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Published: 2008-09-11 23:53:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 30837; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 747
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Worked on the type and added a kanji symbol (flipped the "H" character and remade the x-height), just wanted to see how it works. Thank you for all the feedback and favourites!Good luck to all!!
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ha, too many versions! 
i'd say that sometimes it's better to decide to show just one or two versions, even if you aren't sure whether they are the best... two many stuff makes people panic from having too many possibilities and too much decision-making to do.
otherwise, I like the logo. I guess I like the uncrossed version more, it's cleaner and more legible. The double-cross symbol does kind of look like slovak national symbol, but how many people does know how does slovak national symbol actually look like, right? 
all in all, I like it. it's not extremely progressive or shocking, but after all that's perhaps the good thing about it. Execution is great, as always.
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Thanks for your elaborate comment, Raven. Actually there are only two versions for each set of characters (4 total). At this stage I agree with the question about the symbol even though it is a mere coincidence. Let's see what they think of it. Cheers.
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It is not a font, it was hand drawn.
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This is awesome work! My favourite one is the clean-negative version but everything looks fantastic!
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Thanks for your comment/opinion
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Clever. I like the flip of the "h". I like the cleaner version...more readable :-]
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Thanks my friend, it was based on your feedback from the previous sketch, that I thought of reducing the "noise" in the type.
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:-]
I'm glad that I could help!
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don't you think the symbol should be flipped 90 degrees right, so that it will form an H, like Hizoku ?
Great work none the less
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I thought of that at first. Then I realized it was too obvious and I flipped the H and it looked good from a cultural / graphic point of view, it looks much more like a japanese character
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Fine!
Look like logo for some ninja corporation)
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Second type is much better - you can actually read it
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That's what I'm talkin about! I really like the small rounded one in negative over the name with the line. I'm really thinkin in banned you from DeviantArt, you're makin us look like retards with the logos hahaha, 
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Thanks for your comment, it made me laugh. I am glad I can inspire other people, I always look to other people's good work as inspiration
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Looks good. I prefer the text without the line through it. I'm glad you went with the kanji-like symbol. Ninja stars are too over-used. Good job and nice layout as always.
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I agree and thanks for the comment!
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