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Ask-ArthurKirklandRP — Cow Boys And Pirates... ._.'
Published: 2012-08-02 14:39:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 714; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 16
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I Had to re upload this :l ~Ok!, So uh.. if you where on that join me i had yesterday you will probably recognise this!, I Didn't want to post it.. but if i didn't that means 3+ hours of work is gone s.. i posted it anyway >.>
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all i read was cowboys at first and then i suspected it to be cowboys and angek and then i suspected there to be britania angel and america xD
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Awww XD Reminds me of our Drama exam. Good times!
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((Waaah~ It's so cute >///< I really love it!~))
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(( I saw there's already a critique monster down there in the comments. But they didn't point out some things that i would have liked to been pointed out. Like, things that are not in the background. >:3
Er, don't hate me for saying this, but i believe Arthur's hand is backwards, if that is indeed his left hand. Take a pencil and do the pose that Arthur is doing with your left hand and you'll probably see that it's quite uncomfortable to do a pose where his palm is able to be shown. I think it should be that his palm shouldn't be seen and his thumb shouldn't be over his sword yet underneath. This probably doesn't make sense.
The colouring is good as ever.
The eyes are great, a wonderful experiment.
Alfred's hands also look a little strange, but it makes sense.
Rating: 90%
>:3 ))
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Ah!, Too many critique monsters! *hides in box again* XD
Ah I see.. Hm.. Well i might correct them if i can be bothered >.> But thanks for pointing it out! 
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Just a little quick critique: (Hope you accept it) You should work a little bit more on the backgrounds, trying to make them a little more vivid, and less blurry, like the rocks on Alfreds side, and make the water look a little more waterish. Aside from that, i think it is very good!
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Backgrounds are my rival XD But thanks i'll try and work on that in the future ^.^
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Ohh you uploaded it c: It came out very nice n.n
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