4 of his weight. Its a giant mass of strength.

SOA itself isnt all that common. But illnesses are still held with a wary disposition.

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Wintermoonfeather [2015-02-23 01:25:17 +0000 UTC]

*heavy breathing*

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Atrieisan In reply to Wintermoonfeather [2015-02-23 01:53:13 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Wintermoonfeather In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-23 02:06:53 +0000 UTC]

 

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throne-king-master [2015-02-22 04:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank goodness! It's good to hear that he's making a good recovery. Although, one letter isn't going to cut it for me. I need to read that Danny is back to 110% and all is forgiven!....or made up at least.....bygones be bygones?
I will say that, while I am no longer on the edge of my seat I am not, however, fully reclined. 
I will look forward towards your next release. Keep up the good work!

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Atrieisan In reply to throne-king-master [2015-02-22 05:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Though the letter was really just a fancy excuse for me to explain danny's health while giving a full body shot of what he looks like without any fancy lighting, etc.  The actual chapter is in the works still.

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throne-king-master In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-24 05:05:18 +0000 UTC]

I understand completely.

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MissDarkAngel-167 [2015-02-21 16:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness he has a beautiful design! <3 And the fact it's Danny just makes me happier, this is awesome XD 

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jayswing96 [2015-02-21 10:07:17 +0000 UTC]

I love how every time you redraw Danny and any other character you can see how much effort you put in to them as well as the care to make them believable and improve your skills at the same time.

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Atrieisan In reply to jayswing96 [2015-02-21 18:50:50 +0000 UTC]



Tis something I work very hard on. I'm constantly attempting to work with anatomy, etc to try and get something that works. Danny's anatomy, along with the other mers in Captivity is a difficult feat, seeing as I've been reworking the entirety of the skeleton and how they move. Like how they sit or 'stand' /lay on their bellies rather than floating upright like you see eighty percent of mer pictures. They also don't have that awkward knee joint, moving more in a natural side to side motion that an up and down one; this also affects how they sit too...  So trying to make it look right can be an honest pain sometimes. .__.

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jayswing96 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-22 01:13:58 +0000 UTC]

I think a sort of good place to look at is the Harry Potter movie merpeople. (Their faces leaves something to be desired though.) They have a side-to-side swim style too, and maybe if there are some good enough pics you can a good enough idea as to how they move. Hope this helps.

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Atrieisan In reply to jayswing96 [2015-02-22 05:35:52 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to look into it. I never really gave them much food for though, possibly as they were seen as barely a glimpse. .__.

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jayswing96 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-22 19:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Very true but in the movie when the mer swam away from Harry it was pretty clear it was side-to-side and he(she) was very fast compared to Harry with his Gillyweed. (It was very shark-like to me.)

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bleachcrater [2015-02-21 08:34:28 +0000 UTC]

i realy enjoy seeing your art work in your story's

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ignesfatuis [2015-02-21 07:14:05 +0000 UTC]

You know, I really thought I could just enjoy the beautiful pictures without tipping over into reading the story. This picture broke that assumption, and I have now read the story and eagerly await more... its just so good! A perfect counterpart to your lovely art.

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Atrieisan In reply to ignesfatuis [2015-02-21 18:44:44 +0000 UTC]

I've known a few stories like that where all I was really interested in was the pictures. Until they end up coming out with some images that make me tilt my head and go "wait what?" Then I end up getting sucked into wanting to know what happens.

I'm glad you've been enjoying the story thus far. I'm going to warn you that this isn't meant to be a romance story, and it's going to have a number of twists and turns that are probably going to end up surprising people. :3

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ignesfatuis In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-22 05:36:10 +0000 UTC]

I stand ready to be surprised! Or... wait... perhaps just eager to see what's in store

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WildStory [2015-02-21 05:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

Just wow.

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molletay000 [2015-02-21 04:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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ApolloNight [2015-02-21 04:30:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like how all his skin is kinda scally, even the human looking parts. The letter was very interesting too, and a bit creepy.... considering what may be coming.

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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2015-02-21 18:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Twas the attempt actually. His entire body is covered in scales, the ones that look like skin are just smaller and finer than his black armor plated ones. Funny part is that if they're compared right next to a regular human hand, you can see the scales (obviously) and his tone is slightly gold in comparison.

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ApolloNight In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-21 20:31:52 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool! I like that idea that its AL scales on a mer, even lighter finer ones. I like your ideas of mers in general.

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Alice-WhiteRabbit [2015-02-21 03:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Mer mood-swings.

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TheMarginalthinker [2015-02-21 02:57:02 +0000 UTC]

I love the sheen coloring on his scales, how it looks green, like he's underwater. 

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Atrieisan In reply to TheMarginalthinker [2015-02-21 03:05:47 +0000 UTC]

It was the attempt. When I first started there was just too much blue on his scaling, so I had to add a hue to it which ended up with green. But it works more or less, the hard part with having a black mer is I can't just put black on the table, otherwise it's flat and there's no sense of space.

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iceandra [2015-02-21 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness :3

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DaughterOfMaat [2015-02-21 02:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome data!

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Cursed-Smile [2015-02-21 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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Scartato [2015-02-21 01:37:45 +0000 UTC]




I love this AU!/Fanfic version of the DP cast.~

Keep up the good work!

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