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Apoca-ritz — Too Close For Comfort-Prologue
Published: 2008-04-12 22:32:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description                                  For a time I couldn’t move....

I just stared at it, amazed and horrified.
   
   I could feel the pit of my stomach dance up into my throat. I let everything out, shaking as I fell to my knees.
     
        Nothing was left, except for that emptiness in my chest, but soon it became a squeezing sensation, slowly choking my lungs.
          
              There was a pin tickling feeling around my eyes that spread into my skin and to my feet.
                
                Black splotches fogged my vision as I weakly reached out for the hand. I needed to feel it once more, the way it fit perfectly in mine. The way the warmth spread from the palm to my own, I needed to feel complete once more before it was violently ripped from me. Before everything ripped out from me, from under my feet so that I would fall and come crashing down, once more.
        
                           I softly intertwined my fingers with its own; a serene calmness filled me, knowing this was it.

                                  The numbness took over and so my consciousness tucked itself away and let sleep possess me....
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Comments: 4

RidiculousRonin [2008-04-13 18:50:50 +0000 UTC]

this is prolly my fave thing of yours so far, keep writing and ill keep reading

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Apoca-ritz In reply to RidiculousRonin [2008-04-13 21:03:42 +0000 UTC]


thanks a lot

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Apoca-ritz In reply to RidiculousRonin [2008-04-13 21:02:52 +0000 UTC]


thanks a lot

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RidiculousRonin In reply to Apoca-ritz [2008-04-13 21:57:34 +0000 UTC]

np i really like your writing so im not lying lol

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