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When Bardak detected multiple asteroids headed toward Angel Falls, Bardak grinned at the chance to test his new weapons upgrade to the Helios. As he entered the commands for take-off, he began to power all his ship weapons.

The moment he got within firing range, he unleashed hell on the approaching asteroids. All the asteroids were destroyed with quantum torpedoes, rapid-fire ion blasts, or the main rail gun. With most of the asteriods destroyed, Bardak watched at the asteroid debris that reached the planet's atmosphere slowly burn away into dust. With his weapons test complete, Bardak entered the commands to return back to base...satisfied at his ship's weapon performance.

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atomskmaster6 In reply to ??? [2012-08-22 21:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, He is very proud of his ship!

General Bardak: *opens all communications channels* "Unidentified vessel...This is General Bardak of the URSS Helios. Identify yourself!"

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-08-22 21:55:04 +0000 UTC]

The ship answers....

HATE KING-"Hello Barpuke! This is the might True Lord of all Evil the Hate King! MAW HA HA HA HA HA! I'm not gonna bother to ask permission to land in Angel falls cause I don't need too"!

Since Bardak has all communication channels on he also hears...

ANTIFREEZE-"Dude? Didn't he see the giant Evil "G" on the side of the ship"?

TOBY-"I told ya he was a dork"......

ESMERALDA-"BARDAK WATCH OUT..!? MMMPPHHH"......

HATE KING-"That'll be enough of that Esmeralda!Stand down Bardak,don't make me let lose with all my firepower on you! And besides I have my aramada right behind me MAW HA HA HA HA HA"!!!

Many diffrent sized ships around the central one which is the Hate King's "Doomsday" ship! The strongest ship in his arsenel! And with Esmeralda on bored Love King can't be too far behind!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-08-25 09:27:41 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *scans the ship and is shocked at the analysis. He then smirks and powers his engines, sheilds, and weapon systems* "I'll save your ship for later, but in the meantime, I think I'll test my weapons on your armada." *he engages his engines and moves at lightspeed, past the armada's firepower. He then unleashes a wide volley of quantum torpedoes, rapid-fire ion blasts, or the main rail gun at the ship. Many vessels are instantly destroyed*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-08-27 18:05:54 +0000 UTC]

HATE KING-"ALL SYSTEMS FULL POWER!!! MAW HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Your days are numbred BarDork! Now taste the heat of my DOOMSDAY LASER"!!!

ANTIFREEZE-"DUDE! He's taking out a lot of ships at once"! O_O'

TOBY-"That ship of his is preety rare".....

HATE KING-"Let him take as many pawns as he needs!FIRE"!!!

Hate King slides the handle on his control deck all the way up and presses the BIG RED BUTTON!!! The front of the Doomsday ship opens and a huge laser blast is fired at Bardak's ship! (It's wide! Don't know the meserments but it's a huge beam!)

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-09-07 17:42:00 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *after the laser hits* "Compute...Computer...Damage Report!" *in a female/monotone voice* "Shields at 47%, torpedoes are offline, life support heavily damaged, hull breaches on deck 3." "That's it...auxiliary power to shields. Initiate Specter-1" *Acknowledged* *the Helios soon moved into position and was facing the Doomsday ship.*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-09-10 20:12:28 +0000 UTC]

TOBY-"GOOD LORD"!?

ANTIFREEZE-"We acutelly got him"!?

HATE KING-"OF COURSE WE GOT HIM YOU NITWITS! WHY DO YOU SOUND SO FREAKING SURPRIZED"!?

TOBY-"He's facing us now boss"..

HATE KING-"So you wanna stair death in the face before you go Bardak"?

ANTIFREEZE-"BOss"....

HATE KING-"DON'T BOTHER ME WHILE I'M ENDING A GENERAL'S LIFE"!

ANTIFREEZE-"The bridge! LOOK AT THE BRIDGE"!

TOBY-"Aw shit -_-' Here we go".....

The Pit sees a huge keyhole appear and Ultra Love King comes shooting out of it!

ESMERALDA-"Love king"! ^^

HATE KING-"Calm down Gypsy! He's not rescuing you today! ANTIFREEZE! TOBY! Take care of General Pain-in-the-Ass while I deal with my Brother"!

Toby and Antifreeze salute there Boss and take the controls....

(Ha ha I didn't expect them to conect with the Helios!) ^^

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-09-10 22:01:37 +0000 UTC]

(Don't worry, they won't destroy the Helios, besides, you can't have a battle-hardened hero with a little damage.)

General Bardak: *the Helios powers its engines and flies straight toward the Doomsday ship*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-09-11 21:01:08 +0000 UTC]

TOBY-"He's trying to ram us"!?

ANTIFREEZE-"The idiot! Now he's done for! Open the hatch Toby"!

TOBY-"Don't order me around Jew"!

ANTIFREEZE-"Toby would you PLEASE open the hatch"! -_-

TOBY-"That's better"....

Toby opens up the front of the ship! Now the Helios is flying straight in to the open mawl of the ship!Not only is that where the energy beam is fired from but it's like a huge garbage disposel as it's full of grinding,nashing spike like "teeth"!

