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Okay, September 2011 is officially the "Chakra Page month", with five, and I say, FIVE pages
That's a record Sooooo, here's what happens when Steel gets mad :3 He ends up randomly attacking a random wolf who wears a turban, randomly stubling around and headbutting a random tree. And randomly dying from it. Randomly.
I don't really like panel 4 :/ Steel's pose is awkward (but tell me, WHEN hasn't it been? XD), and the overall effect I gave to it is lame
Bad Arvy.But aparts from that, I'm satisfied with the whole composition
I hope you like it Characters & art (c)
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I finally remembered to use this awesome feauture. Alright, where to begin? First of all, this is deffinatly the most EPIC page yet. The poses are very unique and your body language is pretty excellent! I especially love the first panel. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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1. You could overlap his backlegs to his forelegs, to show that he is all hunched up.
2. You could draw the back legs a bit smaller.
And in the last panel, Orca's eyes are a bit large as well.
Other than that, you've done a fine job and I do look forward to more. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Oh my, thank you so much for this critique my dear!
Also, thanks a lot for the suggestions about panel 3!
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You're welcome, I'm glad to help.
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*Squints at this page, then back at the latest*
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I was doing the same thing XD
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Oh, okay. Wow I have a dirty mind. :/
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Now the question is why the turban?
FIND OUT ON NEXT TIME, ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS FLIP THE PAGE
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It seems like turbans are better than gurad dogs.
now I want one
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All that.. to die... from a TREE! Wow. Steel the mighty, tree the mightier!
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LOOKIE HERE KIDS!get UR killer turban for 10$,you won't regret it!it will protect you from the BIG BAD GUYS!
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Ohoho that'd be an awesome thing to buy XD
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Nope, brother's cellphone XD
No way they work to fix it on a Sunday XD They told me it should be fixed tomorrow
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