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Wakerrife [2018-02-10 17:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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TsukikoKanzaki [2017-03-13 19:39:51 +0000 UTC]
Danny's scales aren't faded or dull. They're more like a deep, rich greenish black with darker stripes and white fins.
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Kapera13 [2017-02-07 15:43:38 +0000 UTC]
I love your art and I seriously love Danny's colourings! Is Danny actually really dark green with black stripes, instead of just being black? And, if he hadn't been born a phantom mer, what would his colourings have been instead? You know, hypothetically.
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Atrieisan In reply to Kapera13 [2017-02-13 02:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, Danny actually possesses a falso positive phenotype. He's supposed to ne a Drake, but his illness created a trigger during development which caused him to essentially become a Bull despite his lineage. If healthy, he would of been a deep blue with possibly pale gold fins similar to his fathers.
For the most part he is black. But theres no such thing as truely pure black, even a black sharpie is really a dark variation of brown or blue. Danny's just happens to been a green shade of black. The stripes are similar to that of a black panther's spots, only visible in the sun.
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Kapera13 In reply to Atrieisan [2017-03-13 03:16:10 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! Thanks for your reply!
I seriously love you art and your story so much! ^_^
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Ryusoku [2015-06-12 17:20:01 +0000 UTC]
So is this going to be a series where we can see the rest of Danny's shoal? I'm curious to see how Jazz looks compared to her brother.
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Atrieisan In reply to Ryusoku [2015-06-14 09:16:44 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. I have been working on Jazz as of late. :3
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Ryusoku In reply to Atrieisan [2015-06-14 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]
I've been meaning to ask how many members are in Maddies group?
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Atrieisan In reply to Ryusoku [2015-07-07 07:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I'm gandering anywhere between 20 to 30 members. Shoals usually consist of six or seven family groups.
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Im-Stuck-In-A-Well [2015-04-09 03:42:37 +0000 UTC]
Sounds interesting! I wonder how Sam will react..
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seantriana [2015-03-25 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]
I always did that different-information thing in most of my essays(and in my horrible unpublished fanfictions). And since you are describing a character, there are sure are a lot of details to remember. Sketches of the character always are good to keep beside. Yep, and hug them to sleep, then you start to dream about them.
Gosh ~~
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Atrieisan In reply to seantriana [2015-05-27 09:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Most of my stories start off as dreams and then take a little reworking to make into a sensible storyline. There usually is a lot of information, which is why I'm trying to work on anatomy sheets and everything else. It just turns into me needing a giant box for all the sketches. <<
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Drag0n24 [2015-02-27 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]
nice texture
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Kiomori [2015-02-23 05:27:16 +0000 UTC]
As much as I'm leery of the agents after going along with Vlad's plans last chapter, this letter was very interesting to read. How much of his length is his torso vs his tail?
It's sad to hear about the SOA. Maybe once they know about things like that they can hopefully avoid incidents.
How often does it, or the other illnesses that darken the scales, appear in mers? If mer parents recognize the dark scales it can't be insanely rare, right?
Love the full body image too!
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Atrieisan In reply to Kiomori [2015-03-02 23:27:41 +0000 UTC]
His torso is longer than ours by a few extra ribs. As for his length, is tail and body sort of blend into one, though the muscle mass of his tail makes up about 2/3 of his length, and approx 3/4 of his weight. Its a giant mass of strength.
SOA itself isnt all that common. But illnesses are still held with a wary disposition.
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MissDarkAngel-167 [2015-02-21 16:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness he has a beautiful design! <3 And the fact it's Danny just makes me happier, this is awesome XD
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jayswing96 [2015-02-21 10:07:17 +0000 UTC]
I love how every time you redraw Danny and any other character you can see how much effort you put in to them as well as the care to make them believable and improve your skills at the same time.
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Atrieisan In reply to jayswing96 [2015-02-21 18:50:50 +0000 UTC]
Tis something I work very hard on. I'm constantly attempting to work with anatomy, etc to try and get something that works. Danny's anatomy, along with the other mers in Captivity is a difficult feat, seeing as I've been reworking the entirety of the skeleton and how they move. Like how they sit or 'stand' /lay on their bellies rather than floating upright like you see eighty percent of mer pictures. They also don't have that awkward knee joint, moving more in a natural side to side motion that an up and down one; this also affects how they sit too... So trying to make it look right can be an honest pain sometimes. .__.
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jayswing96 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-22 01:13:58 +0000 UTC]
I think a sort of good place to look at is the Harry Potter movie merpeople. (Their faces leaves something to be desired though.) They have a side-to-side swim style too, and maybe if there are some good enough pics you can a good enough idea as to how they move. Hope this helps.
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Atrieisan In reply to jayswing96 [2015-02-22 05:35:52 +0000 UTC]
I'll have to look into it. I never really gave them much food for though, possibly as they were seen as barely a glimpse. .__.
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jayswing96 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-22 19:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Very true but in the movie when the mer swam away from Harry it was pretty clear it was side-to-side and he(she) was very fast compared to Harry with his Gillyweed. (It was very shark-like to me.)
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bleachcrater [2015-02-21 08:34:28 +0000 UTC]
i realy enjoy seeing your art work in your story's
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ignesfatuis [2015-02-21 07:14:05 +0000 UTC]
You know, I really thought I could just enjoy the beautiful pictures without tipping over into reading the story. This picture broke that assumption, and I have now read the story and eagerly await more... its just so good! A perfect counterpart to your lovely art.
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Atrieisan In reply to ignesfatuis [2015-02-21 18:44:44 +0000 UTC]
I've known a few stories like that where all I was really interested in was the pictures. Until they end up coming out with some images that make me tilt my head and go "wait what?" Then I end up getting sucked into wanting to know what happens.
I'm glad you've been enjoying the story thus far. I'm going to warn you that this isn't meant to be a romance story, and it's going to have a number of twists and turns that are probably going to end up surprising people. :3
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WildStory [2015-02-21 05:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
Just wow.
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molletay000 [2015-02-21 04:31:42 +0000 UTC]
Amazing
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ApolloNight [2015-02-21 04:30:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like how all his skin is kinda scally, even the human looking parts. The letter was very interesting too, and a bit creepy.... considering what may be coming.
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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2015-02-21 18:40:10 +0000 UTC]
Twas the attempt actually. His entire body is covered in scales, the ones that look like skin are just smaller and finer than his black armor plated ones. Funny part is that if they're compared right next to a regular human hand, you can see the scales (obviously) and his tone is slightly gold in comparison.
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ApolloNight In reply to Atrieisan [2015-02-21 20:31:52 +0000 UTC]
That's really cool! I like that idea that its AL scales on a mer, even lighter finer ones. I like your ideas of mers in general.
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TheMarginalthinker [2015-02-21 02:57:02 +0000 UTC]
I love the sheen coloring on his scales, how it looks green, like he's underwater.
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Atrieisan In reply to TheMarginalthinker [2015-02-21 03:05:47 +0000 UTC]
It was the attempt. When I first started there was just too much blue on his scaling, so I had to add a hue to it which ended up with green. But it works more or less, the hard part with having a black mer is I can't just put black on the table, otherwise it's flat and there's no sense of space.
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iceandra [2015-02-21 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Awesomeness :3
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Cursed-Smile [2015-02-21 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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