ANTIFREEZE-"A HA HA HA HA NHA!!! WE GOT EM' NOW"!

TOBY-"So long General"!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-09-14 17:31:14 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *he smirks then enters a few command codes. The Helios engines are at full power and he engages the warp drive. The Helios flies past the garbage disposal so fast, the backlash energy causes the teeth and the disposal to be destroyed. The Helios then disappears from the Doomsday ships sensors...It vanished!*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-09-15 14:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Toby and Antifreeze get blown out of there seats! And down on the bridge Hate King was fighting Ultra Love King in a war like robot suit! When the backlash energy hits the Doomsday ship it gets pushed and Hate King's robot death suit stumbles giving Ultra Love King the chance he needs to crack the glass between him and his Brother!

HATE KING-"WHAT WAS THAT"!? O_O'

UL.LOVE KING-"That would have been my good friend General Bardak"!

Ultra Love King blasts the Hate King's suit in the chest! It starts to fizzle and crackle and Hate King ejects himself before it explodes!

HATE KING-"No Matter I STILL HAVE ESMERALDA MAW HA HA HA HA HA"!!!

Hate King flys back to his control room in his mini ship!

HATE KING-"ALL SYSTEMS FULL POWER! FIRE EVERYTHING WE GOT ON THE BRIDGE MAW HA HA HA HA HA"!!!!

ESMERALDA-"Y-your insane".....

HATE KING-"I'll gladly take out my beloved ship if it'll get rid of my meddling Brother once and for all"!

TOBY-"Where's Bardork"?

ANTIFREEZE-"He vanished"..

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-09-21 17:12:28 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *the Helios exited his warp drive and appeared behind the mini-ship. Bardak soon exited from the shadows of HATE-KING's control room. Before HATE-KING realized it, Bardak charged and punched the HATE-KING with some of his might, causing HATE-KING to smash into a near-by wall. Bardak then transports ESMERALDA to LOVE-KING's position. Bardak then smashes the control panels then faces the HATE-KING*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-09-23 23:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Hate King gets up and cracks his next and looks at Bardak!

HATE KING-"Alright General Well played! You won"!

Love King hugs Esmeralda

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-09-24 06:57:02 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *uses his helmet to link with the Helios and then opens communications near LOVE-KING's position...all while arming himself and staying focused on HATE-KING* LOVE-KING...This is General Bardak, is everything alright?

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-10-04 23:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Love King responds....

LOVE KING-"I'm fine there General! Esmeralda is alright too! What about you"?

HATE KING-"Take a picture it'll last longer!(Hate King stands up and dusts himself off)...Nice Ship you got there Bardak,mind if I take for a little SPIN"!!!

Hate King points at one of his down pawn ships and flings it at Bardak! The ship is spining around as it's shot at Bardak!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-10-08 20:41:40 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *instantly uses the commands on the Helios to transport HATE-KING and himself to the LOVE-KINGs position. He commands the Helios to engage its engines and dodge the pawn ship. With the Helios safe, Bardak aims his sword the HATE-KINGS neck.*

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-10-10 22:43:00 +0000 UTC]

HATE KING-"ALRIGHT I SAID! You win...this round anyway..BUT I'LL BE BACK! MAW HA HA HA HA HA"!!!

Hate King disappears!

LOVE KING-"Thanks for all the help General! It'll be a long while before ol SlapHead can take his Doomsday ship out crusing again"! ^^

ESMERALDA-"Thank you very much Bardak"! ^^

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atomskmaster6 In reply to DaminGrimwood [2012-10-12 17:10:14 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: "Your Welcome!" *uses his BTR to transport TOBY and ANTIFREEZE to their location. Bardak then arms himself with his gun and sword. He aims his gun at ANTIFREEZE and aims his sword at TOBY* "What shall we do with these idiots, LOVE-KING?"

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DaminGrimwood In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-10-13 13:11:23 +0000 UTC]

TOBY-"WOAH!? HEY MAN!? Come on Bardak we had an adventure together remember"?

ANTIFREEZE-"WE WAS JUST FOLLOWING ORDERS!!! This is the 2nd damn time you've assulted me Bardak"!!!

LOVE KING-"I would have thought these two would have run off by now".. -_-'

ESMERALDA-"....Let them go...you want them out of Angel Falls and Hate King's been defeated again"!

TOBY-"She's got a point Alpoe..er..Alvo..what ever".....

ANTIFREEZE-"Yeah! Listen to her! We'll be good from now on! Cross our hearts".....

LOVE KING-"Doubt it"... -_-'

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The-Highlander [2012-05-03 16:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice ship, good to see it has plenty of dakka on it!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to The-Highlander [2012-05-09 14:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks..."Dakka"?

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The-Highlander In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-09 16:17:11 +0000 UTC]

You’re obviously not an ork fan then [link] !

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BelRhaza4017 [2012-05-03 01:48:50 +0000 UTC]

excellent pic of Helios, my friend; waiting to get a note from a new friend to see if I can use a pic of his for one of my Ocs as one of his personal aircraft; check it out at his account:
, can't miss it

again, Helios looks sweet

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atomskmaster6 In reply to BelRhaza4017 [2012-05-09 14:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I checked turbosolovey's gallery....Very Impressive Aircrafts. Interesting to see what your OC's aircraft will be

If you think the Helios was cool, wait until you see the other Republic ships I have waiting!!

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JamesE82 [2012-05-02 16:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Connie: *Looks skyward* β€œShowoff…”

Oh, you know this is awesome; my girl is just jealous.

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atomskmaster6 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-05-02 22:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...Honestly, after Connie seeing the Helios in action, I was hoping to hear ALOT more envy of Bardak's firepower, plotting to steal the Helios, or rage-talking about Bardak wasting the firepower on asteroids than terriost countries...Oh Well!

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JamesE82 In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-03 16:14:27 +0000 UTC]

She’s envious and has a nice bit of rage going, alright; looks like the Crimson Conservative can keep things to herself now and then.

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startingoutfromscrat [2012-05-02 09:40:07 +0000 UTC]

I can see a meteor shower from here!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to startingoutfromscrat [2012-05-02 22:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...thats interesting...all I can see is a dust cloud slowly burning up in the atmosphere from here

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Teri-Minx [2012-05-02 07:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely stunning image, I am jealous of your commission, LOL. Great to see the General is keeping his edge while protecting angel Falls.

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atomskmaster6 In reply to Teri-Minx [2012-05-02 22:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...more Helios and hopefully Republic ships are on their way! Wait...The ...jealous of my commission?

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cooltime17 [2012-05-02 07:33:46 +0000 UTC]

nice

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atomskmaster6 In reply to cooltime17 [2012-05-02 21:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! More Helios on the way!

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cooltime17 In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-03 07:47:39 +0000 UTC]

yay.

some some reason I think of a box shape or something like a cargo ship when I daydream, don't know why, so maybe that will stop

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TrekkieGal [2012-05-02 06:59:36 +0000 UTC]

I can see my House from here!

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atomskmaster6 In reply to TrekkieGal [2012-05-02 22:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Target acquired!

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TrekkieGal In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-03 01:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Good it's a Dump anyways.

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LoneStranger [2012-05-02 06:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Polygirl Oooh, how'd the tests go? Do the weapons work alright? Can I look them over? Does your ship need any upgrades? Can I examine your ship?

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atomskmaster6 In reply to LoneStranger [2012-05-02 22:12:48 +0000 UTC]

General Bardak: *sighs* "My weapons work fine, Poly! I'm sorry about they don't need any upgrades at the moment and you know I can't allow you to examine my ship. Thank you for your "eager" interest!"

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LoneStranger In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-02 22:21:55 +0000 UTC]

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Zespara [2012-05-02 04:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Very nice piece of art. I like it!

I do know that the good doctor is very intrigued by the general. Perhaps we could arrange a meeting?

Z

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atomskmaster6 In reply to Zespara [2012-05-02 22:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...more Helios and hopefully republic ships are on their way!

Sounds Interesting...What would the meeting be about?

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Zespara In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-02 22:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, the meeting is something that she is scheduling for every Guardian. A meet and greet with the team psychiatrist to determine a baseline reading and a psychological reading. Nothing too sinister.

I just have to get on the ball and start writing. I'm thinking that Polygirl will be the last one that I schedule. She may be the most difficult to read.

Dr. Hauptmann Don't worry, my handsome general. My assistant, Rebecca, will be there to assist us if need be.

Z

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atomskmaster6 In reply to Zespara [2012-05-02 22:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...Sounds like fun! When can we arrange the meeting?

Fair warning though, my General is not that easy to read

General Bardak: "Oh, that's a relief. I was worried their wouldn't be anyone around to help carry a body to the intense ward."

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Zespara In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-02 22:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I most definitely figure that he will be a tough read being an alien and all.

We can take it to notes and work on it from there. I'll be doing a series of these with the Guardians and even non-Guardians. It will probably be even more in-depth than any of the interviews that have been taking place the last couple of years.

Dr. Hauptmann The ICU? There will be no need for that unless you have something else in mind.

Z

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atomskmaster6 In reply to Zespara [2012-05-02 22:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Okay, note me when your ready!

General Bardak: "That depends how well our little meeting goes"

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Levia-the-Dragon [2012-05-02 03:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Heh, crisis averted... what was that about new weapons though? Who was technically skilled enough to add them to the helios?

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atomskmaster6 In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2012-05-02 22:02:13 +0000 UTC]

THanks..until the next threat arrives

Its not a new weapon, Its a weapon upgrade... His ship's weapons can do more damage, less recharge time, less power consumption, etc. Also, it was Bardak who upgraded the Helios weapon systems, by himself.

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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to atomskmaster6 [2012-05-03 11:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh... impressive that he's such a techie despite being more a soldier from what I've seen.

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MarshalAdmiralQ [2012-05-01 22:36:51 +0000 UTC]

then the Borg showed up >

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atomskmaster6 In reply to MarshalAdmiralQ [2012-05-02 21:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Then its time to pull out the Helios's REALLY big guns

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